My Valyrian Kingdom - GOT

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Baldeep

I am really happy with this fan fiction. But you should do a quick timeskip soon. Just show the important moments like the dance of dragons, Blackfyre rebellion, war of ninepenny kings, Robert's rebellion. And also grow business in essos etc. The house should have an intelligent unit and silveros name should be feared by all even the Targaryans. And show some random povs in the story.

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3PoundsOfRice

Well, this is much better than I expected. It's a shame it's not an ASOIAF fanfic, but you're doing quite well. I would like to point out that all Valyrian dragons are genetically the same, so there isn't a race of silver dragons, they are silver colored Valyrian dragons and already, the Targaryen themselves have had silver colored dragons before. So it doesn't make sense that they have a low birth rate, unless in your story this family was bent on crossing silver colored dragons. You literally escaped to the side of your biggest enemies xD, Bravos, if I were them I would attack the MC now that he has only 2 dragons. As for the faceless assassins, I wouldn't worry about that, if they were cheap they would have sent them after the Targaryen heads. There is mention of obsidian in Skagos, so there may be volcanic activity, you could use that place to settle the dragons. One question, how many Valyrians did you take with you? Men and women. You need at least a couple of thousand to fill the Island with their race.

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Serious_Reader

Good story so far hope it'll continue and not dropped in the middle I also like the idea of how author choose Skagos for his kingdom and looking for making chimera with human and animals . It'll be cool if author adds some other mythical animals such as griffin,manticore,sphinx etc

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Vibez_

Great novel, loving the story so far. Author seems very knowledgable about got which helps. Definitely worth the read. Just wish there was more chapters. Keep up the great work author ❤️

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Kaan_Acemzade247

are you not going to continue this fanfiction? A new chapter is not coming for a very long time, let me know if it has been left, please let's give up hope 🥲🥲🥲

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MOMEN_ESSAM

You should continue it bro ...... ... ...

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Kaan_Acemzade247

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Jokers_Theif_2023

I am vary happy with the story and look forward to more Keep It Up {GOOD STUFF}

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Jokers_Theif_2023

I Like this fanfic keep it up {Good Stuff}

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Andrey_M

I like it so far, but I don't like where this is going. It kind of seems like the author is just going to introduce and develop a whole bunch of characters just to throw them all away like garbage as soon as a time skip happens and the MC gets reincarnated 100 years later. It feels totally unnecessary to describe every character, especially the so-called savages that are immediately killed right after being described. Honestly, I would be fine if the taking over of the island is completely glossed over with a single paragraph. In conclusion, this has too much character development where it is unnecessary. Don't get me wrong; it is still a good fanfic, but it's too slow for my liking. Yes, kingdom building stories should have good worldbuilding, and it does, but you're describing unnecessary things about other characters while I still don't have a clear understanding on the MC's character. I know more about his sister than him! Also, polygamy can go burn in heck.

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Idle_Soul

it's a good one....lots of potential...more chaps !!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................................................................

LV 14

King_P

Well colour me impress on this novel !! It's well planned and i can see author san has put out great efforts in research and development too!! Just hoping for timely regular updates.. Once again great job author san 🤘

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Abraham_Neumbo_9855

Amazing idea 😭😭 so disappointed with the no updates

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Apophis_

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MrXmc

Good........................................................................................................................................

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TheprimordialGod

So far this is very amazing to me i always felt that agot had a lot to offer in kingdon building genre sadly no one rlly made it work or i havnt seen it yet but this one is rlly good i was hooked hope you keep up the updates.

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Yongwu

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Yongwu

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lstreader

I'm really looking forward to the development. At the moment it's just beginning, but I can't wait for the kingdom to be built. There are not enough chapters at the moment to give a more detailed review but I hope that the author can post chapters more often.