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Well, this is so messed up. You see, Mc is a fool, yup he is a fool. Who saves other people when one's life is on stake. Huh? He is a reincarnated person and yet so foolish to not save himself but someone else when he knew he could just revenge him in the future. So much plot armor, it's disgusting that I wasted my time on this sh** (•_•) No Romance, I ain't interested
The author seems confused af and didn't have a good framework. He ditched the early system and start to adopt various concepT from other well known novels. With that, The author managed to take all the boring stuff and create the boring MC with boring plot that felt like reading an encyclopedia and sometimes a diary. The change of translator downgraded this novel even further. Don't waste your time with it
It's alright. Very dull and uninspired but doesn't really have any actual negatives, but not any real positives either. The 'cheat' or 'talent' gets almost completely phased out after the first 20 chapters or so and only comes up once every 50 chapters or something. WARNING to readers, 242 chapters are very well translated but C243 is taken over by the killer of novels 549 who cannot translate properly so it's not worth reading anymore at that point. Typical WN. If you pay for this beyond 242 you're an idiot.
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This novel changes it character quite drastically, at first it's a typical cultivator with a cheat getting stronger but ends up being some kind of kingdom-building, it works quite well for a while but the plot progress gets slower and slower as the novel goes on, this, added up with the almost unbearable translation in the late parts of the novel, made me drop it in the end
It is a decent story but the translator ether quit or changed changing the names and level Designation witch is a big taboo as far as I am concerned
Im anout 50 chapters in and all i can say is im enjoying myself. The novel has a unique system thats different from most other cultivation novels you come across as its there but kinda in the background. But most importantly is the grammar, spelling and just the overall Abundance of easy to correct mistakes if only one person had proofread the novel that we have all come to expect from this site are missing here. All i can say is give it a try its not the fastest paced story but also not to slowest and the story is a fresh take on cultivation with a cheat that i havent seen yet
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It's a good story the first 200 chapters are nicely done. the translation quality drops very fast there after, feels like webnovel is getting lazier and cheaper.
This should have been one of the top novels in this genre. It had potential. But the author at first elaborates on the power of finding weaknesses of the mc but in later chapters it’s hardly mentioned and then this novel becomes the cookie-cut version where the mc gets a space and develops it. In the romance department I expected the Mc to only have 1 dao partner but this novel turned out to be a harem!! 😭😭 Anyway it’s still a good novel
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Not that good. the mc looks like a naive brat. .........................................................................................................
This is very good keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters to come out.... 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the good work
The story would've been rather good. However, after around chapter 200+ the writing quality suddenly plummeted. It seemed as if it was mtl'ed instead.
It's good at the start. Turn boring at the middle. Maybe trash at the end. Who knows? The writer should stick to the concept of the novel, like the MC's cheat. Maybe not, the cheat became non-existent as the novel progress. How disappointing.
its a good story so far, cant wait the the chapters to come out. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
An average novel, no innovation and more of the same. The author could have explored more the cultivation of techniques in an unusual or absurd way and put some comedy. The special talent is forgotten with time and practically only appears later as a tool to identify items. Around chapter 230 the translator abandons it and turns it into an MTL translation and ends up killing the novel once and for all
does anyone know of the novel with this description : 'one day she posted her husbands broken ring online next day group of guards came and said "our master is still alive"'
Fairly average novel, actually, if you look at it objectively. World Background is unclear, Cultivation Planes are not explained, as are the different monster species. The story development is very fast, and the MC does get very strong early on, though he starts (almost) from the bottom. Character design is interesting, at least for the characters who talked/interacted with the MC. The MC himself is fairly smart, though tendencies being to sociopathic. The women/girls are being reasonable, e.g. with the "lucky happy little accidents", as I call them. All actions so for taken from characters are reasonable and fairly realistic. The writing quality - this is the unique part. - it is fast paced - writer doesn't explain much - writer focuses more on explaining important / relevant stuff - You get the feeling of everything being lackluster - the tone at which the novel is written is like that, it doesn't manage to convey the feelings of the characters But it's because of these things, that I think the novel is unique. As a reader, you are often fed with information. But now, you'll have to think: Why? Why does the MC behave like that? Why does he seemingly not care about other people's lifes, e.g. when they are trapped underground? Whilst not a good read in itself, I think you could learn a little bit. Atleast, it's better than those revenge-driven wuxia-novels.
translating quality is okay for the first 230 chapters but after that translation becomes inconsistent. either a change of translator or a laziness to change and conform to the former terms. quality can be said to be dropped since more sentence mistakes were made also after. world background is interesting. if quality further drops will be dropping this.
