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Just wanted to ask whether or not you'd like Ayato to continue using honorifics or not. I don't mind it either way, I'm happy to keep them, I'm happy to remove them, either way is fine for me. I just used it originally as another way of separating him from others. Nothing much will really change either way, but I'll let you decide.

Finally, this story is not a wish fulfilment story and my character isn't a mary/gary-sue, so he isn't perfect in every possible way. I want him to work for his power, and I'd feel like it wouldn't be right to make him more powerful than your typical adeptus and such right off the bat and/or with little effort.

I'm not the best or experienced writer, in fact I'm only in eighth grade, so I'm not sure whether his rate progression as of right now is okay or not. Unless you want me to rush his power growth somehow, I'll try to think of something. I'm open for suggestions as to what to do on that regard.

Aside from that, see you when the next chapter comes out.


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