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I've read several Dungeon Ni Deai fanfics, but this is definitely one of the ones I liked the most, because it really looks like an original story that only uses the anime's background to develop. I've always liked that in fanfic, I like to see something different from the original plot of the anime and this story delivered that well. I think the only "negative" part I saw for myself was having more than one person reincarnated, but even that became a positive because I liked the interactions she had with the MC, and she's even my favorite character in the story for now.
The story is well written, very few grammatical mistakes, Original fanfic, that follows only few unavoidable cliches. the mc has a well built background and is not the typical edgy imma kill everybody mc, or not the soft, im sorry for existing type. Chill when needed, but doesn't let nobody mess with him.
Good novel. . Btw i've you use then and than wrong a lot. Also there, their and they're. . You use "then" when you want to refer to something happening after one thing. "He threw his hand down towards the army and then proceeded to watch then die." or "She dashed away then saw a strike come from above" . You use "than" if you want to compare something. "He was far older than them, and they knew it." or "She was quicker than a lot of her peers." . You use "there" to refer to a place, "their" to refer to an object belonging somewhere and "they're" is an abbreviaton for "they are". "Over there.; That place there." "Those weapons are theirs.; That is their sword." "Can you believe it? They're as strong as the master.; They're certainly strong if you ask me."
could be good if the grammar was fixed ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hmm, interesting setting for a vampire mc. His powers weren't nerfed badly, you could call it a downgrade from simply dying once and being transported in a different power system setting. It's good that he levels up quickly back to his former power level from what I understand, i also enjoy how he's ruthless but not an emotionless machine. Enjoyable interactions with the few people he does interact, though it's funny how he managed to befriend Bete. His actual backstory will be interesting when it will fully be revealed to others as well as us. Overall a great novel, hoping to see more of it
Okey i dont do good rewies that often. I mostly complain but... Even if there are some lets say strange parts, this story is really good so far. So + for me are: Mc is a vampire you dont see that often, he looks like Ferid, first time seeing mc join Loki familia, dialoges are good, mc is not nerfed that much (talking about regeneration), fight scenes are good, mc does not hide his strenght pointlesly, he did not show all of his cards either, he told loki some truths, did not go overboard and tell her everything, he is not emotioneles but still pretty rutheles. In 15 chapters this is all i can say about this. We will see about romance later on. Hope it will not feel unnatural. Good job author, you entertained me :D
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I've read several Dungeon Ni Deai fanfics, but this is definitely one of the ones I liked the most, because it really looks like an original story that only uses the anime's background to develop. I've always liked that in fanfic, I like to see something different from the original plot of the anime and this story delivered that well. I think the only "negative" part I saw for myself was having more than one person reincarnated, but even that became a positive because I liked the interactions she had with the MC, and she's even my favorite character in the story for now.
The story is well written, very few grammatical mistakes, Original fanfic, that follows only few unavoidable cliches. the mc has a well built background and is not the typical edgy imma kill everybody mc, or not the soft, im sorry for existing type. Chill when needed, but doesn't let nobody mess with him.
Good novel. . Btw i've you use then and than wrong a lot. Also there, their and they're. . You use "then" when you want to refer to something happening after one thing. "He threw his hand down towards the army and then proceeded to watch then die." or "She dashed away then saw a strike come from above" . You use "than" if you want to compare something. "He was far older than them, and they knew it." or "She was quicker than a lot of her peers." . You use "there" to refer to a place, "their" to refer to an object belonging somewhere and "they're" is an abbreviaton for "they are". "Over there.; That place there." "Those weapons are theirs.; That is their sword." "Can you believe it? They're as strong as the master.; They're certainly strong if you ask me."
could be good if the grammar was fixed ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hmm, interesting setting for a vampire mc. His powers weren't nerfed badly, you could call it a downgrade from simply dying once and being transported in a different power system setting. It's good that he levels up quickly back to his former power level from what I understand, i also enjoy how he's ruthless but not an emotionless machine. Enjoyable interactions with the few people he does interact, though it's funny how he managed to befriend Bete. His actual backstory will be interesting when it will fully be revealed to others as well as us. Overall a great novel, hoping to see more of it
Okey i dont do good rewies that often. I mostly complain but... Even if there are some lets say strange parts, this story is really good so far. So + for me are: Mc is a vampire you dont see that often, he looks like Ferid, first time seeing mc join Loki familia, dialoges are good, mc is not nerfed that much (talking about regeneration), fight scenes are good, mc does not hide his strenght pointlesly, he did not show all of his cards either, he told loki some truths, did not go overboard and tell her everything, he is not emotioneles but still pretty rutheles. In 15 chapters this is all i can say about this. We will see about romance later on. Hope it will not feel unnatural. Good job author, you entertained me :D