It’s a decent novel but it uses overly complicated terminology that turns a good novel into one that’s about as interesting as casually reading a dictionary.
I understand why this novel is bordering on 4 stars. This is an unusual cultivation novel as the protagonist is put on the pedestal for his genius the moment he enters the sect, it can be boring as unlike other novels where they struggle. although from my pov quality becomes worse around 240s
Starts good but ultimately gets dragged down by pacing issues. The is likeable -- he's intelligent and mature enough to evaluate relationships and make smart decisions (which is something I really enjoyed). He's also humane. However, his cultivation progress feels slow after a certain point because the author doesn't simply time skip past the uninteresting bits. Other authors throw one interesting challenge after another at the MC, while this one falls victim to common pacing traps like an endless tournament arc and slow, step-by-step cultivation. Some people might like it but more people are going to lose interest and drop out of the story due to a lack of engagement. The reader doesn't need to know what the MC ate for breakfast.
I will have to hide my talent and not tell anyone about my progress, and the next day he immediately tells his friend.trash........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
interesting concept but mc is so boring that it hurts.. he doesn't want to fight or even learn fighting and thinks he can just stay peaceful and cultivate
Got boring fast. Don't get me wrong, it was interesting at first, but then he found the perfect cultivation methods, obtained a spiritual bone, and upgraded his talent to high. Now what?
awesome, the story is good also make me to want to watch more. never read a book like this before, not expect to be this good. recommedn to read
Well, this is so messed up. You see, Mc is a fool, yup he is a fool. Who saves other people when one's life is on stake. Huh? He is a reincarnated person and yet so foolish to not save himself but someone else when he knew he could just revenge him in the future. So much plot armor, it's disgusting that I wasted my time on this sh** (•_•) No Romance, I ain't interested
The author seems confused af and didn't have a good framework. He ditched the early system and start to adopt various concepT from other well known novels. With that, The author managed to take all the boring stuff and create the boring MC with boring plot that felt like reading an encyclopedia and sometimes a diary. The change of translator downgraded this novel even further. Don't waste your time with it
It's alright. Very dull and uninspired but doesn't really have any actual negatives, but not any real positives either. The 'cheat' or 'talent' gets almost completely phased out after the first 20 chapters or so and only comes up once every 50 chapters or something. WARNING to readers, 242 chapters are very well translated but C243 is taken over by the killer of novels 549 who cannot translate properly so it's not worth reading anymore at that point. Typical WN. If you pay for this beyond 242 you're an idiot.
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This novel changes it character quite drastically, at first it's a typical cultivator with a cheat getting stronger but ends up being some kind of kingdom-building, it works quite well for a while but the plot progress gets slower and slower as the novel goes on, this, added up with the almost unbearable translation in the late parts of the novel, made me drop it in the end
It is a decent story but the translator ether quit or changed changing the names and level Designation witch is a big taboo as far as I am concerned
Im anout 50 chapters in and all i can say is im enjoying myself. The novel has a unique system thats different from most other cultivation novels you come across as its there but kinda in the background. But most importantly is the grammar, spelling and just the overall Abundance of easy to correct mistakes if only one person had proofread the novel that we have all come to expect from this site are missing here. All i can say is give it a try its not the fastest paced story but also not to slowest and the story is a fresh take on cultivation with a cheat that i havent seen yet
straight fire in every way shape and form ongiddijndijndindijdnidjnijdnijndijndinijndijnidnijndijndijnnidndijndijnijdnijdnijdndijndijndijdnijdnidjndijndijndij
It's a good story the first 200 chapters are nicely done. the translation quality drops very fast there after, feels like webnovel is getting lazier and cheaper.
