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The novel’s writing and background were good, but it was quite boring as the mc didnt meet any other players for a long time. However if you’re fine with the mc basically being alone for 50+ chaps, it’s pretty good.
😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲 Ooh my!!! This is a refreshing take on the system and cultivation theme of fanfiction and I truly enjoyed what you have done with your take on it. I just started this book 📖 today and I have not stop 🛑 reading it yet! Keep up the good 👍 work! I look forward to what you do next.
Good read, hoping for more chapters! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Ill give a try to this one, i checked the other ones and mage of primordial chaos did catch my attention but once i saw the tragedy tag i ran away xD
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As the creator of the character of Ragnar, I have had somewhat (albeit, not at all that large compared to Cyclxne) of a hand in the creation of this book - but I only chose to do so because of how much potential I saw in it day one. The writing is awesome, the premise is so good I wish I'd come up with it myself. Definitely something I would buy in a bookstore.
Tf i spend 2 weeks looking for good survival novel with no result and 2nd day after i stoped looking for it i find this... I feel happy and iritated at the same time.
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I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
I like your previous work quite a bit and although this is in the early stages im quite excited to see how this turns out in the future keep up the good work
Without question this is a great master piece that anyone has to fall for. (Personal opinion)With such a great author. I can only ask for more chapters. Keep it up author.👌👌👌
A simulated apocalypse with characters with basic designs but different characteristics to them makes the reader want to read more of the story. While the world building might seem too similar to other novels, it is a common thing to add game elements and such to a setting like this. Since it's still too early in the novel to make a comment on the main character, I'm still interested in how he will develop throughout the story. I'm really hyped to read more of this story, looking forward to the new updates ! Also, I love the cover, it really attracts the reader's attention.
No doubt this book has very unique story line that I came across with... Although at starting it gives the vive of SG but as the story continues it's getting better more and more... Highly recommend this book to all the readers out there!
So, firstly, just so you know, author, I rarely give full 5-star reviews lol. If you look at the last few reviews I've done, I'm sure that you will notice that none of them have received full marks so that alone should tell you the entire story. Synopsis: Very nearly done. It's well organized, precise, and tells what the story is about in full glory. No complaints there. Story Development: Let's just say it assassinated all doubts I had going in~. The character is already a killer and while I was hoping you didn't follow the cliche route with an assassin that seemingly enjoys killing, it was still well done. Character Design: Your descriptions were fluid and I had no issue trying to picture how your character looked. Some readers rather to imagine their characters, however, so it's also a matter of preference. But well done. Finally, I can see why you're #1 in WPC #234 so far. This is coming from the current 5th place participant *cough*. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work. You're sure to win if you continue like this!
This is amazing and uniquely interesting hopefully there will be a sequel if it’s possible have not gotten to the end ? Will there be a sequel?
The novel’s writing and background were good, but it was quite boring as the mc didnt meet any other players for a long time. However if you’re fine with the mc basically being alone for 50+ chaps, it’s pretty good.
😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲 Ooh my!!! This is a refreshing take on the system and cultivation theme of fanfiction and I truly enjoyed what you have done with your take on it. I just started this book 📖 today and I have not stop 🛑 reading it yet! Keep up the good 👍 work! I look forward to what you do next.
Good read, hoping for more chapters! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Ill give a try to this one, i checked the other ones and mage of primordial chaos did catch my attention but once i saw the tragedy tag i ran away xD
good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,good,
As the creator of the character of Ragnar, I have had somewhat (albeit, not at all that large compared to Cyclxne) of a hand in the creation of this book - but I only chose to do so because of how much potential I saw in it day one. The writing is awesome, the premise is so good I wish I'd come up with it myself. Definitely something I would buy in a bookstore.
Tf i spend 2 weeks looking for good survival novel with no result and 2nd day after i stoped looking for it i find this... I feel happy and iritated at the same time.
check this out guys✌️😉✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
I like your previous work quite a bit and although this is in the early stages im quite excited to see how this turns out in the future keep up the good work
Without question this is a great master piece that anyone has to fall for. (Personal opinion)With such a great author. I can only ask for more chapters. Keep it up author.👌👌👌
A simulated apocalypse with characters with basic designs but different characteristics to them makes the reader want to read more of the story. While the world building might seem too similar to other novels, it is a common thing to add game elements and such to a setting like this. Since it's still too early in the novel to make a comment on the main character, I'm still interested in how he will develop throughout the story. I'm really hyped to read more of this story, looking forward to the new updates ! Also, I love the cover, it really attracts the reader's attention.
No doubt this book has very unique story line that I came across with... Although at starting it gives the vive of SG but as the story continues it's getting better more and more... Highly recommend this book to all the readers out there!
So, firstly, just so you know, author, I rarely give full 5-star reviews lol. If you look at the last few reviews I've done, I'm sure that you will notice that none of them have received full marks so that alone should tell you the entire story. Synopsis: Very nearly done. It's well organized, precise, and tells what the story is about in full glory. No complaints there. Story Development: Let's just say it assassinated all doubts I had going in~. The character is already a killer and while I was hoping you didn't follow the cliche route with an assassin that seemingly enjoys killing, it was still well done. Character Design: Your descriptions were fluid and I had no issue trying to picture how your character looked. Some readers rather to imagine their characters, however, so it's also a matter of preference. But well done. Finally, I can see why you're #1 in WPC #234 so far. This is coming from the current 5th place participant *cough*. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work. You're sure to win if you continue like this!
This is amazing and uniquely interesting hopefully there will be a sequel if it’s possible have not gotten to the end ? Will there be a sequel?