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Probably one of the more interesting and unique Overlord fanfictions being posted (except mine muahahaha!) Anyways, back to the topic. The story has plenty of potential and can go a multitude of ways from how the mc is setup. For example, Doyle's relationship with Luci☆Fer, a future Nazarick member. He can either join, be allies or mortal enemies with Ainz Ooal Gown. Any option has great potential that can be exploited. The world building as of now is great and I hope it continues as Doyle is transported to the new world. Maybe he transports with nazarick or on the other side of the continent. He'll, maybe Doyle could be transported in the past or future. The possibilities are endless. As Doyle's is still in YGGDRASIL, I do hope that there will be future character interactions. Examples include possibly meeting Surshana or the Greed Kings during his quest to getting stronger. Maybe these interactions can alter history in the new world. For example, helping Surshana in a raid might put Doyle in the Theocracy's sacred books as a friend of the God's. Overall, a great read. However, I do wish the author posts more often xD. (I'm also glad my book helped inspire yours. My next chapter will probably release Sunday - Monday xD)
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Amazing Take on Overlord adding a New Race is also fun being a Ghost is super OP and its Just one of the many maybe Future OP abilities of the MC i am already looking Forward to more 10/10 would recommend.
noharem will be great, Romance is best seen near the end, Considering that MC is a ghost, it would be very strange if he had hormones in his body.
I like this story a lot. Overlord is one of my absolute favorite animes, and I think you wrote this story beautifully and smoothly. I hope you will continue writing this story!
I won't lie. This book isn't the best out there, although I consider it one of the higher books. Due to it having a somewhat realistic Mc like being abuses and not having again the best of life. It shows the bad side of people and life but shows how it can be better with other people etc. Please continue this book month it's really a good and different perspective on Mc's.
It IS a veryy good book i enjoy Reading it thank you For writing Like it verry much pls contuin with it even if you have down phases pls keep writing it and thank you For writing somthing so amazinh 😁☺️😁☺️😁👌👌😁☺️😁
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Without a doubt one of the best Overlord fics. I’m definitely adding it to my collection…
Alright, let me see if I can spit out a good review, since most recent ones are just begging the author to return. Summary and Star Ratings are at the bottom if you just wanna skip the explanations. Okay let's start things off. Writing Quality, it's great, simple as that. The author writes pretty amazingly and it really draws you in, every chapter is a real treat. Story development is also pretty solid, it moves forward at a decent pace, with it not being like some Overlord novels that have the MC go from lvl 1 to 100 in half a chapter. In this novel you can actually see him grow in power and gain items, skills, and jobs. Character design is a bit iffy in my opinion. The MC has a general personality, and acts just about how you'd expect him to. But that's kinda it, he's not super memorable and it's easy to forget things about him. Updating Stability, boy oh boy. This novel is super bad with stability. From what I remember it used to be super consistent in its updates, problem is that the author recently vanished for several months with no heads up. Now the author has started a second, unique novel, If I were you I wouldn't really get too attatched, most authors that start their own novels usually tend to drop their fanfic novels to focus on their unique one. World background is easy, it's Overlord, meaning it's great. Author expands on Yggdrasil more than most novels, which is nice. Nothing much more to say than that. Summary time. Writing quality is great, pretty consistent in quality too, little to no errors. Story development is solid, it's not too fast or too slow usually. Character design is okay, MC is kinda forgettable, but generally leaves an okay impression. Updating Stability is bad, don't get your hopes up. World background is great, as almost all Overlord novels are. Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 Story Development: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.8/5 Updating Stability: 0.5/5 World Background: 4.5/5 Total Star Review: 3.7/5 I'd recommend giving it a read, but if the author goes MIA again, don't be too surprised. It's a good novel all things considered though.
The episode was great, I can't wait for the sequel. I voted for the episode. Angel Goddes bless your hands. 😘 ....................................................................................................................................
I love a good overlord story which isnt focusing on a harem. I wish the author would update it again but alas I shall suffer with no new overlord content
hey man.....i have read both the fanfics...im love them!! so i got high hopes for ur one......hope its good!
