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You know it would be great if you make more like this but with popular harem anime as base. like Highschool DxD, To Love RU, High school of the Dead, Infinite Startos for example
Story wise it's good, but also kinda confusing like when the first foursome starts why couldnt he just use his sexy no jutsu istead of shadow clone? Did he forget that jutsu or does it not exist in this novels world? Though I've only read as far as starting on c5 "Heritage" for now, maybe it's used later on, I'll continue at another time. Interesting story and long chapters so far. [img=recommend]
La historia principal está buena y que metas otra historia separada adentro esta bueno también pero me gustaría ver la continuación de la historia principal
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I... You Know... This book... Well... *sigh* let me just review each category.🤦🏻♀️ 1-Writing Quality: There are some grammar mistakes and "speech" and 'thought' quotation marks mistakes but besides that it's good. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: Well... You know... Sometimes... The title... The sinopse...Read it. [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: For each story their designed nicely, they are not canonically correct but they're well made. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: How should I know? I finished this in one day and decided that I need a wholesome book. Completely unrelated to this book... It's for research and soul searching... because I need that so bad right now... Again, completely unrelated to this book. Naruto is OP with Handling different Swords...Not even Zoro can beat him. [4 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The background is detailed enough, you get the scene that's being made... The rest you need to read. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.6 in Futa-Ecchi scope... Now I'm going to look for vanilla slice of life books with romance and no action, swords, no liquid bending no nothing.
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mim arrisquei e estou chorando sangue, quem for ler isso leia por sua conta e risco, avisando a voces preparase pois é nivel geijutsu de rock lee e guy
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I stepped in with no fear. I stepped out after 25 chapters. My only question is where's the rest of the aux story? Nothing wrong with the rest just aux story was kinda interesting.
i took the risk and now i am dead. i have only one question. why??.......................................................................................................................................................................
Don't read this, if you don't like Swords Girl vs Swordsman. I seriously better don't read this. I gave up reading this, be careful........
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Ok boys....retreat... i repeat... retreat..caution if ur intrested in sword play only enter otherwise........
i calculated the risks but boy am I bad at maths .....................................................................
You know it would be great if you make more like this but with popular harem anime as base. like Highschool DxD, To Love RU, High school of the Dead, Infinite Startos for example
Story wise it's good, but also kinda confusing like when the first foursome starts why couldnt he just use his sexy no jutsu istead of shadow clone? Did he forget that jutsu or does it not exist in this novels world? Though I've only read as far as starting on c5 "Heritage" for now, maybe it's used later on, I'll continue at another time. Interesting story and long chapters so far. [img=recommend]
La historia principal está buena y que metas otra historia separada adentro esta bueno también pero me gustaría ver la continuación de la historia principal
ネタバレを明かす I... You Know... This book... Well... *sigh* let me just review each category.🤦🏻♀️ 1-Writing Quality: There are some grammar mistakes and "speech" and 'thought' quotation marks mistakes but besides that it's good. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: Well... You know... Sometimes... The title... The sinopse...Read it. [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: For each story their designed nicely, they are not canonically correct but they're well made. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: How should I know? I finished this in one day and decided that I need a wholesome book. Completely unrelated to this book... It's for research and soul searching... because I need that so bad right now... Again, completely unrelated to this book. Naruto is OP with Handling different Swords...Not even Zoro can beat him. [4 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The background is detailed enough, you get the scene that's being made... The rest you need to read. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.6 in Futa-Ecchi scope... Now I'm going to look for vanilla slice of life books with romance and no action, swords, no liquid bending no nothing.
ネタバレを明かす mim arrisquei e estou chorando sangue, quem for ler isso leia por sua conta e risco, avisando a voces preparase pois é nivel geijutsu de rock lee e guy
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I stepped in with no fear. I stepped out after 25 chapters. My only question is where's the rest of the aux story? Nothing wrong with the rest just aux story was kinda interesting.
i took the risk and now i am dead. i have only one question. why??.......................................................................................................................................................................
Don't read this, if you don't like Swords Girl vs Swordsman. I seriously better don't read this. I gave up reading this, be careful........
ネタバレを明かす Ok boys....retreat... i repeat... retreat..caution if ur intrested in sword play only enter otherwise........
i calculated the risks but boy am I bad at maths .....................................................................