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This book is very good. I wish that there was a bit more from the system though.
I personally enjoyed it quite a bit. I've stopped at 230 purely because up to this point its been about 70% focused on the tang family and mcs father. I understand that they take up a big part of the background but I just find it a bit repetitive
at least he learned to build his own company unlike some other mc who will act like some kind of bigshot hmph
me pareció genial combina muchas cosas que me gustan de otras novelas en una sola el final me parece un poco rápido después de acabar con la familia Tang me parece que pudo tener mas historia pero entiendo que el foco principal de la novela es la venganza del mc contra los que le hicieron sufrir aun así genial la novela
MC depend on system and luck thats it, so many stupid stupid idea that just work cuz its novel and so many issues could be easily solves if mc use brain but nah let just wait and find fault or wait for my enemy to make mistake
After 250 the story development is too slow. No involvement of system literally. Just reading the tang family talking almost 100 episodes.i hote the author consider story building and frequent involvement of mc with the story.
This work is not as bad as people say it. Is mc stupid? Maybe or maybe not depends on situation. Is system broken to much? Well it has plot armor. Is there a harem? No and i like it very much. Bad think if you like reading this kind of things is that mc have less screen time than the Wang family or others antagonists. In my opinion it's a 4, no more, no less. If you want to read this kind of novels i can recomend it
great read, a little too overboard with villains of the book other than that would definitely read again
Started off ok! Revenge +system + faceslapping . Cheap troupe but fun. story degraded in the middle... large chunk in the middle didn't even have the MC, almost felt like the antagonist had become the focus. characters thought process become a tad hard to follow one second they are sincerely regretting next arc they are back to being arrogant. system seems to disappear at the end m. climax was meh
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This is probably one of the dumbest novels I've ever read. This is a wish fulfillment novel where apart from ignoring a system that will give money and real estate for choosing options, you have to suspend realistic things like people flying from one country to another in a matter of minutes. Or a court case against a big corporation can be solved in hours instead of years. It is THE most efficient novel universe I have ever read. It is also a universe where the most coincidences happen to the MC. I'm not smart to begin with but I feel like I just lost some brain cells from reading this.
the novel was quite good at the beginning but the overemphasizing on his banter with his father family seems stupid for a tycoon as well as the stupid suspense of that chu girl and him, this is totally nonsense and just expanding the book, what's the excess of hiding when the mc was not portrayed as a hiding person.....
As of writing The novel is complete with 510 chapters, all of which I have read. To summerise this book up in a nutshell it is one giant revenge/face slapping ark with some decent character development. The story is pretty solid but near the end it starts getting rushed quite a bit, seems like the author didn’t know how to continue due to how op the system/MC got. Would I recommend it? Yes It is a pretty fun read, where there are some pretty big issues the adventure for revenge is quite enjoyable, even if some story points got cut super short in the last 50-100 chapters. Overall 4/5, you will know pretty quick if it is your thing or not.
the story is consistent towards the title of the book, it's a good read sad that it's finished . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ......
This system is probably one of the worst I've seen. Timing on it is unusual as well, like why couldn't he get it at time of kneeling instead of two years after his mothers death. Rewards that would be easily tracked (cash, stock shares, prime real estate) make no sense. the system should at least explain how that's not going to be suspicious. Super melodramatic.
The main character is not that bad, but the rest of the character and the way the plot unravel is so mediocre it drags the whole score down the gutter. You'll find better writing in probably more than 50% of fanfiction out there. Definitely not worth spending your coins to unlock the premium chapters.
It was okay at the start with the usual face slapping but downgraded soon. I mean Emma Stone seriously . And then came his childhood friend the supposed "big CEO" as she was introduced but didn't know who he was in business industry and some no named extra knew all the cooperations he had recently done and was telling them to his father. And then the MC he looked pretty decent compared to others but turned stupid later, not just him everyone, he literally bidded 100 million in an auction in front of the childhood friend and her mother who still didn't understood that the guy is rich. It was really frustrating to read about supposed intelligent characters act stupid.
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Judging purely from all the 1 star reviews saying its just face slapping and the mc getting so much stuff for nothing and that all the people around the mc treat him as omnipotent..... Seems like exactly the kind of mind numbing power fantasy I've been searching for! No sense. No depth. Just one dude absolutely winnin
next webnovel Stepmother: I am asked to give a pp to my half-sister ............... ............ . ................... ......... ... .... ..
honestly, I was kind of on board with this novel for a while but then they had to bring in Emma Stone (Zombieland would be one of her most famous roles) and confused her for Emma Watson (Heromine in Harry Potter). Not only that, Stone was already in the middle of a job but then up and leaves to shoot a commercial for some Chinese company. I'm pretty sure that would have been a serious breach of contract and it didn't seem like she got paid to do said commercial either so she'd be making a loss regardless. not to forget they didn't go through her agency either. if the author were going to add a Hollywood star then at least respect their professionalism and have her not be in the middle of work if you want a celebrity, and have the right celebrity in the first place.
