I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)

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CodeSpectre

Its really good !! And People stop complaining about how he isn't Saint Peter Parker !!! He's a bloody reincarnate !! Anyways the writing quality is good,good character design and I really wish the author does a mass release !!

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Zack_Smith_9438

Hmm, I like this story, I like it a lot. This story has great potential BUt. If youll Like to know my biggest fear…. ……. Youll drop it like the rest

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Yanagi_sense1

The grammar is good....character's dialogue as well as the pacing of the story is good...I also love the fact that the mc ain't a simp as well as he doesn't have a hero-complex...the only reason i won't be giving this a 5-star rating is because of the chance of the mc having a harem in the future(since there is a harem tag)...i just don't like having harems in a modern world setting and i do hope the author just sticks to 1 and hopefully its gwen....but overall i see quite the potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author-san

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as_ss

its a story about peter parker but without any of his values, which means its a Spider-Man story without the friendly neighborhood Spider-Man.

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ImNex

I like harem but that's not the reason why I like this fanfic. Okay. Maybe, it takes apart in it but mostly because the dialogues are entertaining and kind of refreshing.

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OPRamenGuy

Haven’t read it yet but a piece of advice is that u should toughen up, there’s a lot of people who like to shi* on writers if something dosent fo their way and that causes a lot of writers to drop. Good luck with the story

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Passing_Critique

Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.

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IvanArcadia

I like how the character development of the story. The story development so far have been amazing. I love the story progression of the Fanfic.

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Ali_Karaca

this parker is better than the original parker i always found it ridiculous that you don't take money from the guys you beat up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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whitethief274

watashi wo namae wa petaa parka spidaar mun. and I really like the character interaction in this ff. I also like that this is a harem while harem sometimes spoils the story so I just hope you can make it work.

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Supes

The dialogues between the characters are amazing and the give off the feeling of individuality. Amazing story, hope to see more chapters. .

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Bite_Wright

While well written, the character development is meh. Its a basic harem story where all the women just throw themselves at mc, irregardless of there source material character. However it is an interesting and, with the exception of above, well written story with a descent premise.

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little_howii

The story gets better the more chapters you read but there were some cringe worthy moments when he interacted with his love interests. Though the story is developing well and moving along. Keep writing

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Man_of_culture_69

Only giving full stars coz i read harem tag and if i dont find my favorite waifis in harem i ll give one star author san☠️😈. It's a fan fiction and please no stupid mc and make op smart and with unique powers from anime verse

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Kono_Timoda

Current chapter: 68 I was originally scared of reading another self-insert boring MC with repetitive harem members but this one is gladly not one of them. I like how much effort the writer is trying to put into the fight scene and I get the feeling that I am reading about a spider person and not just another guy fighting (of course it is not as good as watching the actual it but its great interpretation from a novel point of view). This is not for everyone as it has a serious undertone with some gore but not a horror movie or doom eternal type of gore. The MC is OP but the fights are still entertaining since, as far as I can remember, the fights are written differently so it doesn't feel boring, plus Spiderman, in general, is lowkey OP so yeah, no surprise. The only thing that would stop people from reading this novel is that this genre is not for everyone, but the author has been fleshing out the MC and he feels like a Human given Super human power and not 2D MC that is oh so perfect. Overall the Author seems to be responsive to the audience and willing to improve so better to start reading early if you have any cool ideas, feel free to share them. To the Author: For future fight scenes, you can look at the various spider man games for reference or you could look at the Death Battle epesiode with batman vs spiderman. Also, longer chapters are better.

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Fox_king_1789

You know when you find a story that you are hooked on like an addiction but its never enough Man i wish that this also gets to most popular rankings so that we can 1 or 2 chapters daily non stop

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Insert_Here

Great job with the story this is one of the better Spiderman fanfics that I have read on here and I have read alot of them so great job keep up the good work.

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Stefan1266

this story gets five stars!!!!

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pingvinchik

It's good that you survived, I hope you continue to write novels and I pray that you recover soon

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Flameingo

Pretty good, worth a look if you are into more kill heavy MC's. I feel like he leans a bit to much into cringy/edgelord territory in some places although it never goes too far over the line as to be unreadable. I'm not against killing either but I feel this fic goes a bit into more unhinged territory instead of pragmatic as he basically just kills any goons he runs into. Feels like someone as smart as MC would keep their kills more targeted to me anyway.