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I love the MC's way of doing things, the development of the story is very detailed, everything is represented but the protagonists' remarks are too long
only on the chapter after mha, but honestly, this is one of the few fanfic that I truly believe is peak most fanfic have the mc have no character development and if so is so little it doesn't matter but this fic did character development so much better then other fics so thank you for the opportunity to read this masterpiece
Came here after the marvel rivals release to get some good marvel content since the mcu has been... meh. didn't expect to get a peak tier novel though. It took a week to catch up to the latest release (ch 97) and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you author, for putting in all the effort and love you have for this story <3
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Dude, if you want to read a DOCTORAL THESIS in every chapter, then you're in the right place because holy shit, my book is fucking huge, every chapter the author slammed his finger on the keyboard without any mercy with his keyboard, RIP EVERY CHAPTER and without mercy and with his readers with this abysmal text that's so long. PS - THE STORY ITSELF, THE CHARACTER BUILDING AND THE WHOLE THING IS A RATING OF 10 STARS OUT OF 5 STARS. PS - AUTHOR, IN THE NEXT NOVELS, HAVE MORE MERCY ON YOUR READERS, WE JUST WANT TO SPEND TIME, NOT A WHOLE LIFE, READING EACH CHAPTER, OK?
Brasileiro aqui mandou muito bem gostei muito lança mais ai pra nois espero que você não se importe com as criticas do outro pois estou fascinado na história 😆😆😀😀😲
An excellent wish fulfillment story. The writing is good, managing to convey well enough the correct feelings for the situations, the gacha system is cool and gives good things (no exaggeration) to the MC, and the MC is one of the few protagonists of this type of story who is really smart without becoming a psychopath Edgy or Chinese protagonist, he is a good Guy in general. I confess that I was a little wary about the boku no hero arc or him getting powers from there, but it was a good, short arc, yielded a romantic development and also a cool character for the MC.
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very good story like it a lot what i would like is some more powerful summons or assimilation instead of doing superman you could do a viltrumite and you do choose characters like Daniel park from lookism as well as grid from overgeared as well as obtaining the nano machine from the novel nano machine. Just so ides for potential future chapters.
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bro I think you should see redakai cartoon there something you can get for gacha
I really love this story and its world-building the only problem I have with it is the bipolar MC. he constantly switches from be and angsty edge lord where only he can handle problems and it up to him to make the big decisions, to someone with an actual personality and is likable, makes jokes and want to spend time with his love ones, then he goes back to being the loner edge lord.
This is the best book I've ever read in my life. And I also have a very specific question as a fan of MLP, I wonder if Hector gets any alicorns in gacha, he will assimilate right? And will he get a cutie mark? What will it look like?
now i remember why i dropped this.The insufferable angsty nonsensical monologues with references to comics and the cartoonish sense of justice, morality, meaning, value that is constantly brought up with a serious tone as if they are profoundly mysterious truths.....
The only grip I have is that the grammar is immersion breaking. Also the random Portuguese(or is it spanish?) here and there is confusing. Perhaps, putting the story in a Grammar Checker will fix all those problems.
Chapters are long which is good but the mc in this story have so much monologue that it drives me crazy, I am like just do what you want to do and stop with the philosophy class.
This is looking to be cool series and this is a test 😎 dang this is taking to finish this comment 😁😁😁😁😁[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=recommend][img=recommend] shit those emojis don't work on pc
honestly I find it interesting , the author writing style different but in a good way ,the only thing I will say is he should check his grammar and spellings
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Hi Evans_Duality! I just wanted to leave you a comment to tell you how much I liked your story. The plot is fascinating and has me completely hooked. Your writing is amazing and the way you develop the characters has me waiting for the next chapter, especially the way you use Gacha without going overboard like I've seen in other stories. The effort and dedication you put into each chapter is noticeable and that makes your story even more special. Thanks for sharing it, I can't wait to read more and see how it all continues. Keep writing, because you really have great talent! A hug and thank you so much for the amazing work you do.
