Genius of the leaf

LV 3

Chips_8019

The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"

LV 4

brokeassnigga

was looking for a story without harem, I had to scroll through about 100 to find this one for that alone here's 4 stars. djy

LV 4

Sangrail97

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LV 1

Zenos_Maxima2611

I don't know why this has a high rating?. but I think this is very cringe, bad grammar even if translated. Broken dialogues and too many dialogues in 1 chapter. lack of narration, so readers can't imagine what the MC is doing.

LV 1

ghost_kuro

to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31.

LV 4

ssyffix

I love it. Feels good inside to read this :) I appreciate the character interactions. The progression is handled really nicely. Overall great vibe. Keep up the good work, yo. 🥑

LV 1

TIFOEL

Первые главы ДЕЙСТВИТЕЛЬНО плохие! Я продержался глав 5... я уже дважды начинаю читать вспоминаю сюжет и бросаю. Слишком много бонусов со старта у героя. Встреча с Дирайей и с Хокаге... ребенка! Это так глупо... И все про него знают и все хотят его убить и гениальный он... о боже... и поселить его к Хатаке когда он Узумаки Учиха... бред!! Намного лучше бы было прочитать про обычного шиноби пробудившего память. В крайнем случае в кланового шиноби... но не в какноничного персонажа. И хотелось бы что бы это было до 2 мировой войны... Подскажите, кто сможет, такой фанфик, можно не на этом сайте.

LV 1

Otaku_phantom

Well nice one the story is great about a genius well not going to give spoilers about it...support the writer for the effort to make us readers happy.

LV 3

CasualNaphu

Good Naruto fics are hard to come by, but this one doesn't disappoint! The author has a good grasp of the established universe despite the invented techniques/powers. He doesn't fail to make it entertaining and enjoyable for readers familiar with Masashi Kishimoto's work. All in all, I'd suggest trying this for anyone dropping by. You won't regret it!

LV 3

Kronos01

MC is stupid. Just a warning before you start reading.

LV 14

Carbon_6597

author has a lot of grammatical errors, he keeps checking in new powers completely unrelated, has no sense of the actual timeline, and made the MC a pervert at 6. overall it feels like none of the novel was thought or planned out and the author wrote without thinking about anything

LV 2

Mapguy

I'm a big Naruto fan and it's refreshing to see how you've played with the whole story and made it yours . I think it is a very good adaptation (unlike boruto). The previous first chapters were full of grammatical errors so I wasn't able to continue to read it and review it. But now that you've edited it I can now read with no problems😁 I like how you're making the character quite different from the common uchiha and how you mad him fit in with the world around him aswell as the characters. Keep it up bro👍

LV 13

Nico_Leztier

A great story for those how love Naruto, its a bit on the wayside but it pulls back to the core of what Naruto is!, if you enjoy Naruto FF this is the story for you!

LV 4

Gd_Sys

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LV 1

MukomaTJ

Some of the character actions really strain my suspension of disbelief, even for a fanfic. I don't know, maybe I'll give it a go with text to speech so I can dedicate more processing power to the story😅

LV 14

The_8th_king

Someone put this shif in the bin please !

LV 1

Xiphos_Gladius_03

Your consistency in updating the fanfic is something to be admired. Although the bloodline combination between Uzumaki, and Uchiha is overpowered; I am curious in how hs appearance will change the storyline.

This novel has its issues 1. Writing Quality is 3/5, sometimes there quite stupid mistakes, structural problems + there many time where you are having trouble to understand who said what. 2. Story development 3.5/5 - the BS about his brother is very stupid, and there wasn’t a single reason to add it. Author just wanted to bunch up more ideas, for no reason. Worst part of the novel. Other than that it’s quite a good novel.

LV 4

Sabaroth_zarkiel

Author, is there romance? And when is it going to start?