Reviews of Mafia Boss' Pet: Pursuing His Beloved by SB_Moon - Webnovel

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One_Winged_Angel

Writing Quality: Absolutely phenomenal quality! The author has such a way with words and there is 0.0001% errors throughout the entire novel. The punctuation, grammar, pacing, tone, and spelling are all completely on another level. Updating Stability: The author posts daily, which really keeps the novel consistent. This keeps the story fresh and keeps your attention. Story Development: The story follows college graduate Mu Yuexin and big boss Ethan Han. There are numerous characters that are named within the novel and they do a perfect job at keeping the MCs engaged. The conversations between Mu Yuexin and best friend Li Yi are natural and completely believable. The other conversations between Ethan Han and Mu Yuexin are spicy! You can feel the magnetism between them and the author does excellently at writing both of them. Character Design: All the characters are varied and interesting at the same time. Each person introduced doesn’t seem forced. They all feel important to the story and they do a good job progressing the novel at the same time. The main characters are well imagined and the author does a great job projecting the imagery between the two. They are introduced slowly through well timed descriptions that builds the images of them in your head as you read. World Background: The story is primarily set within the urban cityscape. Modern amenities, problems, and benefits are all present that helps build the great world that the author has created. If there would even be anything negative I could think about this masterpiece is that the world building is rather slow, but I also do not read many novels of this type, so this could be an error on my part. To sum it up; this is a novel that I can see being a #1 novel that everyone should check out, even if this isn’t a genre you would typically read, the author does such a great job and I am looking forward to where the author takes the novel!

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novelline00

Good story although most if their conflict is due to them not talking to each other, choosing to lie and deliberately cause misunderstanding. Hope there will be a progression in the next novels the author writes.

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Rayne_Rue

Just added this book to my library and nothing is gonna hold me back from saying "This book is amazing" I highly recommend it . Love the gramma the plot was great ,great work indeed .

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SIENDONIA

Oh, Hi there! How are you? Anyway.. Read this book!!! This book has a very interesting storyline for those who loves to read contemporary romance novels. Are you hesitating to read it? Don't worry, this author has good story quality in every book that they write. So.. Don't you think it'll be the same good quality for this book? Oh, don't forget to leave your golden tickets and 5 stars review here!!! (This is a threat 😈)

2yr
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SumSumInTheDimSum

Not my normal novel but my girlfriend suggested this novel to me and I was hooked from the gate! Author is excellent and the story is so well written! Absolutely amazing story!

2yr
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ChaosWriter

Wow. That's it. The only thought in my mind after reading this was 'Wow'. I really enjoyed reading and however much I praise would be less. I can only say to all those that are reading my review to just go ahead and read it. Don't waste time in the review section. You are missing something really good.

2yr
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SuBe_
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😊😊😊😊💖💖💖💖🌟🌟🌟🌟💰💰💰💰💀💀💀💀🤔🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁😁😳😳😳😳🌾🌾🌾🌾🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😇😇😇😇💥💥💥💥.. .. ... .. .. .... .. ... ... .. ...

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Asin13

I hope author does much better in this book now that she has came up with this new romance! I am looking forward to their intense romance and lots of fun! best of luck!❤️❤️❤️❤️

2yr
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Ada_5253

The synopsis is very well written. Caught my attention immediately and I didn't regret reading the Story. The author has done a very good job 👍 Looking forward to read more chapters❤️

2yr
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Alexa0111

author I have two of your books in my library and honestly I wish you would update the nine tailed fox one everyday. I love that so much but you stopped it so suddenly, I am sad. 😭 I finished your one book and honestly, and it looked good to me. don't be sed with that other reviewer. I wished you would write the transmigration one rather than this one!😅 my selfish thoughts, don't mind me 💀

2yr
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Soleram
LV 15 Badge

Not sure if I have the courage to read this novel after being traumatized with the author's novel 10 years ..., it was such a letdown that turn off the appetite to read other books penned by this author.