This is such a good fanfic! The MC is such a good character and I like how you don't make him a Spider-Man type hero or even a Superman type. You show the realistic but dark side of being a hero and bring up good points through the MC of the reality of heroing. How the MC does not just operate in New York or even the US but is known as a global superhero is something I agree with. This shows initiative and actual dedication to being a hero. I also enjoy the fact that the MC has kids😂. Not many fanfics I've read have ever breached this topic until it is necessary or far into the distant future where the story is either ending or through a time-skip. All in all, this is a very good story and is one of my favorites right now. Side Note: I like how you didn't disregard Mary Jane. I get why people don't like her. But I chalk it up to the writers who always somehow have a thing for making Peter Parker miserable. Which mostly involves ruining his personal life and the relationships he's built. But honestly, I can also see that sometimes he is at fault for losing those things too. And honestly, I didn't think the Gacha would do that well in this fanfic. But I am so glad I was wrong. It is doing pretty good and I enjoy the characters the MC has obtained from the Gacha so far as well as the universal traveling stuff.
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Super nice story, i would like to see the main character committing more mistakes, i know that he prepares for everything, but i really want him getting problems he cant just cheat away, his mistakes must have consequences. When he meet Cyttorak, he really should have faced some consequences, some damage, some drawback to meet him, anything, same with Balasco final explosion, everything is inconsequential for the main character, and that is bad, very very bad. Main reason its not 5 stars, reduced it in character design and story development.
mano, tu poderia mandar ele pra um mundo souls like(a serie souls, demon souls, sekiro ou Elden ring)?
Should be renamed to MHA gacha, or just MHA, as it doesn't have much to do with marvel or gacha. The story and mc are all over the place and grammatical mistakes are rampant in every paragraph.
I will be honest. The Power system is Good 👍 But, the MC, with his Endless Monologues, and repeated good vs bad crap really annoying. It covers 80% of the chapters. The pacing is also Very slow, its been so much ranting and chapters and he is still only been here for a few months.
Perfeito ................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the MC's way of doing things, the development of the story is very detailed, everything is represented but the protagonists' remarks are too long
only on the chapter after mha, but honestly, this is one of the few fanfic that I truly believe is peak most fanfic have the mc have no character development and if so is so little it doesn't matter but this fic did character development so much better then other fics so thank you for the opportunity to read this masterpiece
Came here after the marvel rivals release to get some good marvel content since the mcu has been... meh. didn't expect to get a peak tier novel though. It took a week to catch up to the latest release (ch 97) and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you author, for putting in all the effort and love you have for this story <3
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Dude, if you want to read a DOCTORAL THESIS in every chapter, then you're in the right place because holy shit, my book is fucking huge, every chapter the author slammed his finger on the keyboard without any mercy with his keyboard, RIP EVERY CHAPTER and without mercy and with his readers with this abysmal text that's so long. PS - THE STORY ITSELF, THE CHARACTER BUILDING AND THE WHOLE THING IS A RATING OF 10 STARS OUT OF 5 STARS. PS - AUTHOR, IN THE NEXT NOVELS, HAVE MORE MERCY ON YOUR READERS, WE JUST WANT TO SPEND TIME, NOT A WHOLE LIFE, READING EACH CHAPTER, OK?
Brasileiro aqui mandou muito bem gostei muito lança mais ai pra nois espero que você não se importe com as criticas do outro pois estou fascinado na história 😆😆😀😀😲
An excellent wish fulfillment story. The writing is good, managing to convey well enough the correct feelings for the situations, the gacha system is cool and gives good things (no exaggeration) to the MC, and the MC is one of the few protagonists of this type of story who is really smart without becoming a psychopath Edgy or Chinese protagonist, he is a good Guy in general. I confess that I was a little wary about the boku no hero arc or him getting powers from there, but it was a good, short arc, yielded a romantic development and also a cool character for the MC.
ネタバレを明かす very good story like it a lot what i would like is some more powerful summons or assimilation instead of doing superman you could do a viltrumite and you do choose characters like Daniel park from lookism as well as grid from overgeared as well as obtaining the nano machine from the novel nano machine. Just so ides for potential future chapters.
