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In Twilight With The Annihilation Maker Sacred Gear

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A fan-fic about a guy that has to go to fictional worlds and defeat the evil Gods minions which are known as the imposters and have a good time

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Death_Reaper_2562

This book is awesome the best book I've have ever read I love how the author depicts my absolutely positively 100% real story. By the way this is of course the MC definitely not just a shameless author that'll give himself five stars because that would just be weird.

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UnholyFalseHeaven

This obviously wasn't carefully thought thoroughly. you gave him to much power you didn't think through the plot nor interactions it's like you are just writing what ever comes to mind I read through until chapter 14 and dropping but i hope you learn from this if want to continue writing. Good Luck and Happy new year

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jeanpierregerardo

interesing history. *****************************************************************************************************************************************************

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TheSoulofHeart

Searching For Annihilation Maker dxd and ended up with this I‘ll give it a shot than change my review later.

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DareMeNot

Haven't read it yet, but based on some of the reviews... I'll be honest, I'm having second thoughts... But I'll read it anyway. Heck, it's one of the few Twilight fics currently available here, so I'll bite. But seriously, just take it at your own pace, all authors started from there, writing experimental fics, so you're no different. Just gain experience, then the next time you attempt to write something, it'll come to you normally on what and which you have to consider to make your story more stable. Anyway, just keep on trying~! 😆😆😆😜

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EclipticKing

u should continue this book. its rlly interesting and engaging. also something diff from the usual thats about Twilight .so keep going and i wish to continue reading it.

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Dylan_Carman

awesome fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Love the story XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX

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