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voting pool fail? it was at the top consistently for months and was never released by webnovel. goes to show how little they actually care about their own rules. they release stuff with 10k votes when this had over 4 million and yet this was a voting pool fail? I'm upset that good books like this get buried because webnovel ignores their own rules.
I like how it got like 5 million votes on energy, was number 1 on the rankings for months then just got dropped. gotta love this app....
This looked interesting and stayed for a long time at the top of the voting pool. It's disappointing that it did not get picked to be continued.
I’m here to say this got removed from the voting pool on the Que of books and I don’t see updates I’m sad it got removed today :( Is this story dropped forever???? someone please steal this and write your own I’ll drop $$$$
I've been voting for this every day with my energy stones and now they took it off the voting pool? What's the point of trial reads and picking novels then putting it in voting pool if this happens? This has been in voting pool for 9 months, people are still voting for it and it got taken off like this. I know novels get abandoned in this site, but this novel which was supposed to get translated didn't even start.
Please do yourself a favor and stay far, far, FAR away from this story. The translation is very poor, the author forgets what was written by the next sentence, let alone the next chapter. I know that it’s just the rough beginning of the journey but save yourself the pain and just go find something else to read.
Very raw writing, possibly draft quality. Numerous issues with character names, levels, and even genders lining up. Multiple key plot facts are inconsistent. frequent use of description and language that is awkward, or translated poorly through Google Translate. Despite those strikes, the plot is interesting, to a degree. The MC is definitely OP (as is typical). I managed to power through until chapter 34. With a good hard editor, a polishing up of facts, and a bit more descriptive work for the game mechanics ahead of, or during events, would make this be a worthwhile story to follow.
The writing quality makes it a bit difficult to take serious at times, but I really did enjoy the concept.
the story development is quiet good just a shame the next update is 9 months away oh well
Absolutely terrible. No back story, tragic translation, main character constantly uses new abilities on the spot, giving the entire story a strong feel of being made up on the spot with no information. The author makes you feel like you have to rely on information from other stories in the same genre to grasp the system.
I love the whole idea and reading it simply draws you into the story and knows how to keep your interest so you’re always left wanting more!
horrible quality of language from 6th chapter.. two times MC got same level.. story will be same as others from china about city building games, nothing to look up there
Very solid start, great world building. I just hope the author or WebNovel itself see the potential of the story and support it. Everyone who liked it should demand more instalments of the story.
The story is fun but the translator puts things into the material that aren’t even supposed to be there (For example a battle that didn’t happen in the original). That and the levels are all over the place.
this story is stuck in the voting pool for 8 ish months, and the story quality is way sub par with inconsistencies and broken logic. this story needs to go.
This is a sad joke at translation. The plot isn't even particularly good. If you want to cure cancer, step 1 should be deleting this novel.
it was very ok .............................................................................................................................
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RAW!!!!! THE TRANSLATION TEAM ADDED STUFF THAT DIDN'T EXIST IN THE ORIGINAL!!! WEBNOVEL DELETING COMMENTS THAT SHARE THE RAW. THEY'RE OPENLY SUPPORTING PLAGIARISED WORK OF THE ORIGINAL AUTHORS!! EVEN REVIEWS BELOW 2 STARS GOT REMOVED WHEN IT ALSO ASKED FOR RAW TITLE!!!!
how many votes would thiss novel needed to be pick???? 100mil?or 1bil vote? amazing novel being buried here to rot. unfortunately still stuck...
I'm honestly suprised that this novel hasn't been taken out of queue yet. I mean, it was out at the same time as the one about the dragons child being a transmigrator (Still upset that didn't get picked), as well as the one with an 8 yr old actually being a retired military vet (Deserved to get picked less than dragon one.)
Just my personal opinion lol.. Translation- I had no problems reading it, I might have missed some mistakes but if I didn't notice them it probably means it doesn't matter or was so small I didn't notice it UPDATES- WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER?? Story Development- Pretty good right now tbh , a little OP but Imo I like that Character Design - simple, easy to understand World background is eh but doesn't matter rn
I´d loved the story and the MC (NPC) cheat. It´s a different point of view from other stories whose MC never is an NPC. It is simple fantastic and mind blowing.
This is a a good book, with a captivating story and interesting character development. Hope the next chapters come out soon and that they are just as good as the first 40.
need more of this why won't the author do more chapters it's a really good book
voting pool fail? it was at the top consistently for months and was never released by webnovel. goes to show how little they actually care about their own rules. they release stuff with 10k votes when this had over 4 million and yet this was a voting pool fail? I'm upset that good books like this get buried because webnovel ignores their own rules.