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very good story.loved it! But he makes us suffer as ever good overlord fanfic author does the time intervals between the episodes are soooo longgggg so agonizing. why do u do this to us?whyyyyyy
This is an amazing fan-fic, I hope it's continued. Also, in this case a harem is strongly advised against by me, at the least don't make it the focus of the story and don't make the members clingy and want attention every second. I still strongly advise against it. For Wholesomeness! -Wholesome Sect
A very interesting take on Overlord. At first, I wasn’t sure how I feel about MC having no real ‘physical’ body and being stuck within the game, but I guess that way we don’t have to waste time talking about rl problems lol. I love that the story is taking the time to explore Yggdrasil as a game. Frankly, the power levels of the NW is so weak even the most idiotic MC should easily survive and thrive in there so it’s waaaay more interesting to explore the game. Moreover, since most of the details from the original source pertaining to Yggdeasil are vague or missing, the fanfic author can do whatever they want. The race and class focus is also quite unique compared to other fanfics, hopefully, it’ll add more flavor to the story once MC enters the NW. Overall, it’s an easy read that’s pretty much enjoyable and satisfying. If you like Overlord, you should def try reading this fanfic X)!!
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I read that npc story you recommended and he’s on hiatus now because he’s got school and now I have no more chapters to read and now I’m sad. Realistic depiction of how I feel —> :( Also your story is very good
One of the best Overlord fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. Good pacing, interesting characters and stable updates. Hope you don't drop. Good work!
Really enjoying reading this. Great plot, great writing, character is awesome, And always leaving you wanting more. Can't wait to see where this one goes and hopefully you Can get a lot more reviews
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uhh, this is a novel full of sadness(in my opinion), if you are a person who can stand sadness, read it(sniff sniff) #poor_mc Writing Quality :5 🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background :3 ⭐⭐⭐
Ngl, this Fic has me hooked. I need more! The story’s pace is smooth and we get a look into what YGGDRASIL would have been like in the LN. I also love Doyles interaction with Lucifer. 10/10 would definitely recommend❗️
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So, Yes i did just give my own fic a 5 star. The story follows the path of the mc from before cannon. All the way back when the game, YGGDRASIL first began. Me as the author and also a reader, i along with everyone else hate a idiotic Mc so i made or atleast attempted to make a Mc who knows and has a plan for almost everything he does. Unlike Ainz, he actually has a plan. Aslo the Mc personality is not innocent nor Is he kind or nice, at least not to strangers. He does what he thinks would achieve his goals regardless or its morality. He can be manipulative, and evil as well as Honest and loyal. I use the novel/Anime/Webnovel for this fic. I also try my best to descibe why things happen as i know if i was the reader i would Also want to certain things but i dont info dump. I have a plan for this Fic and several things are already blueprinted in my mind so most things i will not be changing regardless of what readers suggest however, i am open to certain ideas so feel free to drop your thoughts in the comments. I Have an idea that i belive is orginal as i have not seen it put into an Overlord Fic but i have not read every Overlord fic out there so i may be wrong. I will not say yet since its not implimented yet and i dont want to spoil. If you find yourself interested then just give it a try. You may like it Or love it.
Probably one of the more interesting and unique Overlord fanfictions being posted (except mine muahahaha!) Anyways, back to the topic. The story has plenty of potential and can go a multitude of ways from how the mc is setup. For example, Doyle's relationship with Luci☆Fer, a future Nazarick member. He can either join, be allies or mortal enemies with Ainz Ooal Gown. Any option has great potential that can be exploited. The world building as of now is great and I hope it continues as Doyle is transported to the new world. Maybe he transports with nazarick or on the other side of the continent. He'll, maybe Doyle could be transported in the past or future. The possibilities are endless. As Doyle's is still in YGGDRASIL, I do hope that there will be future character interactions. Examples include possibly meeting Surshana or the Greed Kings during his quest to getting stronger. Maybe these interactions can alter history in the new world. For example, helping Surshana in a raid might put Doyle in the Theocracy's sacred books as a friend of the God's. Overall, a great read. However, I do wish the author posts more often xD. (I'm also glad my book helped inspire yours. My next chapter will probably release Sunday - Monday xD)
ネタバレを明かす Amazing Take on Overlord adding a New Race is also fun being a Ghost is super OP and its Just one of the many maybe Future OP abilities of the MC i am already looking Forward to more 10/10 would recommend.
