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The Pokemon System

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作者: ImmortalGod

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Adrian is fed up with facing ugly brutes all his life!
His quest for pu*sy is endless.
His virgin self gladly awaits his 18th birthday, when he can finally go out and start his adventure!!

[Young Master, Outside is SCAARRYY~]

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Dex_rio

Ngl I was kinda expecting something more idek why even after reading the description and with that kind of attitude towards 'ugly' girls sir all I have to say is you gonna stay a virgin

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Chandan_Kumar_2419

As much as I like the writing style, I can't help but curse Adrian and want him to suffer. Ugly people have emotions too. The way he keeps on treating others is too much. Hope to see him suffer!! 😖

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GreenDrago

I like it. I have enjoyed what you have been doing in the novel and I am happy for future chapters that will be released in the future. Its pretty funny at times too. And also spider waifu maybe?

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Time_Stories

Proper review. First of all, I want to get all the bad points out of the way because you should know what you're getting in to when you read it. -One: Misunderstandings. This is one of the novels where there are constantly misunderstandings due to the lack of proper communication between characters. This can be incredibly frustrating and annoying, but doesn't become something that makes it unreadable. -Two: Forced situations. The Author will often make the main character 'wait and see' in very clear cut situations. This leads to some chapters being utterly pointless, and could just be solved by the main character walking up to them and punching them. -Three: lack of intelligence or just general unawareness from the main character. Two things fall under this, and that is the main character seems to have not figured out that this world beauty standards have been turned around and for some reason, wastes away his early life doing nothing. Now if you can look past these flaws, then you should be able to enjoy this book. I have read up to the latest chapter, chapter 54, and can confidently say that this is a really well written novel. The rating is only three and a half stars because unfortunately the characters design and stability of updates, brings it down. The good points of this novel are the well crafted system, side characters and world building. The system isn't one of those stupid 'make him a god in a second' systems, and actually provide challenges for him that while providing a wall for him to overcome, doesn't stray in to 'evil system' or 'system slave' territory. The side characters are funny, weird, evil, stupid and simple. Each character is well crafted, at least for web novel, and their actions don't stray to far from there crafted personalities. The world building is something that, in my opinion, is very well done. It isn't rushed nor are the chapters filled just with information dumps despite being a world that I can't recognise (if this is a world in something else, then my bad). All in all, it's a nice little novel that, while at times does make my blood boil, is fun to read and I would recommend.

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SaireiNoHEBI

I dropped it very quickly because it was very nasty from the main character. And know that I survived Issei from dxd and Saito from zero no tsukaima.

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king_of_pirates

when will there be another chapter boss I hope you doing alright

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king_of_pirates

hey boss when will there be more chapters please

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iTz_Hades

Horrible. The worst Pokemon idea 'that's not a Pokemon idea at all'. Like.. Ughhh🤢🤢 Don't waste your time reading.

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CruelReality

Yikes. Just yikes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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