This should have been one of the top novels in this genre. It had potential. But the author at first elaborates on the power of finding weaknesses of the mc but in later chapters it’s hardly mentioned and then this novel becomes the cookie-cut version where the mc gets a space and develops it. In the romance department I expected the Mc to only have 1 dao partner but this novel turned out to be a harem!! 😭😭 Anyway it’s still a good novel
ネタバレを明かす Not that good. the mc looks like a naive brat. .........................................................................................................
This is very good keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters to come out.... 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the good work
The story would've been rather good. However, after around chapter 200+ the writing quality suddenly plummeted. It seemed as if it was mtl'ed instead.
It's good at the start. Turn boring at the middle. Maybe trash at the end. Who knows? The writer should stick to the concept of the novel, like the MC's cheat. Maybe not, the cheat became non-existent as the novel progress. How disappointing.
its a good story so far, cant wait the the chapters to come out. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
An average novel, no innovation and more of the same. The author could have explored more the cultivation of techniques in an unusual or absurd way and put some comedy. The special talent is forgotten with time and practically only appears later as a tool to identify items. Around chapter 230 the translator abandons it and turns it into an MTL translation and ends up killing the novel once and for all
does anyone know of the novel with this description : 'one day she posted her husbands broken ring online next day group of guards came and said "our master is still alive"'
Fairly average novel, actually, if you look at it objectively. World Background is unclear, Cultivation Planes are not explained, as are the different monster species. The story development is very fast, and the MC does get very strong early on, though he starts (almost) from the bottom. Character design is interesting, at least for the characters who talked/interacted with the MC. The MC himself is fairly smart, though tendencies being to sociopathic. The women/girls are being reasonable, e.g. with the "lucky happy little accidents", as I call them. All actions so for taken from characters are reasonable and fairly realistic. The writing quality - this is the unique part. - it is fast paced - writer doesn't explain much - writer focuses more on explaining important / relevant stuff - You get the feeling of everything being lackluster - the tone at which the novel is written is like that, it doesn't manage to convey the feelings of the characters But it's because of these things, that I think the novel is unique. As a reader, you are often fed with information. But now, you'll have to think: Why? Why does the MC behave like that? Why does he seemingly not care about other people's lifes, e.g. when they are trapped underground? Whilst not a good read in itself, I think you could learn a little bit. Atleast, it's better than those revenge-driven wuxia-novels.
translating quality is okay for the first 230 chapters but after that translation becomes inconsistent. either a change of translator or a laziness to change and conform to the former terms. quality can be said to be dropped since more sentence mistakes were made also after. world background is interesting. if quality further drops will be dropping this.
It’s a decent novel but it uses overly complicated terminology that turns a good novel into one that’s about as interesting as casually reading a dictionary.
I understand why this novel is bordering on 4 stars. This is an unusual cultivation novel as the protagonist is put on the pedestal for his genius the moment he enters the sect, it can be boring as unlike other novels where they struggle. although from my pov quality becomes worse around 240s
Starts good but ultimately gets dragged down by pacing issues. The is likeable -- he's intelligent and mature enough to evaluate relationships and make smart decisions (which is something I really enjoyed). He's also humane. However, his cultivation progress feels slow after a certain point because the author doesn't simply time skip past the uninteresting bits. Other authors throw one interesting challenge after another at the MC, while this one falls victim to common pacing traps like an endless tournament arc and slow, step-by-step cultivation. Some people might like it but more people are going to lose interest and drop out of the story due to a lack of engagement. The reader doesn't need to know what the MC ate for breakfast.
I will have to hide my talent and not tell anyone about my progress, and the next day he immediately tells his friend.trash........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
interesting concept but mc is so boring that it hurts.. he doesn't want to fight or even learn fighting and thinks he can just stay peaceful and cultivate
Got boring fast. Don't get me wrong, it was interesting at first, but then he found the perfect cultivation methods, obtained a spiritual bone, and upgraded his talent to high. Now what?
awesome, the story is good also make me to want to watch more. never read a book like this before, not expect to be this good. recommedn to read