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Transmigrated in to Harry Potter's body at the age of 7.
Might have major changes to the story plot of the movies
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This is not a Harry Potter fic.....This is not a Harry Potter fic.This is not a Harry Potter fic.This is not a Harry Potter fic.This is not a Harry Potter fic.
I'm sorry author but this is ridiculous, everything in this story makes no sense. The MC spent 10 years studying magic in hogwhars for absolutly nothing
this really is a bad story with no advantages well there is one, its not a mtl but its not really a high quality work just average. I've seen the reviews about him being harry potter was pointless. it is so i skipped 11 chapters and read this as a original fanfic. Though i didn't take in consideration that a author who is good at his work wouldn't make this kind of mistake anyways the story is bad there is not much to say. it would be easier to find the good points then tell you about the bad ones.
he reincarnates in hp world with wasted wishes, then he spends 10-15 years in time dilation learning magic and other skills, at 11 he enters the hogwarts express, in the next chapter he reincarnates as niklaus mikaelson in vampire diaries. what happened here? well, your guess is as good as mine. i dropped this waste of time at this point
Not really a Harry Potter fanfic. First 10 chapters a waste of time he goes for Harry Potter world to another world right after. I do not recommend
Reads worse than an mtl. Starts off in HP for no reason. Leaves HP world before the plot even starts. speaks in runic? language for multiple paragraphs in order to buff up the word count.
he reincarnates in hp world with wasted wishes, then he spends 10-15 years in time dilation learning magic and other skills, at 11 he enters the hogwarts express, in the next chapter he reincarnates as niklaus mikaelson in vampire diaries. what happened here? well, your guess is as good as mine. i dropped this waste of time at this point
story got tooo strange ? ? directly jump of new thing and character overall very bad writing mtl story are more good then this , . . ..
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1) Writing quality - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3.3. Gg stupidly spent desires. 5) background of the world - 2. We need to add more realism. 6) Overall rating - 3.
Really great just add translations in the first few chapters they are missing also please update more at least once a week not once a month
I enjoyed reading the story including reading the originals volumes, I also enjoyed the way he acted even if the character speaks in an old English type of way.
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1) Writing quality - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3.3. Gg stupidly spent desires. 5) background of the world - 2. We need to add more realism. 6) Overall rating - 3.
1) Writing quality - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3.3. Gg stupidly spent desires. 5) background of the world - 2. We need to add more realism. 6) Overall rating - 3.
I don't understand why you had him go through all the time studying magic and completing his inheritance in the world of Harry Potter just to turn around and throw him into a different world and body, then not allow him to use anything he's just spent a decade learning and not even have him got to hogwarts or meet anyone. Overall why did you abandon him being harry potter?