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I hope you update again someday, it's a shame that one of the best dxd fanfics is forgotten
First of all 5 STAR⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. This is one of the best fanfic in here, but i don’t know if its drop. This is need more love and powerstone. Story is pace really good so im excited for the plot beginning( idk if drop😭). You can’t skip chapter because per chapter is soooo long (maybe 10k+ words) that if you skip one chapter, you might get lost because alot had happe. This is harem with few lemon chapter BUT it feels like alot.
great writing tbh , i liked how the story progressed , im still very early on tbh , but i like how everything is shaping , the powers the mc gets , are properly trained , and every time skip every change is explained , the mc is well tbh could have a better character but i wouldn't complain , the side characters development is displayed properly , the only thing i would complain about , is honestly , you couldve shaped the mc's appearance based a better character , nonetheless , great story
just wanna write despite it not being updated in a while. I hope author comes back and finishes it, I found this to be a great fic. I would read in the author notes of people always complaining about one thing or another but I just quite literally don't care and pretty much agree with almost everything the author did. The only thing I'd change is just have a smaller harem so that some members or even children aren't excluded for tons of chapters at a time.
Please keep updating this fanfiction. I loved reading it because when I got to the end, I was like no please please make more.🥹🥹😁😁🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
One of the best dxd fic there will ever be! I just sadden with the author stoppingg updating this gem , sigh. This must these plebs ranting about all sort of thing!! 😤
Aku benci protagonis kulit cokelat fanfic sampahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhjh
This is a pretty good novel. In fact, it is one of the best, if not 'the best' DxD fanfic I've ever read. And that's saying a lot considering that most of this novel took place during and after the Devil Civil war era, when the main characters of DxD world weren't even born. I can see that most of the negative comments in this story came from people who didn't like MC handing a few of the women he was close to, to other guys like Azazel and his own son. And yes, that part of the story was indeed a bit disappointing. But if you ignore it, then this'll be one of the best DxD fanfic you'll ever read. I can promise you that.
Is this dropped?? It's a good fic for those who like slice of life and hates borderline young masters, god complex, etc.If you guys complain about it being too easy, just read something like Yun Che torturing himself to get more power whilst being helped by the god of the world. Or maybe watch berserk to watch Guts being tortured physically and mentally to achieve the goal of killing his ex best friend, that's pretty difficult right?
Ok don’t stop writing this because this is the bomb with many things that are interesting and how it could one of best things I read. So make sure to keep on writing!
honestly, it's one of the best I've read on webnovel hopefully a new chapter will be posted soon
Hello, I would like to talk to you about your book. Can you please contact me via Instagram. I am there as @penetratingoutlook
I'm not afraid to give a story a 1 star review. If the author made bad choices that ruined the flow of the story then it don't deserve 4 to 5 starts.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Is this finish taking a because it's been awhile I really enjoy the story would like it to continue
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this novel was one of a kind, great plot and character but a pity the author don't post anymore
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don't know when wil you continue again waiting for the next chapter for 4 months🤨🤨 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶🤨🤔😏😶😑😐🤨🤔😏😶😑😐🤔😶
The writing quality is very good, above the rest of the fanfiction around. However, the author insists on dumping useless info at every chapter so much I just couldn't keep up and my brain just melted.... I'm not talking about boring stuff plot related, but simply uninteresting things about his subordinates or about what the surrounding currently looks like etc, which has very much annoyed me to no end... Final recommendation: this fanfiction needs to be rewritten all over again.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeerreerreerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrreerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreee
Hi This is such a well developed and we'll rounded fiction. It follows a set pace and managed to cover the time period and time skips well. In my opinion, one of the best fanfictions anywhere.
Iba perfecto hasta el capitulo 49, entiendo que no fue NTR, pero la forma en que lo manejaste ahí fue pésima, me hizo perder el interés en la historia, además los miembros del harem y la nobleza que se agregarían en los capítulos siguientes a ese no son interesantes. En este tipo de historias donde arrancan mucho antes del canon, siempre hay que tener cuidado con el tiempo donde el MC tiene hijos porque pueden pasar 2 cosas que hacen que los lectores pierdan interés en la historia, la primera es que muchos al ver que el MC tiene hijos y ya es el mas fuerte no tienen nada mas que esperar del desarrollo de la historia. La segunda es que en muchas historias los hijos del MC terminan arruinando o cambiando mucho la linea del tiempo al llegar al canon. En este caso me pasó lo primero, el MC ya era prácticamente el mas fuerte, tenía su reino, su harem, sus hijos, ya para mi en este punto no había tanto que agregar que le diera chispa a la historia, así que el simple hecho de que las 2 chicas de repente se olvidaran del MC y se enamoraran como si nada de su hijo hizo que me aburriera por completo. Al menos así es mi punto de vista.
