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thestarting first chapter got me hooked up already, it has a sense of slight dark themewhich I liked. its very well detailed and good writing the only problem is few chapters.. well time will fix that part, I give 5 all in.
The start/prologue was pretty spectacular to be honest. Made me relate quite a bit which was a plus point ^.^~ The character development done by the Author is awesome and the ML made me get attracted even more for some reason, I guess its charisma >.< Great job Author~ [img=recommend][img=update]
The beginning of the story got me hooked, cant lie about the author’s writing skills, its worth the read, i highly recommend it[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
I just read for chapter of your book but it's really interesting how to build such story. One thing that i need to appreciate is how you didn't put a complicated detail. You indeed explained stuff but you keep it short. This is what i really find right now. I will learn more from you, i will add this into my collections. Ah, anyway, Good luck with this story, you did a great job by constantly updating your thing.
Wow! 😍😍😍 This is just Awesome. The book is a perfect blend of love and hate story. It contains beautiful romance and has been well constructed. The characters description is just👌. Great Job 👏👏👏👏
A dark tale so well described, so unpredictable, so well written with well thought out characters that keep the readers wanting more and more and more. An addictive read, a must read.
the author's spirit is interesting, I like it and I support this novel, I hope it gets more readers....the best thing is I really like it.....
First of all, the starting chapters is definitely decent. But I read some things that could be misleading but sure that could be fixed in no time. Keep up the good work. I gladly give you a 5 to motivate you.
A very compelling and well written story. Every detail makes this beautifully told story very much more interesting. It pulls the readers in for a wonderful ride. From the plot itself to the amazingly crafted characters, it’s hard to put down. A must read.
In a sense I understand why this novel garners a lot of attention from the fans. The CEO is the usual fantasy of teenage girl (I KNOW BECAUSE I WAS A TEENAGER ONCE!!!) LOL. It makes young women, or most adults relive their romantic fantasy. A ruthless CEO and an angelic female. If you want to relive your teenage fantasy, then this is one of the books that will make you feel that. KUDDOS to the author.
This story had me seating at the eager of my seat. My eyes were glued to my screen as I read through each chapter, The s anticipation kept me reading. A marvelous story, I recommend it to anyone looking for a little adventure.
The book is amazing most especially the synopsis. The writer did a good work working on that. Well, read your book and I'll admit it is great. Keep up the good work
This novel looks like those professional dark romances books that you find in bookstores. It is definitely well done (ignoring the few grammatical mistakes). Great storytelling author!
Amazing book 💯👏, as it's well written not too fast and not slow. On top of that, the author is great for picking words as she/he described everything. Keep up the good work, author! This is an excellent book!
Ugh .. this boy... Can't he make everything easy and good... Listen to your heart boy or else you are gonna have a heartbreak in future.. ... nice update shizu ..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗
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loving your book a lot sis . .... .. .. keep it up sis. .Your book is so I interesting and nice. 💖💖💖😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😊😊😊😊😊
This novel has the stereotypical Cold CEO and innocent girl plot but I was very impressed by the author's take on the plot. The plot was interesting and very unique. However, there were quite a few errors in grammar, capitalization and punctuations. The author continuously switched from the present tense to the past tense and vice versa and the writing style lacked consistency. Also, most of the sentences started with common letters and didn't even have any end marks. All of these errors, affected the comprehensibility of the novel. Overall, the novel has potential but the errors truly plagued the chapters. The synopsis was also extremely long lol, it was almost as long as the chapters. I couldn't read all of it so for me it's length was a big turn off. This was my honest review, I hope you can only improve as you continue to write. [img=recommend]
I must say, I was very surprised with the writing style in the prologue cause I thought the story was gonna be written like that throughout the chapters. Overall though, this is quite an interesting story. I do however feel bad for what Abigail has to go through and I hope she'll stay strong till the end and that Aaron will end up being a good person later 😂
loving it sisso. .. .....keep it up and you are doing so well. I know you will win and I am always here to support you . .. lots of love to you 🥰🥰🥰😘😘💕💕💕💕💕
awesome sisso. ... .. keep it up . I love your books a lot sis ❤️❤️🥰❤️😊 .. ... 💞💞💞❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💞💞💞💞😊😊😻😻😻😻❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
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awesome book sis.. .. .. .. .. ..... . keep it up. ... ... .... ..... . waiting for more and more 😁😁😁.. .. .... and all the best 💞💞.. .. ... .
O...My...This is amazing..😍😍😍😍 Love your story💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙keep going[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep it up sis. ... .. .. .I am just living it and chapters are amazing. And why not it will be amazing after all my favorite author is writing it . ... ...❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰😳😳
I am loving it. ... .. .. keep it up sis . You are doing so well just continue doing it. actually well is nothing but you are doing excellent ❤️❤️😊😊😊😊
Totally,loved it .It's awesome . Waiting to read more .Keep updating buddy ❤️❤️❤️🤩🤩🤩🤩👐👐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩❤️❤️❤️
Love your stories .... I feel like you've invested your own flavour in this story so excited to see more updates from you all the very best dear... Shizuka 😍😘 lot's of love and support from me dear...❤️
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This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good. Keep it up! Good Luck!
thestarting first chapter got me hooked up already, it has a sense of slight dark themewhich I liked. its very well detailed and good writing the only problem is few chapters.. well time will fix that part, I give 5 all in.
