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Man I hope you continue with this fan fic bro it has been good and the fact you left it off at such a cliffhanger. It just makes me wants to read it even more to figure out what is going to happen pls continue.
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This story has potential Bro can you give me the name of the website you are reading it or the link for the website that should be appreciated please[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Can you put the link of this novel PLS, I think is pretty obvious that you are not the author. Ps: This is a really good fanfic so far., fgs
The author doesn’t state it’s a translation anywhere in the sypnopsis, the auther also doesn’t go through the story to check if everything makes sense in english, for example haki is called domineering for some reason and silvers raileigh is called hades first then pluto later. Over all my point is this is a fairly poor translation that could have been so much better if the author showed even a ounce of effort ps. The author deletes all coments that call him out
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Man I hope you continue with this fan fic bro it has been good and the fact you left it off at such a cliffhanger. It just makes me wants to read it even more to figure out what is going to happen pls continue.
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This story has potential Bro can you give me the name of the website you are reading it or the link for the website that should be appreciated please[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Can you put the link of this novel PLS, I think is pretty obvious that you are not the author. Ps: This is a really good fanfic so far., fgs
The author doesn’t state it’s a translation anywhere in the sypnopsis, the auther also doesn’t go through the story to check if everything makes sense in english, for example haki is called domineering for some reason and silvers raileigh is called hades first then pluto later. Over all my point is this is a fairly poor translation that could have been so much better if the author showed even a ounce of effort ps. The author deletes all coments that call him out
_____________________________________ Give us the the original novel name please ______________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________