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"So, that's how this all ends, what a waste..."
When the Demon Lord Aziel Vor'thega was banished by his own brothers' and sisters' betrayal, he thought that everything was lost.
Colluding with those worms, those despicable humans and their Holy Guardians, Aziel and his blood brother Cahal the Demon God found themselves in a hopeless, situation!
He wasn't ready to give up, and let those wretched traitors, those mongrels have the last laugh! His anger, his rage didn't allow his immortal soul to rest, but instead something unexpected happened!
Tearing a rift in space, he was sucked into the void.
Reduced back to a single soul shard, the core of his eternal existence, he found himself in a strange new world... and with that, a new start.
A chance to climb back, and enact his vengeance upon those betrayers!
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well i am reviewing it again , this novel became 💩 chinese reborn urban cultivator troope 😐mc can destroy continents or (even the whole planet if he exert full force ,may not be) dudes a demon lord and millions years old at that 😑and he's acting like a idiot , he has power why not just go boom bang 💥💥💣💥💥and just grab it all, chunnubiyo type 💩acting mature but is an idiot, and how tf does earth has something that can stop aziels perception? unless its some alien 💩author will put forward.😧i am disappointed in this novel and myself for keeping my hopes up
It started good, but it quickly turned bad with that wohle high school stuff. Like seriously why would mc want to go to school.... It make s no sense and that whole part of story feels of and forced. I wanted to give you one star but update frewuncy saved you. Well be warned people, the beginning is great but i quickly turns into a under average cultivation novel with MC dumb as rock.
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Solid world building. Love the prehistoric start, it makes the start very unique! It is nicely written, not too hard on the eye. Like the novel very much!
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This is one of the most unique novel i have read . the world building is solid and characters emotions can be feel . keep up the good work and i want more more More MOre MORe MORE MORE MOREEE MOR
Hello! I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart? Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision. At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace! --- When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on? Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual. I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch... As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything. "Male Lead - Strong Acting Weak Don't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
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I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author. Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
A great, interesting novel with a unique plot. Though I cannot say I'm not biased, the novel does actually have I do believe that many will find some enjoyment in Aziel's story! It starts a bit far from the past for a 'Modern' world, but it is refreshing at the same time!
The first chapter is so captivating. The detailed description of the action engulfs your mind, like you a part of the happenings. Perfectly written.
Really solid world building. The author has a strong command of English and has managed to bring together a compelling story. I just hope he posts more often
It is nicely written story so far with very good English used with little repetition of certain phrases. The struggles of the MC were vividly expressed the only thing that was missing was more chapter.
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE AND EXPRESS AND CONTINUE THE STORY I THOUGHT IT WAS A DEMON LORD SYSTEM KINDA THING THAT'S WHY I CAME AND WAS ABOUT TO DROP IT! BUT THE WAY YOU WRITE FASCINATE ME SO I WILL CONTINUE TO READ[img=recommend] HOPE YOU STAY HEALTHY AND WRITE A LOT
Thanku author I will keep your warning in mind and will not read the novel,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,m,m,m,m.,.,.,.,.,...z.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
This made me cry, first chapter had me hooked, the writing was good and I had so many questions I just had to keep reading. Loved the first world setting and what it he had to go through. Thought I found another great read to go with my favorites. Then all of a sudden it turns to boring cliché cultivation novel. It almost seems he just gave up and copy and paste form another novel about a cultivation god reborn in modern world. Really sad to have to drop this
The general world building is pretty good, with a nice story to it. I would really like more of this. BUT there are a lot of errors, especially he/she her/his... and there are some weird story developments... like when Lydia, the mother of the Myra just comes outta nowhere and jumps him
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Finally! You did a rewrite of Zenith! I hope its better and more amazing than the other already amazing novel! Good work and good luck!! Cant wait to read the .ew changes.
i really like idea of your book its a fantastic story and i hope you continue to update i really loved it and i also recommend everyone to add it to their reading list
i read all the chapters in one go, very enjoyable so far, hopefully it will stay this way, big points for him being op and i really liked the backstory before the modern life started.
at first, the story is good but it downgraded when suddenly the author suddenly change his troupe to a medieval fantasy world where demon lord, heroes, knights mages to a cultivation like novel, you know the usual troupe where he meets the mysterious grandpa in the park with his granddaughter practicing but the MC criticized the girl martial art in his head and the girl notice throw an almost tantrums but grandpa stop her and MC sat on the tree cultivate grandpa notices his cultivation amaze and etc etc where MC show his might, go to the auction face slap like usual in the eastern cultivation novel, maybe there'll be a youngmaster, the offend, kill, offend again then kill again