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writing this review after chapter 41 and honestly I thought that this was a great fanfiction up until the DBZ unlimited power, it went from realistic to insane and dumb and with the inclusion of the real MC being so strong and the mc not even being not smart, but plain dumb, honestly after the DBZ arc makes it so that this story isnt readable and should be stopped purely so that massive dissapointment isnt there.
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I don’t like the fact he has cultivation in a non-cultivation world and I don’t like cultivation novels very much due to the brain cells that I lose trying to understand it
it's good and all but where's black widow???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
hope it goes far in the story..🎊 😂😂😂👍👍👍👌🎉🎊🎊😄😄😄😄😊😊♒♒♒😝😝😝♒♒♒😄😄😄🎉.............,........................................
hello, are you still going to upload more chapters or it will just end at chapter 60.. I don't really have money for patreon cause im unemployed haha
I can nothing add. It's was terrible ok maybe first 5 chapters you can try but later its fall soo low. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁
After that chapter things starter to fall off good luck with your fanfic it was fun for a few chapter but gone down hill real quick.....................
Saya menyukai fanfic ini.... Tapi alangkah baiknya kalau author tidak perlu menggabungkan dunia dengan para reinkarnator lainnya dan saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik kedepannya
Great start, I like the first few Chapters and will stockpile on chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Don't know why the rating is so low but this is really good. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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This definitely one of my favorite stories. The story is good, the character is op as I like them to be. Overall my type of story. Updating rate is good.
I'll be honest I wasn't expecting this fanfic to be as good as it is. The author did this really funny thing with subverting our expectations, in the beginning were made to believe that he's primary goal is getting into Natasha's panties. And for all the people that read the first 6 chapters and left it because of cultivation. I understand but hers the thing cultivation was present for like 5 good minutes before being kicked to the waist side where it belongs. Another thing I noticed is that a group of people have been review booming this authors stories because if you read this story there is no way that this story falls below 4.5. Allright that's all I have to say... go away now.
The author has improved their writing style since last series. The story is much more streamlined, has better pacing, and the mc is more likeable. Also more relatable in that he is more in tune with his emotions. Thank you for your continued efforts.
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First 39 chapters good stuff. 40 onward to be determined. Chapter 40 added a twist which could be good or bad, will have to wait and see....
The story so far is about a guy on a journey, with the end goal being to bang Black Widow. It's development has been okay, but the path is not a straight line all the way to the top. He is a powerful character, but once he reaches his end goal, if it weren't for the changes that the author made in the story in chapter 40, then it would be hard to keep the author interested in finishing this story, because it's hard to make an OP Mc slice of life after the main goal has been completed, like in Monkey in the Unverse.
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i dont need to read the whole thing. this series wasnt actually good but i kept reading, the moment ''someone''(if you know you know) died this series ended for me.
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i personally liked the story i only dislike the update period but anything other than that it's pretty good. I expected it to be boring because of the title but it was the complete opposite.
Has a good foundation on the story and a good backbone. Keep up with the good work and I can speak for your fans that we hope you'll start updating daily ☺️☺️☺️
I've been enjoying this fanfic since I found it and I've been stalled the chapters up until the most recent one and I have to say so far I have loved it keep up the excellent writing just know it's not many people who can do what you do and you get my highest respect for that for whatever that's worth progress water👍😎
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writing this review after chapter 41 and honestly I thought that this was a great fanfiction up until the DBZ unlimited power, it went from realistic to insane and dumb and with the inclusion of the real MC being so strong and the mc not even being not smart, but plain dumb, honestly after the DBZ arc makes it so that this story isnt readable and should be stopped purely so that massive dissapointment isnt there.
ネタバレを明かす I don’t like the fact he has cultivation in a non-cultivation world and I don’t like cultivation novels very much due to the brain cells that I lose trying to understand it
it's good and all but where's black widow???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
hope it goes far in the story..🎊 😂😂😂👍👍👍👌🎉🎊🎊😄😄😄😄😊😊♒♒♒😝😝😝♒♒♒😄😄😄🎉.............,........................................
hello, are you still going to upload more chapters or it will just end at chapter 60.. I don't really have money for patreon cause im unemployed haha
I can nothing add. It's was terrible ok maybe first 5 chapters you can try but later its fall soo low. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁
After that chapter things starter to fall off good luck with your fanfic it was fun for a few chapter but gone down hill real quick.....................
Saya menyukai fanfic ini.... Tapi alangkah baiknya kalau author tidak perlu menggabungkan dunia dengan para reinkarnator lainnya dan saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik kedepannya
Great start, I like the first few Chapters and will stockpile on chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Don't know why the rating is so low but this is really good. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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This definitely one of my favorite stories. The story is good, the character is op as I like them to be. Overall my type of story. Updating rate is good.
I'll be honest I wasn't expecting this fanfic to be as good as it is. The author did this really funny thing with subverting our expectations, in the beginning were made to believe that he's primary goal is getting into Natasha's panties. And for all the people that read the first 6 chapters and left it because of cultivation. I understand but hers the thing cultivation was present for like 5 good minutes before being kicked to the waist side where it belongs. Another thing I noticed is that a group of people have been review booming this authors stories because if you read this story there is no way that this story falls below 4.5. Allright that's all I have to say... go away now.
The author has improved their writing style since last series. The story is much more streamlined, has better pacing, and the mc is more likeable. Also more relatable in that he is more in tune with his emotions. Thank you for your continued efforts.
Asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma asuma[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
First 39 chapters good stuff. 40 onward to be determined. Chapter 40 added a twist which could be good or bad, will have to wait and see....
The story so far is about a guy on a journey, with the end goal being to bang Black Widow. It's development has been okay, but the path is not a straight line all the way to the top. He is a powerful character, but once he reaches his end goal, if it weren't for the changes that the author made in the story in chapter 40, then it would be hard to keep the author interested in finishing this story, because it's hard to make an OP Mc slice of life after the main goal has been completed, like in Monkey in the Unverse.
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-dogwater complete trash
ネタバレを明かす i dont need to read the whole thing. this series wasnt actually good but i kept reading, the moment ''someone''(if you know you know) died this series ended for me.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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ネタバレを明かす i personally liked the story i only dislike the update period but anything other than that it's pretty good. I expected it to be boring because of the title but it was the complete opposite.
Has a good foundation on the story and a good backbone. Keep up with the good work and I can speak for your fans that we hope you'll start updating daily ☺️☺️☺️
I've been enjoying this fanfic since I found it and I've been stalled the chapters up until the most recent one and I have to say so far I have loved it keep up the excellent writing just know it's not many people who can do what you do and you get my highest respect for that for whatever that's worth progress water👍😎