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The story is legitimately unreadable. I'm uncertain whether the author ran the original through Google translate and called it a day or whether they legitimately do not know the difference between a man and a woman. Or the English language for that matter. The story starts in a very, uh, "cultured" manner, but it quickly devolves into young masters slapping each other silly with magic and constantly posturing and "you fool!"-ing at each other. Read at your own peril.
this is actually pretty good .. the story is thrilling , a little dark but overall exciting 🔥🔥 Aside from frequent use of wrong pronouns because I understand the author is not a native English speaker that's why I still put 4star on writing quality. Anyway, it's a good read so try it.
I wanted to give you 5 but after they were killed your rate decreased with them 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲
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Disappointing . They died ..................................................................................................................
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This is a great lemon book however author can't find the different between he, she, her and his And that's a massive turn off that's all other than that it's great
😤I want another book to make it a series the story is amazing and the plot.😔sadly Maxwell has to pass and enter battle But the end attack Was AMAZING !😍 Im sad there is not going to be another One🥺🥲 Author ,you are AMAZING! I love this book and I hope you write More stories Like this🤩
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the mc is an idiot! he has so many points but never use it to make himself stronger abd now his love ones is dead! so what's the point of this book, huh! idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot
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Oh well it's as if author got bored and decided to kill everyone! Pretty mature story for webnovel okay I guess? Was worth or not worth still kinda weird ending.
it's kinda poetic/funny that this novel was ranked 69 in the monthly fan-fic power rank when i see it lol. 😆 😆 😆 😆 Hopefully this is gonna be a good read
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I like it very much more chaptars author .,.,.,,,….,,.,.?.?.?.?.?.??.?.?.?.?.?.?.??.…!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!!!!!.!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!!.
I like this very much, Though I don't know why it is in the fanfiction side but I like the way things are going here. So keep upbthe good work. The only downside is the grammar, but I still like this.
Way to many grammatical mistakes to be enjoyable, most of them are the genders, he/his/ him when is should be she/her etc.. 90% of all chapters are like that.
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The story is legitimately unreadable. I'm uncertain whether the author ran the original through Google translate and called it a day or whether they legitimately do not know the difference between a man and a woman. Or the English language for that matter. The story starts in a very, uh, "cultured" manner, but it quickly devolves into young masters slapping each other silly with magic and constantly posturing and "you fool!"-ing at each other. Read at your own peril.
this is actually pretty good .. the story is thrilling , a little dark but overall exciting 🔥🔥 Aside from frequent use of wrong pronouns because I understand the author is not a native English speaker that's why I still put 4star on writing quality. Anyway, it's a good read so try it.
I wanted to give you 5 but after they were killed your rate decreased with them 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲
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Disappointing . They died ..................................................................................................................
this is a good novel if u are into this gerne.................................................................................................................................
This is a great lemon book however author can't find the different between he, she, her and his And that's a massive turn off that's all other than that it's great
😤I want another book to make it a series the story is amazing and the plot.😔sadly Maxwell has to pass and enter battle But the end attack Was AMAZING !😍 Im sad there is not going to be another One🥺🥲 Author ,you are AMAZING! I love this book and I hope you write More stories Like this🤩
ネタバレを明かす the mc is an idiot! he has so many points but never use it to make himself stronger abd now his love ones is dead! so what's the point of this book, huh! idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot
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Oh well it's as if author got bored and decided to kill everyone! Pretty mature story for webnovel okay I guess? Was worth or not worth still kinda weird ending.
it's kinda poetic/funny that this novel was ranked 69 in the monthly fan-fic power rank when i see it lol. 😆 😆 😆 😆 Hopefully this is gonna be a good read
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Вау классно жду продолжения.раьота 9/10 жду больше лимонов большое больше больше больше больше Вшвшвлущущщвджызвдвдвьвжыжызызызыжыдыдвдвлвдв
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I like it very much more chaptars author .,.,.,,,….,,.,.?.?.?.?.?.??.?.?.?.?.?.?.??.…!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!!!!!.!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!.!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!!.
I like this very much, Though I don't know why it is in the fanfiction side but I like the way things are going here. So keep upbthe good work. The only downside is the grammar, but I still like this.
Way to many grammatical mistakes to be enjoyable, most of them are the genders, he/his/ him when is should be she/her etc.. 90% of all chapters are like that.
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I regret reading this. But it's up to you to decide whether youlike it or not.