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Well let's be honest here from the start till when the main character gets married every chapter was perfect but right after that he stop the development of the story you should only focus on the main lead and people around him and yeah you can mention the characters as well but more then 50 chapters are she goes and there do this and that they should be developing everything in secret and the rise the problems for the main lead and his every day problems and how he sloves them and something I think the writer is just uploading whatever he wants this is just my opinion cuz I read a lot stories like this weither it in English or mtl this book was very fun until writer doing the side stories long thank you and sorry if l have offended any of his fans cuz just like until today I was his fan
Raw: 继母寻亲：开局要我捐骨髓救她儿 I found this on a You know what site so I decided to post the raw here. Thank me. I deserve it. (Was a joke.) Spreadinngggggg this out
Currently on chapter 334 and I am very pleased with the story. At first the 'system' was pulling the story forward as the characters and world was developed. Then things got rolling pretty good and the story life exploded into a fulfilling story that keeps you eager to find out where things will go next. Sometimes it's predictable but there's usually a twist that is there unexpectedly. The MC is likable and charming. I like his style and moral outlook. It's a Chinese story based in China. Chinese pride is apparent as well as the mindset of Chinese people who are proudly Chinese. It's not a heavy factor in the story but some people have a hard time hearing the 'China numer one' over the country that they are from. I like it because it exposes me to a different culture that I'm not used to seeing from the inside. The MC doesn't go crazy for the country but he's supportive and understanding with pride of being Chinese. I'd be very happy to have the MC make me breakfast in bed. 😊
I found it fun in the first 10 chapters, but then there's just a slap in the face, there's no story, it's even angry, the mc is invited out of nowhere to go to a car store and who's there? his brother, so there are 3 chapters of slaps in the face at the car store, then the brother gets sick and goes to the hospital and now guess what? the mc runs over someone and needs to go to the same hospital at the same time just to get slapped in the face by a corrupt doctor
This book is very good. I wish that there was a bit more from the system though.
I personally enjoyed it quite a bit. I've stopped at 230 purely because up to this point its been about 70% focused on the tang family and mcs father. I understand that they take up a big part of the background but I just find it a bit repetitive
at least he learned to build his own company unlike some other mc who will act like some kind of bigshot hmph
me pareció genial combina muchas cosas que me gustan de otras novelas en una sola el final me parece un poco rápido después de acabar con la familia Tang me parece que pudo tener mas historia pero entiendo que el foco principal de la novela es la venganza del mc contra los que le hicieron sufrir aun así genial la novela
MC depend on system and luck thats it, so many stupid stupid idea that just work cuz its novel and so many issues could be easily solves if mc use brain but nah let just wait and find fault or wait for my enemy to make mistake
After 250 the story development is too slow. No involvement of system literally. Just reading the tang family talking almost 100 episodes.i hote the author consider story building and frequent involvement of mc with the story.
This work is not as bad as people say it. Is mc stupid? Maybe or maybe not depends on situation. Is system broken to much? Well it has plot armor. Is there a harem? No and i like it very much. Bad think if you like reading this kind of things is that mc have less screen time than the Wang family or others antagonists. In my opinion it's a 4, no more, no less. If you want to read this kind of novels i can recomend it
great read, a little too overboard with villains of the book other than that would definitely read again
Started off ok! Revenge +system + faceslapping . Cheap troupe but fun. story degraded in the middle... large chunk in the middle didn't even have the MC, almost felt like the antagonist had become the focus. characters thought process become a tad hard to follow one second they are sincerely regretting next arc they are back to being arrogant. system seems to disappear at the end m. climax was meh
ネタバレを明かす This is probably one of the dumbest novels I've ever read. This is a wish fulfillment novel where apart from ignoring a system that will give money and real estate for choosing options, you have to suspend realistic things like people flying from one country to another in a matter of minutes. Or a court case against a big corporation can be solved in hours instead of years. It is THE most efficient novel universe I have ever read. It is also a universe where the most coincidences happen to the MC. I'm not smart to begin with but I feel like I just lost some brain cells from reading this.
the novel was quite good at the beginning but the overemphasizing on his banter with his father family seems stupid for a tycoon as well as the stupid suspense of that chu girl and him, this is totally nonsense and just expanding the book, what's the excess of hiding when the mc was not portrayed as a hiding person.....