noharem will be great, Romance is best seen near the end, Considering that MC is a ghost, it would be very strange if he had hormones in his body.
I like this story a lot. Overlord is one of my absolute favorite animes, and I think you wrote this story beautifully and smoothly. I hope you will continue writing this story!
I won't lie. This book isn't the best out there, although I consider it one of the higher books. Due to it having a somewhat realistic Mc like being abuses and not having again the best of life. It shows the bad side of people and life but shows how it can be better with other people etc. Please continue this book month it's really a good and different perspective on Mc's.
It IS a veryy good book i enjoy Reading it thank you For writing Like it verry much pls contuin with it even if you have down phases pls keep writing it and thank you For writing somthing so amazinh 😁☺️😁☺️😁👌👌😁☺️😁
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Without a doubt one of the best Overlord fics. I’m definitely adding it to my collection…
Alright, let me see if I can spit out a good review, since most recent ones are just begging the author to return. Summary and Star Ratings are at the bottom if you just wanna skip the explanations. Okay let's start things off. Writing Quality, it's great, simple as that. The author writes pretty amazingly and it really draws you in, every chapter is a real treat. Story development is also pretty solid, it moves forward at a decent pace, with it not being like some Overlord novels that have the MC go from lvl 1 to 100 in half a chapter. In this novel you can actually see him grow in power and gain items, skills, and jobs. Character design is a bit iffy in my opinion. The MC has a general personality, and acts just about how you'd expect him to. But that's kinda it, he's not super memorable and it's easy to forget things about him. Updating Stability, boy oh boy. This novel is super bad with stability. From what I remember it used to be super consistent in its updates, problem is that the author recently vanished for several months with no heads up. Now the author has started a second, unique novel, If I were you I wouldn't really get too attatched, most authors that start their own novels usually tend to drop their fanfic novels to focus on their unique one. World background is easy, it's Overlord, meaning it's great. Author expands on Yggdrasil more than most novels, which is nice. Nothing much more to say than that. Summary time. Writing quality is great, pretty consistent in quality too, little to no errors. Story development is solid, it's not too fast or too slow usually. Character design is okay, MC is kinda forgettable, but generally leaves an okay impression. Updating Stability is bad, don't get your hopes up. World background is great, as almost all Overlord novels are. Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 Story Development: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.8/5 Updating Stability: 0.5/5 World Background: 4.5/5 Total Star Review: 3.7/5 I'd recommend giving it a read, but if the author goes MIA again, don't be too surprised. It's a good novel all things considered though.
The episode was great, I can't wait for the sequel. I voted for the episode. Angel Goddes bless your hands. 😘 ....................................................................................................................................
I love a good overlord story which isnt focusing on a harem. I wish the author would update it again but alas I shall suffer with no new overlord content
hey man.....i have read both the fanfics...im love them!! so i got high hopes for ur one......hope its good!