2yr
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One_Winged_Angel

Writing Quality: Absolutely phenomenal quality! The author has such a way with words and there is 0.0001% errors throughout the entire novel. The punctuation, grammar, pacing, tone, and spelling are all completely on another level. Updating Stability: The author posts daily, which really keeps the novel consistent. This keeps the story fresh and keeps your attention. Story Development: The story follows college graduate Mu Yuexin and big boss Ethan Han. There are numerous characters that are named within the novel and they do a perfect job at keeping the MCs engaged. The conversations between Mu Yuexin and best friend Li Yi are natural and completely believable. The other conversations between Ethan Han and Mu Yuexin are spicy! You can feel the magnetism between them and the author does excellently at writing both of them. Character Design: All the characters are varied and interesting at the same time. Each person introduced doesn’t seem forced. They all feel important to the story and they do a good job progressing the novel at the same time. The main characters are well imagined and the author does a great job projecting the imagery between the two. They are introduced slowly through well timed descriptions that builds the images of them in your head as you read. World Background: The story is primarily set within the urban cityscape. Modern amenities, problems, and benefits are all present that helps build the great world that the author has created. If there would even be anything negative I could think about this masterpiece is that the world building is rather slow, but I also do not read many novels of this type, so this could be an error on my part. To sum it up; this is a novel that I can see being a #1 novel that everyone should check out, even if this isn’t a genre you would typically read, the author does such a great job and I am looking forward to where the author takes the novel!

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novelline00

Good story although most if their conflict is due to them not talking to each other, choosing to lie and deliberately cause misunderstanding. Hope there will be a progression in the next novels the author writes.

8mth
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Rayne_Rue

Just added this book to my library and nothing is gonna hold me back from saying "This book is amazing" I highly recommend it . Love the gramma the plot was great ,great work indeed .

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2yr
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SIENDONIA

Oh, Hi there! How are you? Anyway.. Read this book!!! This book has a very interesting storyline for those who loves to read contemporary romance novels. Are you hesitating to read it? Don't worry, this author has good story quality in every book that they write. So.. Don't you think it'll be the same good quality for this book? Oh, don't forget to leave your golden tickets and 5 stars review here!!! (This is a threat 😈)

2yr
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SumSumInTheDimSum

Not my normal novel but my girlfriend suggested this novel to me and I was hooked from the gate! Author is excellent and the story is so well written! Absolutely amazing story!

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
ChaosWriter

Wow. That's it. The only thought in my mind after reading this was 'Wow'. I really enjoyed reading and however much I praise would be less. I can only say to all those that are reading my review to just go ahead and read it. Don't waste time in the review section. You are missing something really good.

2yr
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SuBe_
LV 5 Badge

😊😊😊😊💖💖💖💖🌟🌟🌟🌟💰💰💰💰💀💀💀💀🤔🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁😁😳😳😳😳🌾🌾🌾🌾🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😇😇😇😇💥💥💥💥.. .. ... .. .. .... .. ... ... .. ...

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2yr
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Asin13

I hope author does much better in this book now that she has came up with this new romance! I am looking forward to their intense romance and lots of fun! best of luck!❤️❤️❤️❤️

2yr
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Ada_5253

The synopsis is very well written. Caught my attention immediately and I didn't regret reading the Story. The author has done a very good job 👍 Looking forward to read more chapters❤️

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
Alexa0111

author I have two of your books in my library and honestly I wish you would update the nine tailed fox one everyday. I love that so much but you stopped it so suddenly, I am sad. 😭 I finished your one book and honestly, and it looked good to me. don't be sed with that other reviewer. I wished you would write the transmigration one rather than this one!😅 my selfish thoughts, don't mind me 💀

2yr
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Soleram
LV 15 Badge

Not sure if I have the courage to read this novel after being traumatized with the author's novel 10 years ..., it was such a letdown that turn off the appetite to read other books penned by this author.

2yr
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