As of writing The novel is complete with 510 chapters, all of which I have read. To summerise this book up in a nutshell it is one giant revenge/face slapping ark with some decent character development. The story is pretty solid but near the end it starts getting rushed quite a bit, seems like the author didn’t know how to continue due to how op the system/MC got. Would I recommend it? Yes It is a pretty fun read, where there are some pretty big issues the adventure for revenge is quite enjoyable, even if some story points got cut super short in the last 50-100 chapters. Overall 4/5, you will know pretty quick if it is your thing or not.
the story is consistent towards the title of the book, it's a good read sad that it's finished . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ......
This system is probably one of the worst I've seen. Timing on it is unusual as well, like why couldn't he get it at time of kneeling instead of two years after his mothers death. Rewards that would be easily tracked (cash, stock shares, prime real estate) make no sense. the system should at least explain how that's not going to be suspicious. Super melodramatic.
The main character is not that bad, but the rest of the character and the way the plot unravel is so mediocre it drags the whole score down the gutter. You'll find better writing in probably more than 50% of fanfiction out there. Definitely not worth spending your coins to unlock the premium chapters.
It was okay at the start with the usual face slapping but downgraded soon. I mean Emma Stone seriously . And then came his childhood friend the supposed "big CEO" as she was introduced but didn't know who he was in business industry and some no named extra knew all the cooperations he had recently done and was telling them to his father. And then the MC he looked pretty decent compared to others but turned stupid later, not just him everyone, he literally bidded 100 million in an auction in front of the childhood friend and her mother who still didn't understood that the guy is rich. It was really frustrating to read about supposed intelligent characters act stupid.
ネタバレを明かす Judging purely from all the 1 star reviews saying its just face slapping and the mc getting so much stuff for nothing and that all the people around the mc treat him as omnipotent..... Seems like exactly the kind of mind numbing power fantasy I've been searching for! No sense. No depth. Just one dude absolutely winnin
next webnovel Stepmother: I am asked to give a pp to my half-sister ............... ............ . ................... ......... ... .... ..
honestly, I was kind of on board with this novel for a while but then they had to bring in Emma Stone (Zombieland would be one of her most famous roles) and confused her for Emma Watson (Heromine in Harry Potter). Not only that, Stone was already in the middle of a job but then up and leaves to shoot a commercial for some Chinese company. I'm pretty sure that would have been a serious breach of contract and it didn't seem like she got paid to do said commercial either so she'd be making a loss regardless. not to forget they didn't go through her agency either. if the author were going to add a Hollywood star then at least respect their professionalism and have her not be in the middle of work if you want a celebrity, and have the right celebrity in the first place.
ネタバレを明かす Well let's be honest here from the start till when the main character gets married every chapter was perfect but right after that he stop the development of the story you should only focus on the main lead and people around him and yeah you can mention the characters as well but more then 50 chapters are she goes and there do this and that they should be developing everything in secret and the rise the problems for the main lead and his every day problems and how he sloves them and something I think the writer is just uploading whatever he wants this is just my opinion cuz I read a lot stories like this weither it in English or mtl this book was very fun until writer doing the side stories long thank you and sorry if l have offended any of his fans cuz just like until today I was his fan
Raw: 继母寻亲：开局要我捐骨髓救她儿 I found this on a You know what site so I decided to post the raw here. Thank me. I deserve it. (Was a joke.) Spreadinngggggg this out
Currently on chapter 334 and I am very pleased with the story. At first the 'system' was pulling the story forward as the characters and world was developed. Then things got rolling pretty good and the story life exploded into a fulfilling story that keeps you eager to find out where things will go next. Sometimes it's predictable but there's usually a twist that is there unexpectedly. The MC is likable and charming. I like his style and moral outlook. It's a Chinese story based in China. Chinese pride is apparent as well as the mindset of Chinese people who are proudly Chinese. It's not a heavy factor in the story but some people have a hard time hearing the 'China numer one' over the country that they are from. I like it because it exposes me to a different culture that I'm not used to seeing from the inside. The MC doesn't go crazy for the country but he's supportive and understanding with pride of being Chinese. I'd be very happy to have the MC make me breakfast in bed. 😊
I found it fun in the first 10 chapters, but then there's just a slap in the face, there's no story, it's even angry, the mc is invited out of nowhere to go to a car store and who's there? his brother, so there are 3 chapters of slaps in the face at the car store, then the brother gets sick and goes to the hospital and now guess what? the mc runs over someone and needs to go to the same hospital at the same time just to get slapped in the face by a corrupt doctor
Very interesting. Keep it up author. Please write another novel.