Reviews of Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox by Wryyyyyyyy - Webnovel

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Wryyyyyyyy

Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~

LV 11

Wryyyyyyyy

Just a normal 5 star review just like many Authors in this platform do! UmU! Anyways, this would be an extension to the Q&A section part of my other review, be sure to comment down your thoughts guys and thank you very much for reading this novel!

LV 4

FAFC7384

Me en canto el fanfic de date a live,esuno de los más raros casi no hay muchos de esos, que buena imaginación tienes laver dad me en canto mucho ojalá sigas no como algunos que denjan su contenido

LV 12

i_SiMp_FoR_2dS

Is this fanfic still on hiatus? it's been 7 months where's the update author🥲

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Kane_Estler

I like novels were the mc is not human there to few of them

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Longshan

thanks for the comment I wouldn't have read it. MCs who don't seek harem? It was nonsense for this novel. What do I read it for? And having two more mc's is something I don't like so much, bye.

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Lao_Stev

10/10 all the way, one of the best DAL fanfics I've read.

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Drag_N_5405

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Drag_N_5405

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LV 4

Daoist3X0NDQ

good it is very nice....................

LV 13

Keimuru

This is the first time I'm reading a Fanfic and I must say I didn't regret choosing this as my first. Honestly I have low expectations when I read this, I thought it's just a certain degenerate fantasies with messed up plot..... anyway take responsibility author for taking my first...

LV 14

Wolf_king_fenrir

I imagine the mc looking more like Solomon/Romani from FGO.

LV 4

IdleYoungMaster

Alright, it's time for the actual review. For the first 3 or so chapters, it was unbearable to read (You can say that I cringed so hard at those). Though, the rest of the chapter becomes better and better. Author shows exceptional knowledge when it comes to DAL and tries to make the details (Not the story, just the details) as near to the canon as possible, which is a plus for me. The story development is also enjoyable as well. Meanwhile, the writing quality is very good, another huge plus for me. It made it so that I can read the story better. Lastly, his main character did show some kind of character development.

LV 1

DaoistjcJwtW

Muy buena la historia sigue así ya casi no hay historia de date a live o que está relacionada muy poco sigue así me encanta la historia 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😕😕😕😕😕😕😕👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 2

Laplace_Scathach

I already made a review for this novel several times I guess, but this is an actual review. Writing Quality: 4.8/5 Pretty Decent! Errors and typos are rare, but it is still there so not 5 star. There are also some inconsistency on using some words but well, still good nonetheless. Story Development: 4.5/5 Pretty good so far, despite some confusing parts. But as far as the story progresses, rather than confusion, it rather makes me more curious about what would happen next! This is pretty good in my opinion. Character Design: 3.5/5 OG DAL characters mostly maintain there personalities. For Tohka's case though, I can say you did a pretty good job making her a YANDERE! And I have no qualms about that. Turning to the MC though...Not the greatest, and also not the worst. Rei seems to be a tricky character if I may conclude... Updating Stability: 3/5 I should've bluntly rated this as 2/5 except for the fact that you post LONG chapters. One chapter per week? Definitely not great. Hope you update more though. World Background: 4.8/5 I'm a big fan of DAL and FGO. Some things don't add up and gets rather confusing but it is interesting nonetheless! Overall: 4.2/5 Last time, I was just reviewing mindlessly since I really liked this story. The thing I want the author to improve though was the UPDATES. Back then, it was pretty good but now...uh huh. Despite its shortcomings, this is still a pretty good fanfic, I recommend this to DAL fans out there, this may interest you lot!

LV 3

Kamishiro_Andres

I have no complaints with this fic, it's 10/10, although I wish it would improve the update time, everything else is a 5 ☆ I hope there will be more "Date a live" fics, since this is one of the best, and hopefully there is a multiverse for "Fate" which would be nice.

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Samado_Antar_2004

Cool...............................😇🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

LV 2

DDLC

Everything to be found in a good fanfiction can be found here even if at times it will look like it’s slow or lagging behind I assure you this fanfiction is worth giving a try to read if you like Date a Live and a fun twist on the story it has potential but we’ll see where it’ll go in the future

LV 4

Selectials

1) Too boring. 2) The power of gg changes frequently. 3) there is too little plot. 4) you scored a bolt on the characters, since there are few actions with them and they look like nps. 6) The world where gg is located is written poorly.

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Hazito

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AbsurdReader

Great FF! But needs faster updates! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Lazyboi

I just woke from a nap and got the urge to do a review for no reason. This should be the 4th one or was it 3th?....I forgot. Anyway, we are now done with the Tohka arc which took so long because you got things to do author-san. The date part of the arc is quite bland because some parts still follows canon, this is freaking "Date" a live. But aside from that, the interesting part for me is that Tohka is changing mentally different from her canon self with touch of yandere (Mio would be proud). I'm curious to see how she would turn out in the later arcs with this change and her interactions with Rei. Rei is also having his character development although slowly but it's there nonetheless. Maybe he can finally evolved into an alpha eroge protagonist after he's done to house more waifus. I'm quite sad that fullharem can't come to be because it would make canon more prominent again. So now, I'm focusing on the chaotic trio (Gudako, Shiori, Mio) and lolis. I ain't backing from those so if you do one of those moves and entrust Yoshino to Shido then I don't know what I'll do author-san.... The chaldea team consisting of Gukdako (chaos incarnate), Mash (I could be wrong about the number) hasn't done anything as of yet but that might change in the next arc. So yeah, I'm done with the review. If you are reading this author-san then remember my warning.....and OUT!

LV 3

Monsieur_Anon

Good writing quality as of late. Except for the fact that you often post chapters with broken or uncompleted sentences. Need to fix that. Story Development is going steady so far. Not the best, but still in good standards. Character design... not the best but still bearable. Nothing much really changed and I hope you may work on that next. Updating Stability, 5 chapters a week is decent specially the chapters you are posting is ranging up on 2.5 to 3k words. World background is interesting yet confusing at the same time. I hope you create more chapters which some give depth to this matter since some things are just very confusing at this point. Overall, this novel is still good in my opinion. Though it clearly needs some improvements and adjustments specially on the MC, I can still conclude that this FF is a good read.

LV 4

Selectials

1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 2. 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 2. 5) background of the world - 3.. 6) Overall rating - 3.

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jeanpierregerardo

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Xizar

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LV 5

MechanicalHeart101

One of the best date a live fanfics I have found. You have my full support hope you keep up the good work. I'm a big fan of Elsword. Nice idea😁👍

LV 3

Absolute_Power05

I hope dis is good 😊 I can't find a good book now a days and it's my first time seeing a day date a live in webnovel so yeah I really want it Tobe a good book and thanks author for thinking of doing dis book/story...