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章 6: the life of Mary the lonely nurse (part 3/ Rewriten )

Charles PVs

Soon I'm at the famous Bar, called Diabo Azul, it's famous in the city for the drink with the same name, I don't know if the name of the bar is because of the drink or if the drink is named after the bar, all I know is that this bar has been open since I was a boy.

I entered the bar and found the guys and they are not alone, each one is with a girl at the tables talking and laughing, soon I realized that I was going to be alone today.

I sat at the counter and ordered a Vodka with lemon and started drinking, after the third drink it was time to leave, I turned to the waiter and asked for the bill, paid and got up, when I left I bumped into a blonde, she was wearing long heels, the shoe broke, she fell and I ended up falling on top of her.

I arrived at Diabo Azul with Lala, soon we went in and found the house full, it was a Friday and almost everyone wasn't going to work tomorrow so they were drowning their frustrations, sorrows, and everything else!

I turned to Lala and said, "Girl, this place is packed! You can't even move!

There's nowhere to sit!"

Lala laughed and said, "Relax woman! I've got it all! Come with me!"

I followed Lala to a table with three guys and a girl, Lala had already run into her boyfriend Marcos' arms.

Marcos was a police officer, he worked as a second-in-command at the precinct, he was a deputy sheriff, and Lala has been arranging dates for me with her friends since we got back to town.

We sat at the table and Lala already introduced me to everyone, some I already knew and others I didn't, soon the night passed, and as I imagined Lala wanted me to meet the new Sheriff, the famous Sheriff Swagger.

He was late and I had already had a lot of juice, I decided to go to the bathroom and then go to the bar to pay the bill and end the night.

Leaving the bathroom I stop to get a juice when I was about to turn someone bumped into me, my shoe broke and we fell, it was in that fall that my life changed.

After I got a good look at the girl I dropped, I froze.

She was divine, my heart couldn't take it, everything in the world turned gray and only she had color, her face showed discomfort and finally I noticed that my hand landed on her breast.

"Sorry miss!! I didn't mean to!!, I didn't mean to harass you, I'm not drunk, it was an accident if you want to press charges I understand and I'll do my best to cooperate!" Charles says with all the firmness of an ex-military

"Calm down, I wasn't paying too much attention, ok, you don't seem like the type of person who attacks women on street corners!

Let's forget about that too, my name is Mary, what's yours?" says Mary trying to forget that her chest was touched by a man for the first time.

"Aah! sorry I didn't introduce myself earlier my name is Charles Fitzgerald Swagger I'm the new sheriff but you can call me Charles and when I'm on duty I'll ask you to call me Sheriff Swagger," says Charles nervously.

"Fine! So you're the famous sheriff everyone talks about!" Says Mary still on the floor

"I'm the sheriff, yes, but I didn't know I was famous! How strange!" Charles says still a little stiff...

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(A/N Brethren, it is much more difficult to rewrite a story than to simply write it. PS: hand over your POWER STONES!)


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