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it's good till he starts adding every girl he sees to his harem I'm talm bout great start then everything goes downhill yea the author basically made a great story then ruined it🤣
one of the worst hdxd fics i have read................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
For the first 67 chapter this story is really good, there's a few low points, (like the moka part, that was badly written) but for the most part it's written very well, it strays from cannon and does it's own thing, he's strong and makes his own kingdom and becomes a God, probably one of the top 10 dxd fanfics, sadly once you hit chapter 68 the author started forcing cannon, there were signs of it happening earlier but they were easily ignored (training ophis to be a double agent for the chaos brigade, it was a sentence or 2) it starts by forcing the original peerage for rias even tho there's 0 reason for it, then sending vali/kuroka to form the slash dog with 0 reason, its weird author spent 400k words+ not sticking to cannon only to change it later, I guess he lost his passion or something, still an amazing story up until then though, so defo give this a go.
amazing story the mc is cool and the harem isnt a Pokémon, the guy also isnt a hero but he is kind of like a good persón, the stability of updates is a bit slow though.
well it really is a good read..........................................................................................................................
Hm…. There are many things that i didn‘t like but the one that i most didnt like was the stunt with the harem i mean you are in the world of DxD where there are literaly too much waifus too count and you author picks girls from onther novels ect em yea not smart things and gabriel rly now this makes no sense gabriel would never marry the mc tha she would become a fallen angel the moment she has the intention somethin she would never do and why every DxD fan fic muss have a mc with sacread gear you could make the mc a devil with the bloodline from gojo from jujutsu kaisen (limitless)
Everything was perfect until chapter 49 when you just ruined my day. I pretty much liked the story and I know that it is very hard for you to fit the role of every character in the story but still the solution you came up with made me very disappointed in you. Still, this is your story and you can do whatever you want but the story from chapter 49 upward is not to my taste.
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The story is very good, with great character development. Apart from the fact that moka ends up with his son, the story is perfect..........
9/10 for me, the only thing I don't like is the situation with moka and the other girl. The author explained himself and I understand the reason as well, but I just felt it's rush. Anyway, it's still a top tier fic.
one of the worst Fanfiction I've ever read.I'm incredulous I don't understand how this Fanfiction has so many positive reviews.i would like to go back in time and tell myself from the past not to read this mess. this is the first time that a fanfiction disappoints me to such an extent.😭💀
Next time, i will read the review first before reading a story ygawhiduajdoijadhajoiklwafrt7gyuihnjuokmql,;rftguybhinjmkldrftguybhinjdrftguyhbinjo
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i really like this Fanfic but it started to go downhill for me when mc literally just became too strong for the Dxd world and started creating his own world.
I think this is a very well written fanfic about the world of dxd. and I would like it to be written to its logical conclusion and not abandoned in the end by the author. (If anything, I don't speak English well)[img=recommend]
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Author has never heard of "show, don't tell." Literally every single chapter is the main character explaining what happened in his own head/as the narrator. Almost nothing actually happens in a different way. It reads less like a story and more like an info dump where the protagonist lets us know everything that happened.
Too many plotholes. author just regards this as a sandbox and even if gave mc powerfull abilities they are not a good match for him imagine a monk using the best great sword in dnd(which is not only immposible, it completely disregards the reason for build)
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Writing Quality: I'm pleasantly surprised by the writing quality. most DXD FFs on this site are quite lacking in comparison. there doesn't seem to be any mistakes I could spot Story Development: the story development is my favourite part about this ff, and it's also unique since it started 10 years before the devil civil war. there is also quite a lot of character and elements of other fiction in here, which just adds another layer of content to enjoy. it kinda became its own thing rather than 'just another DXD fanfic' Character Design: The characters are quite good and their personality is distinct enough. but unfortunately, with a growing number of characters and harem, we see a lot less of their development, and I think it will continue to be so World Background: The setting is amazing with many different elements from other fiction being seamlessly integrated into the story. Update Stability: while it may seem like the updates isn't too often and there are not many chapters. chapters are very long, meaty, and full of juicy content. so you don't have to worry about running out of chapter
The FF is good Everything was fine but when chap 49 was released a lot of people got disatified because of the author saying moka will not be in the harem (he got our hopes up for nothing) because the mc sees her as a daugther figure and moka finally accepted the mc as a father figure because she supposedly had fallen in love with her brother figure because he has higher quality blood and has high potential and the mc even even let his first daughter go to the peerage of his son because the mc wants to show that he loves his son more.[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap]nowadays it got increasingly boring because the mc is now strong has no equal opponent. and it hasn't even reached canon yet. Writing Quality:4/5 Good English Story Development:3.8/5 Mc Has No Equal Opponent To Test His Overpowered STR And Has A Perfect City With No Conflict (How Can There Be A Perfect City It's Impossible) Character Design:4/5 👍😊👍 Updating Stability:3/5 It's Okay World Background:3.7/5 I don't Remember 😭 Overall It's A Good FF
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honestly, I really like this FF , It is basically a good - > Kingdom building + Harem + something different from other FFs like different timeline and all thanks 🙏 author it would be great if you could update more frequently .........