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bro I think you should see redakai cartoon there something you can get for gacha
I really love this story and its world-building the only problem I have with it is the bipolar MC. he constantly switches from be and angsty edge lord where only he can handle problems and it up to him to make the big decisions, to someone with an actual personality and is likable, makes jokes and want to spend time with his love ones, then he goes back to being the loner edge lord.
This is the best book I've ever read in my life. And I also have a very specific question as a fan of MLP, I wonder if Hector gets any alicorns in gacha, he will assimilate right? And will he get a cutie mark? What will it look like?
now i remember why i dropped this.The insufferable angsty nonsensical monologues with references to comics and the cartoonish sense of justice, morality, meaning, value that is constantly brought up with a serious tone as if they are profoundly mysterious truths.....
The only grip I have is that the grammar is immersion breaking. Also the random Portuguese(or is it spanish?) here and there is confusing. Perhaps, putting the story in a Grammar Checker will fix all those problems.
Chapters are long which is good but the mc in this story have so much monologue that it drives me crazy, I am like just do what you want to do and stop with the philosophy class.
This is looking to be cool series and this is a test 😎 dang this is taking to finish this comment 😁😁😁😁😁[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=recommend][img=recommend] shit those emojis don't work on pc
honestly I find it interesting , the author writing style different but in a good way ,the only thing I will say is he should check his grammar and spellings
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Hi Evans_Duality! I just wanted to leave you a comment to tell you how much I liked your story. The plot is fascinating and has me completely hooked. Your writing is amazing and the way you develop the characters has me waiting for the next chapter, especially the way you use Gacha without going overboard like I've seen in other stories. The effort and dedication you put into each chapter is noticeable and that makes your story even more special. Thanks for sharing it, I can't wait to read more and see how it all continues. Keep writing, because you really have great talent! A hug and thank you so much for the amazing work you do.
This is such a good fanfic! The MC is such a good character and I like how you don't make him a Spider-Man type hero or even a Superman type. You show the realistic but dark side of being a hero and bring up good points through the MC of the reality of heroing. How the MC does not just operate in New York or even the US but is known as a global superhero is something I agree with. This shows initiative and actual dedication to being a hero. I also enjoy the fact that the MC has kids😂. Not many fanfics I've read have ever breached this topic until it is necessary or far into the distant future where the story is either ending or through a time-skip. All in all, this is a very good story and is one of my favorites right now. Side Note: I like how you didn't disregard Mary Jane. I get why people don't like her. But I chalk it up to the writers who always somehow have a thing for making Peter Parker miserable. Which mostly involves ruining his personal life and the relationships he's built. But honestly, I can also see that sometimes he is at fault for losing those things too. And honestly, I didn't think the Gacha would do that well in this fanfic. But I am so glad I was wrong. It is doing pretty good and I enjoy the characters the MC has obtained from the Gacha so far as well as the universal traveling stuff.
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Super nice story, i would like to see the main character committing more mistakes, i know that he prepares for everything, but i really want him getting problems he cant just cheat away, his mistakes must have consequences. When he meet Cyttorak, he really should have faced some consequences, some damage, some drawback to meet him, anything, same with Balasco final explosion, everything is inconsequential for the main character, and that is bad, very very bad. Main reason its not 5 stars, reduced it in character design and story development.
mano, tu poderia mandar ele pra um mundo souls like(a serie souls, demon souls, sekiro ou Elden ring)?
Should be renamed to MHA gacha, or just MHA, as it doesn't have much to do with marvel or gacha. The story and mc are all over the place and grammatical mistakes are rampant in every paragraph.
I will be honest. The Power system is Good 👍 But, the MC, with his Endless Monologues, and repeated good vs bad crap really annoying. It covers 80% of the chapters. The pacing is also Very slow, its been so much ranting and chapters and he is still only been here for a few months.
Perfeito ................................................................................................................................................................................................