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Naruto: Unrivaled Shinobi [Hiatus | Being Edited] Naruto: Unrivaled Shinobi [Hiatus | Being Edited] original

Naruto: Unrivaled Shinobi [Hiatus | Being Edited]

作者: BlueMoon_IceCat

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章 1: Chapter 1

EDITED

In a wide and huge white room. Two figures can be seen conversing with each other seriously, sitting in a pure gold chairs. One of the two figures is an old man with a handsome face and kind smile while the other figure is a young man with a delicate appearance and a calm expression.

"So, you are saying that I'm already dead? And you're the reason why I died?" The young man asked calmly.

"Yes, it is just as you said. I'm currently in the process of learning the Thunder Law and while practicing it, I accidentally lost control leading the thunder in Earth going in chaos. By a stroke of bad luck, a thunder strikes you, effectively killing you." The old man explains patiently.

"Then, what will you give me as compensation?" The young man asked once again. He leans comfortably in the golden chair while his sight is not leaving the old man's eyes.

"I can reincarnate you in a different world with 3 wishes. Will you take it?" The old man said before conjuring a cup of green tea out of nowhere and sipping it slowly.

The young man seems to think carefully about the offer. He close his eyes and raise his hands to fix his glasses.

"I will take it. However, I want you to raise the wishes from 3 to 9." The young man said before opening his eyes. He tried to increase his compensation.

"You're quiet greedy, young lad. At most, I'll raise it to 4."

"I'm living a happy life with no worries then suddenly you lost control to the Law Of Lightning resulting of my death when I'm not supposed to. Have some conscience, old man. 8 wishes."

"I'm a God. The time I achieved godhood, I already remove my morality and humanhood behind. 5 wishes." The old man's expression already change from calm to serious.

"Just as you said, you already removed your morality and humanhood behind. I don't think I'm the only one that died because of your lost of control over Law Of Lightning. Then, why am the only one receiving this offer? I think it's because I'm special or there is something special within me." The young man said, a smirk adorning his red lips.

The old man squint his eyes before laughing happily.

"Hahahahaha! Good, good. You did not disappoint me. That observational skills is top-notch. You're right. The Karmic Cloud that you and your ancestors saved up already reach a terrifying level. And us, gods, can advance our power with the help of Karmic Clouds that can only be gathered by individuals that balanced Good and Evil perfectly." The old man confessed. He use his fingers to wipe the tears of joy in the corner of his eyes.

"So that's why..." The young man said, now with calculating smile blooming in his lips. "Then, 12 wishes in exchange of my Karmic Cloud."

"That's too much, young man. Although your Karmic Cloud already reaches a terrifying level, it can at most advance my power by a notch so I don't need it that much. I can offer you 9-"

"I accept it." Before the old man can even finish his words, the young man already answered. The young man was already satisfied with the 6 wishes increase.

'Even if you're a God, you still fell for my trap. In the end, I still got 9 wishes.' Ayuna thought.

"Okay, sure. What world or universe do you want to be reincarnated?" The old man smiled gleefully. Though, there's a feeling that something is wrong, he threw it at the back of his mind.

"Any world, right?"

"Yes, of course."

"How about fictional worlds like movies and Animes?"

"There's no such thing as fictional world. All of them truly exist. The scriptwriter, writers, and mangakas just accidentally peeked at the world where there is no God that governs through dreams or sudden idea." The old man patiently explains, clearly in good mood.

"Then reincarnate me in Naruto World."

"Sure, young man. Now, state your wishes."

"Here's my wishes. First, a Gamer System. Second, terrifying talent in all kind of Jutsus. Third, Multiverse Shop, an ability that allows me to buy any kind of things that I need. Fourth, Monster Rearing, an ability that allows me to tame monsters. Fifth, Familiar Space, where my tamed pets can live. Sixth, Armory, an ability to temporarily fuse with my pets to increase my power with no backlash, make it like a kekkei genkai. Seventh, Perfect Fusion, an ability that allows me to fuse things to a more enhanced product. Eighth, I want to be born in Konohagakure as a civilian and an orphan without any blood related family. Ninth, Divine Research, an ability that allows me to command the system to research a certain topic to enhance it. Also, a small request. I want to be born the same year as Uchiha Itachi. That's all." The young man list down all his wishes speedily.

The old man seems to be not even surprised. "Granted."

"Come on, follow me." They old man calls out to the young man before standing up from his chair.