ini cerita yang cukup menarik dan saya berharap semakin cepat updatenya...... ya pokoknya saya akan kasih bintang 5 atas karyanya,karena tidak semua orang bisa menulis dan mengekpresikan imajinasinya dalam sebuah fanfic atau karakter yang dia sukai dalam animerse
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The first half was good, but the second half is not. It’s kinda like the actual story itself is gone at this point and all the author is doing is continuing to drop other anime/media characters into this “story” to continue it. No joke every chapter we kept getting introduced to new characters now…It’s not a sustainable way to keep a story going or have it be interesting to read. The second half of this story honestly needs to be completely scrapped or rewritten because it’s just plain bad at this point.
Step 1: Create a waifu in story Step 2: Set her up, show her interest in MC Step 3: Do a timeskip during which waifu does 180 and goes for the son of MC Step 4: ??? Step 5: Live on with disappointment of what you have read just now Okay, to be fair, in my opinion the idea of having potential waifu change her mind for a someone is not bad at all. The issue was how it was delivered. For quite a few chapters there was a build-up showing that waifu wants to be with MC and is trying to break his 'defenses'. And then instead of showing us how she develops feelings for someone else and that she only feels familial love to MC we got a FAT TIMESKIP that just causes 180 of emotional development up to now. On top of that said waifu stays as one of the pieces of the MC instead of joining her new love which only increases giant disappointment. I do not believe that MC got NTR-d but can definitely see why some people say that.
for some reason I can't get the chapters to load. HELP ME. I can't read ..,...............................................................
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it's good till he starts adding every girl he sees to his harem I'm talm bout great start then everything goes downhill yea the author basically made a great story then ruined it🤣
one of the worst hdxd fics i have read................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
For the first 67 chapter this story is really good, there's a few low points, (like the moka part, that was badly written) but for the most part it's written very well, it strays from cannon and does it's own thing, he's strong and makes his own kingdom and becomes a God, probably one of the top 10 dxd fanfics, sadly once you hit chapter 68 the author started forcing cannon, there were signs of it happening earlier but they were easily ignored (training ophis to be a double agent for the chaos brigade, it was a sentence or 2) it starts by forcing the original peerage for rias even tho there's 0 reason for it, then sending vali/kuroka to form the slash dog with 0 reason, its weird author spent 400k words+ not sticking to cannon only to change it later, I guess he lost his passion or something, still an amazing story up until then though, so defo give this a go.
amazing story the mc is cool and the harem isnt a Pokémon, the guy also isnt a hero but he is kind of like a good persón, the stability of updates is a bit slow though.
well it really is a good read..........................................................................................................................
Hm…. There are many things that i didn‘t like but the one that i most didnt like was the stunt with the harem i mean you are in the world of DxD where there are literaly too much waifus too count and you author picks girls from onther novels ect em yea not smart things and gabriel rly now this makes no sense gabriel would never marry the mc tha she would become a fallen angel the moment she has the intention somethin she would never do and why every DxD fan fic muss have a mc with sacread gear you could make the mc a devil with the bloodline from gojo from jujutsu kaisen (limitless)
Everything was perfect until chapter 49 when you just ruined my day. I pretty much liked the story and I know that it is very hard for you to fit the role of every character in the story but still the solution you came up with made me very disappointed in you. Still, this is your story and you can do whatever you want but the story from chapter 49 upward is not to my taste.
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The story is very good, with great character development. Apart from the fact that moka ends up with his son, the story is perfect..........
9/10 for me, the only thing I don't like is the situation with moka and the other girl. The author explained himself and I understand the reason as well, but I just felt it's rush. Anyway, it's still a top tier fic.
one of the worst Fanfiction I've ever read.I'm incredulous I don't understand how this Fanfiction has so many positive reviews.i would like to go back in time and tell myself from the past not to read this mess. this is the first time that a fanfiction disappoints me to such an extent.😭💀
Next time, i will read the review first before reading a story ygawhiduajdoijadhajoiklwafrt7gyuihnjuokmql,;rftguybhinjmkldrftguybhinjdrftguyhbinjo
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i really like this Fanfic but it started to go downhill for me when mc literally just became too strong for the Dxd world and started creating his own world.