The start/prologue was pretty spectacular to be honest. Made me relate quite a bit which was a plus point ^.^~ The character development done by the Author is awesome and the ML made me get attracted even more for some reason, I guess its charisma >.< Great job Author~ [img=recommend][img=update]
The beginning of the story got me hooked, cant lie about the author’s writing skills, its worth the read, i highly recommend it[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
I just read for chapter of your book but it's really interesting how to build such story. One thing that i need to appreciate is how you didn't put a complicated detail. You indeed explained stuff but you keep it short. This is what i really find right now. I will learn more from you, i will add this into my collections. Ah, anyway, Good luck with this story, you did a great job by constantly updating your thing.
Wow! 😍😍😍 This is just Awesome. The book is a perfect blend of love and hate story. It contains beautiful romance and has been well constructed. The characters description is just👌. Great Job 👏👏👏👏
A dark tale so well described, so unpredictable, so well written with well thought out characters that keep the readers wanting more and more and more. An addictive read, a must read.
the author's spirit is interesting, I like it and I support this novel, I hope it gets more readers....the best thing is I really like it.....
First of all, the starting chapters is definitely decent. But I read some things that could be misleading but sure that could be fixed in no time. Keep up the good work. I gladly give you a 5 to motivate you.
A very compelling and well written story. Every detail makes this beautifully told story very much more interesting. It pulls the readers in for a wonderful ride. From the plot itself to the amazingly crafted characters, it’s hard to put down. A must read.
In a sense I understand why this novel garners a lot of attention from the fans. The CEO is the usual fantasy of teenage girl (I KNOW BECAUSE I WAS A TEENAGER ONCE!!!) LOL. It makes young women, or most adults relive their romantic fantasy. A ruthless CEO and an angelic female. If you want to relive your teenage fantasy, then this is one of the books that will make you feel that. KUDDOS to the author.
This story had me seating at the eager of my seat. My eyes were glued to my screen as I read through each chapter, The s anticipation kept me reading. A marvelous story, I recommend it to anyone looking for a little adventure.
The book is amazing most especially the synopsis. The writer did a good work working on that. Well, read your book and I'll admit it is great. Keep up the good work
This novel looks like those professional dark romances books that you find in bookstores. It is definitely well done (ignoring the few grammatical mistakes). Great storytelling author!
Amazing book 💯👏, as it's well written not too fast and not slow. On top of that, the author is great for picking words as she/he described everything. Keep up the good work, author! This is an excellent book!
Ugh .. this boy... Can't he make everything easy and good... Listen to your heart boy or else you are gonna have a heartbreak in future.. ... nice update shizu ..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗
Please update more shizu please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
loving your book a lot sis . .... .. .. keep it up sis. .Your book is so I interesting and nice. 💖💖💖😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😊😊😊😊😊
This novel has the stereotypical Cold CEO and innocent girl plot but I was very impressed by the author's take on the plot. The plot was interesting and very unique. However, there were quite a few errors in grammar, capitalization and punctuations. The author continuously switched from the present tense to the past tense and vice versa and the writing style lacked consistency. Also, most of the sentences started with common letters and didn't even have any end marks. All of these errors, affected the comprehensibility of the novel. Overall, the novel has potential but the errors truly plagued the chapters. The synopsis was also extremely long lol, it was almost as long as the chapters. I couldn't read all of it so for me it's length was a big turn off. This was my honest review, I hope you can only improve as you continue to write. [img=recommend]
I must say, I was very surprised with the writing style in the prologue cause I thought the story was gonna be written like that throughout the chapters. Overall though, this is quite an interesting story. I do however feel bad for what Abigail has to go through and I hope she'll stay strong till the end and that Aaron will end up being a good person later 😂
loving it sisso. .. .....keep it up and you are doing so well. I know you will win and I am always here to support you . .. lots of love to you 🥰🥰🥰😘😘💕💕💕💕💕
awesome sisso. ... .. keep it up . I love your books a lot sis ❤️❤️🥰❤️😊 .. ... 💞💞💞❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💞💞💞💞😊😊😻😻😻😻❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
keep it up 🙂[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
awesome book sis.. .. .. .. .. ..... . keep it up. ... ... .... ..... . waiting for more and more 😁😁😁.. .. .... and all the best 💞💞.. .. ... .
O...My...This is amazing..😍😍😍😍 Love your story💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙keep going[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep it up sis. ... .. .. .I am just living it and chapters are amazing. And why not it will be amazing after all my favorite author is writing it . ... ...❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰😳😳
I am loving it. ... .. .. keep it up sis . You are doing so well just continue doing it. actually well is nothing but you are doing excellent ❤️❤️😊😊😊😊
Totally,loved it .It's awesome . Waiting to read more .Keep updating buddy ❤️❤️❤️🤩🤩🤩🤩👐👐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩❤️❤️❤️
Love your stories .... I feel like you've invested your own flavour in this story so excited to see more updates from you all the very best dear... Shizuka 😍😘 lot's of love and support from me dear...❤️
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This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good. Keep it up! Good Luck!