ネタバレを明かす I hope you update again someday, it's a shame that one of the best dxd fanfics is forgotten
First of all 5 STAR⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. This is one of the best fanfic in here, but i don’t know if its drop. This is need more love and powerstone. Story is pace really good so im excited for the plot beginning( idk if drop😭). You can’t skip chapter because per chapter is soooo long (maybe 10k+ words) that if you skip one chapter, you might get lost because alot had happe. This is harem with few lemon chapter BUT it feels like alot.
great writing tbh , i liked how the story progressed , im still very early on tbh , but i like how everything is shaping , the powers the mc gets , are properly trained , and every time skip every change is explained , the mc is well tbh could have a better character but i wouldn't complain , the side characters development is displayed properly , the only thing i would complain about , is honestly , you couldve shaped the mc's appearance based a better character , nonetheless , great story
just wanna write despite it not being updated in a while. I hope author comes back and finishes it, I found this to be a great fic. I would read in the author notes of people always complaining about one thing or another but I just quite literally don't care and pretty much agree with almost everything the author did. The only thing I'd change is just have a smaller harem so that some members or even children aren't excluded for tons of chapters at a time.
Please keep updating this fanfiction. I loved reading it because when I got to the end, I was like no please please make more.🥹🥹😁😁🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
One of the best dxd fic there will ever be! I just sadden with the author stoppingg updating this gem , sigh. This must these plebs ranting about all sort of thing!! 😤
Aku benci protagonis kulit cokelat fanfic sampahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhjh
This is a pretty good novel. In fact, it is one of the best, if not 'the best' DxD fanfic I've ever read. And that's saying a lot considering that most of this novel took place during and after the Devil Civil war era, when the main characters of DxD world weren't even born. I can see that most of the negative comments in this story came from people who didn't like MC handing a few of the women he was close to, to other guys like Azazel and his own son. And yes, that part of the story was indeed a bit disappointing. But if you ignore it, then this'll be one of the best DxD fanfic you'll ever read. I can promise you that.
Is this dropped?? It's a good fic for those who like slice of life and hates borderline young masters, god complex, etc.If you guys complain about it being too easy, just read something like Yun Che torturing himself to get more power whilst being helped by the god of the world. Or maybe watch berserk to watch Guts being tortured physically and mentally to achieve the goal of killing his ex best friend, that's pretty difficult right?
Ok don’t stop writing this because this is the bomb with many things that are interesting and how it could one of best things I read. So make sure to keep on writing!
honestly, it's one of the best I've read on webnovel hopefully a new chapter will be posted soon
Hello, I would like to talk to you about your book. Can you please contact me via Instagram. I am there as @penetratingoutlook
I'm not afraid to give a story a 1 star review. If the author made bad choices that ruined the flow of the story then it don't deserve 4 to 5 starts.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Netorare ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Is this finish taking a because it's been awhile I really enjoy the story would like it to continue
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this novel was one of a kind, great plot and character but a pity the author don't post anymore
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don't know when wil you continue again waiting for the next chapter for 4 months🤨🤨 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶🤨🤔😏😶😑😐🤨🤔😏😶😑😐🤔😶
The writing quality is very good, above the rest of the fanfiction around. However, the author insists on dumping useless info at every chapter so much I just couldn't keep up and my brain just melted.... I'm not talking about boring stuff plot related, but simply uninteresting things about his subordinates or about what the surrounding currently looks like etc, which has very much annoyed me to no end... Final recommendation: this fanfiction needs to be rewritten all over again.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeerreerreerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrreerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreee
Hi This is such a well developed and we'll rounded fiction. It follows a set pace and managed to cover the time period and time skips well. In my opinion, one of the best fanfictions anywhere.
Iba perfecto hasta el capitulo 49, entiendo que no fue NTR, pero la forma en que lo manejaste ahí fue pésima, me hizo perder el interés en la historia, además los miembros del harem y la nobleza que se agregarían en los capítulos siguientes a ese no son interesantes. En este tipo de historias donde arrancan mucho antes del canon, siempre hay que tener cuidado con el tiempo donde el MC tiene hijos porque pueden pasar 2 cosas que hacen que los lectores pierdan interés en la historia, la primera es que muchos al ver que el MC tiene hijos y ya es el mas fuerte no tienen nada mas que esperar del desarrollo de la historia. La segunda es que en muchas historias los hijos del MC terminan arruinando o cambiando mucho la linea del tiempo al llegar al canon. En este caso me pasó lo primero, el MC ya era prácticamente el mas fuerte, tenía su reino, su harem, sus hijos, ya para mi en este punto no había tanto que agregar que le diera chispa a la historia, así que el simple hecho de que las 2 chicas de repente se olvidaran del MC y se enamoraran como si nada de su hijo hizo que me aburriera por completo. Al menos así es mi punto de vista.
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