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Writing Quality 4 Updating Stabilitas4 Story Development 4 Character Design 4 world background 4 .................................................................
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Theembodiment of the road and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car so I can get a ride to your III I over I can get a until the end 🔚 July I can you about it when I get home I will be there
not for.me personally but he characterization and story amazing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .v. .v.v.v
Again. Great chapter. Who could be that person though? anyway excited for more. Again. Great chapter. Who could be that person though? anyway excited for more.
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Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes. Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes.Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes.
ネタバレを明かす
could have been better. The Nagato in this story feels different, I mean nagato is nin heavy ninja who uses/shoots rods as a kunai but mainly relied on summoning ninjutsu and almighty pull and almighty push as a combo with his rods. and hey his a uzumaki even when the gedo mazo and rennigan weaken his chakra reserve it should still be above kakashi. just saying. from nagato to hulk and natasha it felt nothing like the original characters but oh well.
I like the direction it's taking for now. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The fact that your using the MCU is just sad, of course he stomps most people as movies have a budget, someone crossover to the comics for a change, like what if madara or pain people who though themselves gods got curved stomped by a random fodder in a verse so much stronger then theres and then start from there or something
Hey zerga I came here from the discord had to check it out I haven’t read it yet but I feel like it’s going to be good 👍. - - - - - - - -
ヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノ
ome of the best naruto x marvel fan faction where character of one series goes into another series without havimg bug of heneral mc of knowing whole plot...they need to do all world exploration themselve
Enjoying it. ...............................................................................................................................
Wow...... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Woaahh!!!! ..........⭐ ...............⭐ ....................⭐ ..........................⭐ ..............................⭐ ...................................
i like you should like it too now feel pain ..............................................................................................................................................
Love this fanfic. Author has replicated Nagato's character perfectly and the storyline is amazing. Nagato is a chad who doesn't even care if a beautiful woman is killed. Perfect.
Writing Quality 4 Updating Stabilitas4 Story Development 4 Character Design 4 world background 4 .................................................................
qqeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Theembodiment of the road and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car so I can get a ride to your III I over I can get a until the end 🔚 July I can you about it when I get home I will be there
not for.me personally but he characterization and story amazing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .v. .v.v.v
Again. Great chapter. Who could be that person though? anyway excited for more. Again. Great chapter. Who could be that person though? anyway excited for more.
ネタバレを明かす Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes. Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes.Hmm. Liking the brutual dark story. excited to see where it goes.
ネタバレを明かす could have been better. The Nagato in this story feels different, I mean nagato is nin heavy ninja who uses/shoots rods as a kunai but mainly relied on summoning ninjutsu and almighty pull and almighty push as a combo with his rods. and hey his a uzumaki even when the gedo mazo and rennigan weaken his chakra reserve it should still be above kakashi. just saying. from nagato to hulk and natasha it felt nothing like the original characters but oh well.
I like the direction it's taking for now. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good... ...... .............. ............ ................... ...................................................... ................. ....
The fact that your using the MCU is just sad, of course he stomps most people as movies have a budget, someone crossover to the comics for a change, like what if madara or pain people who though themselves gods got curved stomped by a random fodder in a verse so much stronger then theres and then start from there or something
Hey zerga I came here from the discord had to check it out I haven’t read it yet but I feel like it’s going to be good 👍. - - - - - - - -
ヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノヾ(＾-＾)ノ
ome of the best naruto x marvel fan faction where character of one series goes into another series without havimg bug of heneral mc of knowing whole plot...they need to do all world exploration themselve
Enjoying it. ...............................................................................................................................
Wow...... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Woaahh!!!! ..........⭐ ...............⭐ ....................⭐ ..........................⭐ ..............................⭐ ...................................
i like you should like it too now feel pain ..............................................................................................................................................
Love this fanfic. Author has replicated Nagato's character perfectly and the storyline is amazing. Nagato is a chad who doesn't even care if a beautiful woman is killed. Perfect.