The young also stands up and fix his shirt. The old man started to walk with the young man following him. They headed to a corner wall of the white room where a black gate appears without the young man's knowledge. The black gate immediately opens up. After exiting the white room, a slightly narrow hallway with white paint springs up. They continue to walk dow the halls with the young man curiously looking around. After almost 10 minutes of walking, they arrived in a open room with a portal like thing in the center.

"We are here. The Room Of Divine Travels." The old man said after they arrived in front of the portal. "Now, for the payment." The old man put out his hands with the palm facing up.

"I know." The young man said before putting his hands in the hanging palm. Soon, he feels a part of him flowing to the other palm. That feeling lasts until the old man releases his hands.

But unknown to the God, he use a mystical technique that transfers his Soul's Impurity to an ethereal object.

"Done with the payment, you can now reincarnate." The old man smiles, clearly happy with his gains.

The young man walks to the portal with a calm face. When he was about to enter the portal, he turns to the old man before smiling.

"Oh, before I forgot. Alongside of the Karmic Clouds, I also secretly passed you my soul's impurities by mixing it in the clouds. Bye bye!" The young man smiled wickedly before entering the portal fully.

The old man was first stunned before analyzing the Karmic Clouds he obtained from Ayuna. After fully inspecting it and seeing that the Clouds have blackish smoke floating beside its core stealthily, he angrily shout at the portal.

"I hope you die early, bastard!!!"

***

The young man laughed happily, not caring about the fact that he is being tossed left and right by the void.

'That old man think he can take take advantage of me? Ayuna the Mystic Fairy who rules the underground and owns the black market? He is simply dreaming.'

The young man, Ayuna thought while smiling. 'I should thank the old lady who sold me the Soul Impurity Transfer Technique. At first, I thought it's a sham but now I know it's true and legit. It's just a shame that this technique can only be used once. Well, at least I transferred all of my Soul Impurities to the last drop to him.'

Ayuna then hugs his knees to his chest before resting his head in his arms. ' I just hope Abby and Abraham can live a good life from now on. I already arranged their back path if by any chance, they fail to do what they persue. If I have known that I will die early, I should have cleaned all of those pests in my company.' Ayuna sighs.

[A/N: If you are curious, Abby and Abraham are his adopted children. They are the children of his elder brother who long ago pass away.]

Slowly but steadyly, Ayuna lost consciousness and was swept by the chaotic void.

***

"Push! Just one more! You can do it!" A loud voice sounded in a hospital room alongside of a painful moans and groans.

"AHHHHHH!!!"

"UWAAAH! UWAAAH!"

Along the last powerful push, the lady in the bed gave birth to a small baby that the matron slightly cleans.

"Congratulations. You gave birth to a healthy baby boy." The matron happily said before approaching the lady on the bed. The lady, although haggard because of giving birth cannot hide the her beauty. She possess a pair of beautiful mixed purplish blue eyes, a jet black hair just like the feathers of a crow, white and unblemished skin and a perfectly proportioned body. However, the lady right now was so pale just like snow and seems to be near death.

Seeing this, the matron quickly but gently put the baby in the lady's arms before running out to get a healing-nine that can help her.

Feeling the warm and gentle arms holding him, the baby sleeps more comfortably.

The lady smiles noticing this.

"My child... Your mother knows that she will not last long so... she wants you to remember this... Grow up strong so you can wander throughout the world... Stay healthy all the time... When you find the one you love, love him dearly and don't leave him because others said so... Don't follow your mother's footstep, she is stupid... And lastly, be happy." The lady reminded the baby with tears running down her eyes. She gently kissed the baby's forehead before pouring all of her Chakra in the baby's body to wake up their family's kekkei genkai.

A second later, a purplish pink blooming lotus tattoo appears in the center of the baby's forehead before disappearing. The lady smiles contentedly before closing his eyes, peacefully passing away.

As if the baby feels the death of his mother, he cried loudly.

A minute later, the matron arrived with a healing-nin following her. She was stunned when she see the lady lying down with his son still in her arms, dead.

"My gosh!" She quickly runs to the bed before feeling the vitals of the lady with the healing-nin following her. A flash of sadness appears in her eyes after realizing that the lady was already dead.

"She's already dead." The matron informs the healing-nin beside her. The healing-nin nods in acknowledgement before he gently takes the baby.

"We can only send the baby at the orphanage." The healing-nin said with the matron nodding.


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