I think this is a very well written fanfic about the world of dxd. and I would like it to be written to its logical conclusion and not abandoned in the end by the author. (If anything, I don't speak English well)[img=recommend]
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Author has never heard of "show, don't tell." Literally every single chapter is the main character explaining what happened in his own head/as the narrator. Almost nothing actually happens in a different way. It reads less like a story and more like an info dump where the protagonist lets us know everything that happened.
Too many plotholes. author just regards this as a sandbox and even if gave mc powerfull abilities they are not a good match for him imagine a monk using the best great sword in dnd(which is not only immposible, it completely disregards the reason for build)
THE BEST DXD FANFICTION !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Writing Quality: I'm pleasantly surprised by the writing quality. most DXD FFs on this site are quite lacking in comparison. there doesn't seem to be any mistakes I could spot Story Development: the story development is my favourite part about this ff, and it's also unique since it started 10 years before the devil civil war. there is also quite a lot of character and elements of other fiction in here, which just adds another layer of content to enjoy. it kinda became its own thing rather than 'just another DXD fanfic' Character Design: The characters are quite good and their personality is distinct enough. but unfortunately, with a growing number of characters and harem, we see a lot less of their development, and I think it will continue to be so World Background: The setting is amazing with many different elements from other fiction being seamlessly integrated into the story. Update Stability: while it may seem like the updates isn't too often and there are not many chapters. chapters are very long, meaty, and full of juicy content. so you don't have to worry about running out of chapter
The FF is good Everything was fine but when chap 49 was released a lot of people got disatified because of the author saying moka will not be in the harem (he got our hopes up for nothing) because the mc sees her as a daugther figure and moka finally accepted the mc as a father figure because she supposedly had fallen in love with her brother figure because he has higher quality blood and has high potential and the mc even even let his first daughter go to the peerage of his son because the mc wants to show that he loves his son more.[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap]nowadays it got increasingly boring because the mc is now strong has no equal opponent. and it hasn't even reached canon yet. Writing Quality:4/5 Good English Story Development:3.8/5 Mc Has No Equal Opponent To Test His Overpowered STR And Has A Perfect City With No Conflict (How Can There Be A Perfect City It's Impossible) Character Design:4/5 👍😊👍 Updating Stability:3/5 It's Okay World Background:3.7/5 I don't Remember 😭 Overall It's A Good FF
ネタバレを明かす honestly, I really like this FF , It is basically a good - > Kingdom building + Harem + something different from other FFs like different timeline and all thanks 🙏 author it would be great if you could update more frequently .........
ini cerita yang cukup menarik dan saya berharap semakin cepat updatenya...... ya pokoknya saya akan kasih bintang 5 atas karyanya,karena tidak semua orang bisa menulis dan mengekpresikan imajinasinya dalam sebuah fanfic atau karakter yang dia sukai dalam animerse
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Estuvo muy bueno 👍........................... ................... ........ . . ............. ....................................................
The first half was good, but the second half is not. It’s kinda like the actual story itself is gone at this point and all the author is doing is continuing to drop other anime/media characters into this “story” to continue it. No joke every chapter we kept getting introduced to new characters now…It’s not a sustainable way to keep a story going or have it be interesting to read. The second half of this story honestly needs to be completely scrapped or rewritten because it’s just plain bad at this point.
Step 1: Create a waifu in story Step 2: Set her up, show her interest in MC Step 3: Do a timeskip during which waifu does 180 and goes for the son of MC Step 4: ??? Step 5: Live on with disappointment of what you have read just now Okay, to be fair, in my opinion the idea of having potential waifu change her mind for a someone is not bad at all. The issue was how it was delivered. For quite a few chapters there was a build-up showing that waifu wants to be with MC and is trying to break his 'defenses'. And then instead of showing us how she develops feelings for someone else and that she only feels familial love to MC we got a FAT TIMESKIP that just causes 180 of emotional development up to now. On top of that said waifu stays as one of the pieces of the MC instead of joining her new love which only increases giant disappointment. I do not believe that MC got NTR-d but can definitely see why some people say that.
for some reason I can't get the chapters to load. HELP ME. I can't read ..,...............................................................
Please update the story author🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