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at least better than nothing........btw.. you should continue writing this .....and continue to improve ......best of luck Mr author. ........
Novel takes things from very similar novels and they tear it apart doing so plus the fact I started reading this due to the fact it said dragons and instead I got a demon more specifically a succubus that the mc by chapter still doesn’t give her a name he pretty much just says hey or you
it's similar to other novels with a way over powered mc, but it still is interesting. I'm hoping to see a little balancing and some mc development but I'm hoping it gets picked up
I don't trust anything that has SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS RANK in the title cos it's usually a trash story. fndkdkkdndndndjdjxjxkxxjd
Not what I like but could continue reading it to see if it gets better. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
Bro webnovel really be puttin trash like this still on trial read man? Cause this ain’t unique it’s a copy of many before it but they all still somehow end up in the trial reads webnovel man y’all need to step up your game cause this stuff is getting mad repetitive
why is it called devils den when it's the home land of dragons. h Mr Hsu C4 HD nd is if tu x do nff do f di if do f do if to d go g up on go uhhhhh
This one is really bad. Unoriginal, unimpressive and quite frankly just pure unsolicited garbage. There is not a single thing about this novel (aside from it's adequate translation quality) that is of value in the slightest. Everything about this is execrable, from the core concepts, ideas, story and even the execution. I don't have much to say about this, if webnovel didn't insist on having a minimum character count for reviews my review would just be: Rubbish. 0/5.
Devil's den produce Dragons?!!! Yeah no thanks. I can already tell this is going to be an annoyingly messed up novel. So good luck for those that want to read this novel.
bad immitation of multiple same genre novels... atleast some immitation give some reading experience.but here mc if is brain-dead.and here author trying to destroy this genre marvelously why 3 star .... just make sure my review will stay here...
ok this story is just an imitation of the ranking of the kings anime + tribe I know you like the anime due to your name but at least try to be original in someway
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High Expectations for this novel but this is an imitation of other novels................................................ ...........................
MC is not developed well. He's basically an empty puppet in the hands of the author with very little personality. Pacing and a sense of time are off. MC is very overpowered. So much so that the story is dull. Honestly I can list a lot more that I don't like about this story and I'm struggling to list anything I really like about it. Could be an interesting story if rewritten and taken as a very rough first draft but it is not in a state that I think is worth reading.
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I like the story am definitely waiting for more to come out. keep up the good work on this one. I hope this one Gets selected so I can read more after the pilot chapters.
Tryed to write a review but accidentally deleted it and I’m too lazy to rewrite it so I’ll just say its a boring novel and leave it like that.
This is a badly done imitation of Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start. How can these authors on Webnovel can churn out this kind of low quality stuff consistently I'll never understand .
Author give side characters some good sounding abilities and has to give the mc not one but two op abilities, major L. Also why is one ability called devil den if it gives the mc control of legendary dragons.
Sign me up. ..............,,....................................................,...............................................................,...............................
I want to read this badly. I love these types of books. Also if this isn't chosen can someone at least send me the raw. I'm hoping to see another type like this.
Interesting a novel about kingdombuilding I am looking forward to it.I hope it gets picked up.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
not much expectations but still Raw...... 🥳🥰🥰💩💔💩🤔🗿⚡⚡😍🥰🤪💔🤪⚡🤪⚡🤪😮🥰🥰😳🥰😮😗🤪😳🥰🥰😂🤪🥰😗😍🤪🥶💔😳😔💩💩😇🗿🤩💩😳💩🥶😔😃😇😃⚡
Ayo how tf am I second? ........................................................................................................................................
Wish fullfilment kingdom building. Face slapping and exploiting broken game mechanics. No real challenge so far. Also wrong description, no dragons only demons and subdued indies.
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at least better than nothing........btw.. you should continue writing this .....and continue to improve ......best of luck Mr author. ........
Novel takes things from very similar novels and they tear it apart doing so plus the fact I started reading this due to the fact it said dragons and instead I got a demon more specifically a succubus that the mc by chapter still doesn’t give her a name he pretty much just says hey or you
it's similar to other novels with a way over powered mc, but it still is interesting. I'm hoping to see a little balancing and some mc development but I'm hoping it gets picked up
I don't trust anything that has SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS RANK in the title cos it's usually a trash story. fndkdkkdndndndjdjxjxkxxjd
Not what I like but could continue reading it to see if it gets better. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
Bro webnovel really be puttin trash like this still on trial read man? Cause this ain’t unique it’s a copy of many before it but they all still somehow end up in the trial reads webnovel man y’all need to step up your game cause this stuff is getting mad repetitive
why is it called devils den when it's the home land of dragons. h Mr Hsu C4 HD nd is if tu x do nff do f di if do f do if to d go g up on go uhhhhh
This one is really bad. Unoriginal, unimpressive and quite frankly just pure unsolicited garbage. There is not a single thing about this novel (aside from it's adequate translation quality) that is of value in the slightest. Everything about this is execrable, from the core concepts, ideas, story and even the execution. I don't have much to say about this, if webnovel didn't insist on having a minimum character count for reviews my review would just be: Rubbish. 0/5.
Devil's den produce Dragons?!!! Yeah no thanks. I can already tell this is going to be an annoyingly messed up novel. So good luck for those that want to read this novel.
bad immitation of multiple same genre novels... atleast some immitation give some reading experience.but here mc if is brain-dead.and here author trying to destroy this genre marvelously why 3 star .... just make sure my review will stay here...
ok this story is just an imitation of the ranking of the kings anime + tribe I know you like the anime due to your name but at least try to be original in someway
Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
High Expectations for this novel but this is an imitation of other novels................................................ ...........................
MC is not developed well. He's basically an empty puppet in the hands of the author with very little personality. Pacing and a sense of time are off. MC is very overpowered. So much so that the story is dull. Honestly I can list a lot more that I don't like about this story and I'm struggling to list anything I really like about it. Could be an interesting story if rewritten and taken as a very rough first draft but it is not in a state that I think is worth reading.
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I like the story am definitely waiting for more to come out. keep up the good work on this one. I hope this one Gets selected so I can read more after the pilot chapters.
Tryed to write a review but accidentally deleted it and I’m too lazy to rewrite it so I’ll just say its a boring novel and leave it like that.
This is a badly done imitation of Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start. How can these authors on Webnovel can churn out this kind of low quality stuff consistently I'll never understand .
Author give side characters some good sounding abilities and has to give the mc not one but two op abilities, major L. Also why is one ability called devil den if it gives the mc control of legendary dragons.
Sign me up. ..............,,....................................................,...............................................................,...............................
I want to read this badly. I love these types of books. Also if this isn't chosen can someone at least send me the raw. I'm hoping to see another type like this.
Interesting a novel about kingdombuilding I am looking forward to it.I hope it gets picked up.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
not much expectations but still Raw...... 🥳🥰🥰💩💔💩🤔🗿⚡⚡😍🥰🤪💔🤪⚡🤪⚡🤪😮🥰🥰😳🥰😮😗🤪😳🥰🥰😂🤪🥰😗😍🤪🥶💔😳😔💩💩😇🗿🤩💩😳💩🥶😔😃😇😃⚡
Ayo how tf am I second? ........................................................................................................................................
Wish fullfilment kingdom building. Face slapping and exploiting broken game mechanics. No real challenge so far. Also wrong description, no dragons only demons and subdued indies.