章 40: The First Final Stretch

"So, what conclusions have you come to?" I asked. "Satō, go first."

"Yes," she replied. "The choreographies are cute and energetic enough. They tell the story of the songs nicely and the energy is well distributed between the sections of each song. The energy is also balanced among all the other songs overall and they aim at the same audience. However, they lack fundamental things like more dynamic movements, character, and collaboration."

I stared at her. This is why we needed a professional.

"And what are your suggestions?" I asked.

"To revise them. As I said, they are good enough already, they just need some details."

"How long will that take?"

"It depends. The revisions should be done within a week, but the girls must unlearn what they practiced and learn again. That could take another week or two."

"I trust in the girls, they will do it faster than you think. What are your thoughts about Astra?"