I like how it got like 5 million votes on energy, was number 1 on the rankings for months then just got dropped. gotta love this app....
This looked interesting and stayed for a long time at the top of the voting pool. It's disappointing that it did not get picked to be continued.
I’m here to say this got removed from the voting pool on the Que of books and I don’t see updates I’m sad it got removed today :( Is this story dropped forever???? someone please steal this and write your own I’ll drop $$$$
I've been voting for this every day with my energy stones and now they took it off the voting pool? What's the point of trial reads and picking novels then putting it in voting pool if this happens? This has been in voting pool for 9 months, people are still voting for it and it got taken off like this. I know novels get abandoned in this site, but this novel which was supposed to get translated didn't even start.
Please do yourself a favor and stay far, far, FAR away from this story. The translation is very poor, the author forgets what was written by the next sentence, let alone the next chapter. I know that it’s just the rough beginning of the journey but save yourself the pain and just go find something else to read.
Very raw writing, possibly draft quality. Numerous issues with character names, levels, and even genders lining up. Multiple key plot facts are inconsistent. frequent use of description and language that is awkward, or translated poorly through Google Translate. Despite those strikes, the plot is interesting, to a degree. The MC is definitely OP (as is typical). I managed to power through until chapter 34. With a good hard editor, a polishing up of facts, and a bit more descriptive work for the game mechanics ahead of, or during events, would make this be a worthwhile story to follow.
The writing quality makes it a bit difficult to take serious at times, but I really did enjoy the concept.
the story development is quiet good just a shame the next update is 9 months away oh well
Absolutely terrible. No back story, tragic translation, main character constantly uses new abilities on the spot, giving the entire story a strong feel of being made up on the spot with no information. The author makes you feel like you have to rely on information from other stories in the same genre to grasp the system.
I love the whole idea and reading it simply draws you into the story and knows how to keep your interest so you’re always left wanting more!
horrible quality of language from 6th chapter.. two times MC got same level.. story will be same as others from china about city building games, nothing to look up there
Very solid start, great world building. I just hope the author or WebNovel itself see the potential of the story and support it. Everyone who liked it should demand more instalments of the story.
The story is fun but the translator puts things into the material that aren’t even supposed to be there (For example a battle that didn’t happen in the original). That and the levels are all over the place.
this story is stuck in the voting pool for 8 ish months, and the story quality is way sub par with inconsistencies and broken logic. this story needs to go.
This is a sad joke at translation. The plot isn't even particularly good. If you want to cure cancer, step 1 should be deleting this novel.
it was very ok .............................................................................................................................
mote chaptersssssssssssss mote chaptersssssssssssss mote chaptersssssssssssss mote chaptersssssssssssss mote chaptersssssssssssss mote chaptersssssssssssss
RAW!!!!! THE TRANSLATION TEAM ADDED STUFF THAT DIDN'T EXIST IN THE ORIGINAL!!! WEBNOVEL DELETING COMMENTS THAT SHARE THE RAW. THEY'RE OPENLY SUPPORTING PLAGIARISED WORK OF THE ORIGINAL AUTHORS!! EVEN REVIEWS BELOW 2 STARS GOT REMOVED WHEN IT ALSO ASKED FOR RAW TITLE!!!!
how many votes would thiss novel needed to be pick???? 100mil?or 1bil vote? amazing novel being buried here to rot. unfortunately still stuck...
I'm honestly suprised that this novel hasn't been taken out of queue yet. I mean, it was out at the same time as the one about the dragons child being a transmigrator (Still upset that didn't get picked), as well as the one with an 8 yr old actually being a retired military vet (Deserved to get picked less than dragon one.)
Just my personal opinion lol.. Translation- I had no problems reading it, I might have missed some mistakes but if I didn't notice them it probably means it doesn't matter or was so small I didn't notice it UPDATES- WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER?? Story Development- Pretty good right now tbh , a little OP but Imo I like that Character Design - simple, easy to understand World background is eh but doesn't matter rn
I´d loved the story and the MC (NPC) cheat. It´s a different point of view from other stories whose MC never is an NPC. It is simple fantastic and mind blowing.
This is a a good book, with a captivating story and interesting character development. Hope the next chapters come out soon and that they are just as good as the first 40.
need more of this why won't the author do more chapters it's a really good book