uhh u good on update bro? ███╗░░░███╗░█████╗░████████╗████████╗██╗░░██╗███████╗░██╗░░░░░░░██╗ ███████╗██╗░░░██╗░█████╗░██╗░░██╗ ██╗░░░██╗ ████╗░████║██╔══██╗╚══██╔══╝╚══██╔══╝██║░░██║██╔════╝░██║░░██╗░░██║ ██╔════╝██║░░░██║██╔══██╗██║░██╔╝ ██║░░░██║ ██╔████╔██║███████║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░███████║█████╗░░░╚██╗████╗██╔╝ █████╗░░██║░░░██║██║░░╚═╝█████═╝░ ██║░░░██║ ██║╚██╔╝██║██╔══██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██╔══██║██╔══╝░░░░████╔═████║░ ██╔══╝░░██║░░░██║██║░░██╗██╔═██╗░ ██║░░░██║ ██║░╚═╝░██║██║░░██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██║░░██║███████╗░░╚██╔╝░╚██╔╝░ ██║░░░░░╚██████╔╝╚█████╔╝██║░╚██╗ ╚██████╔╝ ╚═╝░░░░░╚═╝╚═╝░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░░░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░╚═╝╚══════╝░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░ ╚═╝░░░░░░╚═════╝░░╚════╝░╚═╝░░╚═╝ ░╚═════╝░███╗░░░███╗░█████╗░████████╗████████╗██╗░░██╗███████╗░██╗░░░░░░░██╗ ███████╗██╗░░░██╗░█████╗░██╗░░██╗ ██╗░░░██╗ ████╗░████║██╔══██╗╚══██╔══╝╚══██╔══╝██║░░██║██╔════╝░██║░░██╗░░██║ ██╔════╝██║░░░██║██╔══██╗██║░██╔╝ ██║░░░██║ ██╔████╔██║███████║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░███████║█████╗░░░╚██╗████╗██╔╝ █████╗░░██║░░░██║██║░░╚═╝█████═╝░ ██║░░░██║ ██║╚██╔╝██║██╔══██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██╔══██║██╔══╝░░░░████╔═████║░ ██╔══╝░░██║░░░██║██║░░██╗██╔═██╗░ ██║░░░██║ ██║░╚═╝░██║██║░░██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██║░░██║███████╗░░╚██╔╝░╚██╔╝░ ██║░░░░░╚██████╔╝╚█████╔╝██║░╚██╗ ╚██████╔╝ ╚═╝░░░░░╚═╝╚═╝░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░░░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░╚═╝╚══════╝░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░ ╚═╝░░░░░░╚═════╝░░╚════╝░╚═╝░░╚═╝ ░╚═════╝░███╗░░░███╗░█████╗░████████╗████████╗██╗░░██╗███████╗░██╗░░░░░░░██╗ ███████╗██╗░░░██╗░█████╗░██╗░░██╗ ██╗░░░██╗ ████╗░████║██╔══██╗╚══██╔══╝╚══██╔══╝██║░░██║██╔════╝░██║░░██╗░░██║ ██╔════╝██║░░░██║██╔══██╗██║░██╔╝ ██║░░░██║ ██╔████╔██║███████║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░███████║█████╗░░░╚██╗████╗██╔╝ █████╗░░██║░░░██║██║░░╚═╝█████═╝░ ██║░░░██║ ██║╚██╔╝██║██╔══██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██╔══██║██╔══╝░░░░████╔═████║░ ██╔══╝░░██║░░░██║██║░░██╗██╔═██╗░ ██║░░░██║ ██║░╚═╝░██║██║░░██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██║░░██║███████╗░░╚██╔╝░╚██╔╝░ ██║░░░░░╚██████╔╝╚█████╔╝██║░╚██╗ ╚██████╔╝ ╚═╝░░░░░╚═╝╚═╝░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░░░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░╚═╝╚══════╝░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░ ╚═╝░░░░░░╚═════╝░░╚════╝░╚═╝░░╚═╝ ░╚═════╝░███╗░░░███╗░█████╗░████████╗████████╗██╗░░██╗███████╗░██╗░░░░░░░██╗ ███████╗██╗░░░██╗░█████╗░██╗░░██╗ ██╗░░░██╗ ████╗░████║██╔══██╗╚══██╔══╝╚══██╔══╝██║░░██║██╔════╝░██║░░██╗░░██║ ██╔════╝██║░░░██║██╔══██╗██║░██╔╝ ██║░░░██║ ██╔████╔██║███████║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░███████║█████╗░░░╚██╗████╗██╔╝ █████╗░░██║░░░██║██║░░╚═╝█████═╝░ ██║░░░██║ ██║╚██╔╝██║██╔══██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██╔══██║██╔══╝░░░░████╔═████║░ ██╔══╝░░██║░░░██║██║░░██╗██╔═██╗░ ██║░░░██║ ██║░╚═╝░██║██║░░██║░░░██║░░░░░░██║░░░██║░░██║███████╗░░╚██╔╝░╚██╔╝░ ██║░░░░░╚██████╔╝╚█████╔╝██║░╚██╗ ╚██████╔╝ ╚═╝░░░░░╚═╝╚═╝░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░░░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░╚═╝╚══════╝░░░╚═╝░░░╚═╝░░ ╚═╝░░░░░░╚═════╝░░╚════╝░╚═╝░░╚═╝ ░╚═════╝░
very good story.loved it! But he makes us suffer as ever good overlord fanfic author does the time intervals between the episodes are soooo longgggg so agonizing. why do u do this to us?whyyyyyy
