Mushoku Tensei: The forgotten Mob

LV 15

Roktah

mc is one of sylphies bullies, as a miko he has the ability to experience the lives of versions of him from parallel universes. at first everything is fine but after the teleportation happens and mc meets rudeus all we get are point of views from rudeus to a point where it seems he is the mc and entire chapters from the pov of the narrator. there are so many pov changes that are not the mc that it gets really annoying. simply put after the teleportation incident we occasionally hear from the mc,while emphasis is put on everything but him. the grammar is bad. mc splits his time between magic, swordsmanship and blacksmithing because as a human he has apparently plenty of time to waste. reading this, the story just seems directionless, like the author himself doesn't know where he is going with it. claude(mc) has no goals(or maybe i forgot between the constant pov changes) he is just there. in this story rudeus is still the mc/hero while our mc is just a S/I that kind of drifts along.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

meh... if you want to focus the story on Rudeus, I don't see the point of writing a synopsis where it is stated that MC is a random npc. The synopsis is a trap... supposedly the main character would be an ORIGINAL CHARACTER, but he is not. Author or Mc only exist to describe how cool Rudeus is.

LV 13

Slxxpy

Mc is still a mob character. L

LV 4

MonkeReviewer

I feel like it is too focus on rudeus and not enough on claude. Basically What I am trying to say is that Calude is a side character and really nothing is happening at this point it is just a diary.

LV 4

please_be_gentle_

Trash. MC is only there to explain to us how cool rudeus is and what he does so i think there is not point in writing this ff........author is just wasting his own time as well as ours

LV 5

TempestDrift

The grammar is middling at best and the dialogue feels like a translated wuxia novel. It's also a self-insert so their is a lot of inner monologue but that comes with this particular category of fanfiction. Not that bad or that great. I came because every other mushoku tensei is a rudeus replacement or rehashing the plot slightly different every time, so the premise and starting point is at least interesting.

LV 13

FalgaGS

I love myself a I dont give a fk narcisstic Mc. Dont worry guys this novel is good stuff, it got the right pace. mmdmdm d d d d d d d d d d d d d rmfkrkdnmrd d d d d d d d d d d d dr d d d d dd d d d d

LV 4

Abid_Azzaky

story pace nya ga jelas kadang cepat dan kadang kadang lama kali, kalau buat cerita MC nya yang mana ini di synopsis katanya claude tapi di cerita 80% POV Rudeus

LV 10

asaade

the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus

LV 1

Luk_72634

Trash. MC is only there to explain to us how cool rudeus is and what he does so i think there is not point in writing this ff........author is just wasting his own time as well as ours

LV 1

BCqpLAN_CrOw

I take back what i said before and now that the rudeus focus centric part of the story is out of the way it kind of started getting good I hope in the future that while there will be other characters POV just please dont make it a multichapter where its just the POV of others as I cane here to know about the story of claude and while its kind of interesting to know what's happening around him and what others think of him, the novelty of it dwindles with more that 1 chapter at a time and starts to get annoying

LV 4

RaulXD

Cualquier novela del mushoku tensei es aprobada para mí. Pero el Mc me parece molesto en momentos. Pero todo es bastante bueno. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

DaoistosrKh6

the mc doesn't has much time shine and he is still a useless mob 💀💀

LV 3

Melusinee

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LV 6

FortuneEternal

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Bro if you want to make rudeus the mc just write a story about him? Dunno why you wrote your story like this. Haih, just goodluck man

LV 4

Kenji_Shimura

havent seen a good mushoku tensei fanfic in a while keep it up havent seen a good mushoku tensei fanfic in a while keep it uphavent seen a good mushoku tensei fanfic in a while keep it up

LV 4

YaIIyBeIIy

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LV 4

Ryan_ROBBE

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LV 1

reyesreyj

3/5 de las pocas historias de musuko. Una historia bastante enredada en la que nos muestran la vida del mc , sus encarnaciónes y ludeus por lo que se nota que el creador no sabía bien que Aser .