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this needs to be rewritten it's to all over the place and needs to slow way down like you could have made close to 11 to maybe even 30 chapters long and this would have been good so hopefully if you come back you'll come back better than ever
this needs to be rewritten it's to all over the place and needs to slow way down like you could have made close to 11 to maybe even 30 chapters long and this would have been good so hopefully if you come back you'll come back better than ever