This is an amazing fan-fic, I hope it's continued. Also, in this case a harem is strongly advised against by me, at the least don't make it the focus of the story and don't make the members clingy and want attention every second. I still strongly advise against it. For Wholesomeness! -Wholesome Sect
A very interesting take on Overlord. At first, I wasn’t sure how I feel about MC having no real ‘physical’ body and being stuck within the game, but I guess that way we don’t have to waste time talking about rl problems lol. I love that the story is taking the time to explore Yggdrasil as a game. Frankly, the power levels of the NW is so weak even the most idiotic MC should easily survive and thrive in there so it’s waaaay more interesting to explore the game. Moreover, since most of the details from the original source pertaining to Yggdeasil are vague or missing, the fanfic author can do whatever they want. The race and class focus is also quite unique compared to other fanfics, hopefully, it’ll add more flavor to the story once MC enters the NW. Overall, it’s an easy read that’s pretty much enjoyable and satisfying. If you like Overlord, you should def try reading this fanfic X)!!
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I read that npc story you recommended and he’s on hiatus now because he’s got school and now I have no more chapters to read and now I’m sad. Realistic depiction of how I feel —> :( Also your story is very good
One of the best Overlord fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. Good pacing, interesting characters and stable updates. Hope you don't drop. Good work!
Really enjoying reading this. Great plot, great writing, character is awesome, And always leaving you wanting more. Can't wait to see where this one goes and hopefully you Can get a lot more reviews
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uhh, this is a novel full of sadness(in my opinion), if you are a person who can stand sadness, read it(sniff sniff) #poor_mc Writing Quality :5 🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design :4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background :3 ⭐⭐⭐
Ngl, this Fic has me hooked. I need more! The story’s pace is smooth and we get a look into what YGGDRASIL would have been like in the LN. I also love Doyles interaction with Lucifer. 10/10 would definitely recommend❗️
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So, Yes i did just give my own fic a 5 star. The story follows the path of the mc from before cannon. All the way back when the game, YGGDRASIL first began. Me as the author and also a reader, i along with everyone else hate a idiotic Mc so i made or atleast attempted to make a Mc who knows and has a plan for almost everything he does. Unlike Ainz, he actually has a plan. Aslo the Mc personality is not innocent nor Is he kind or nice, at least not to strangers. He does what he thinks would achieve his goals regardless or its morality. He can be manipulative, and evil as well as Honest and loyal. I use the novel/Anime/Webnovel for this fic. I also try my best to descibe why things happen as i know if i was the reader i would Also want to certain things but i dont info dump. I have a plan for this Fic and several things are already blueprinted in my mind so most things i will not be changing regardless of what readers suggest however, i am open to certain ideas so feel free to drop your thoughts in the comments. I Have an idea that i belive is orginal as i have not seen it put into an Overlord Fic but i have not read every Overlord fic out there so i may be wrong. I will not say yet since its not implimented yet and i dont want to spoil. If you find yourself interested then just give it a try. You may like it Or love it.