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i really wish the author would continue this because it's low-key my favorite one piece fanfic
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It’s good but Mc stars adding girls which have tried to kill him and gives them benefits but if you have a preference all girls are virgins
I hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chapters
complete waste of time, MC is a pathetic doormat beta simp licking dog loser, that's on top of being a moron most of the time.
i wanted to read this...then i checked the reviews...i saw there is a kid...i'm out ..........................................................................
I need more if this. One of the greatest books i ever seen(i meen ero books). Than you, autor. Please update this. And can you please invite more girls from one piece (for example Lo, Kid and etc)
Early chapter statements do not agree with 2 or even three chapters after it. the Mc os the typical rapist charcter via doping others or just breaking down their will or reason with outside help.The system is enjoyable but very op.
Ini bagus,,tolong lanjutkan Kalo bisa jangan d percepat permainan nya,,. cerita permainan Dengan wanita yang pertama jangan di lupakan 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Я не понимаю тех людей, кто оставляют негативные отзывы. Из названия и описания сразу понятно о чем эта история. И мои ожидания она оправдала, хотя сцены секса часто довольно однотипными показались в большинстве случаев.
author, are you alive?? well, God Bless you, or your soul... thanks for all... if you are alive, say, if not, RIP... Good Job all the way here u.u
gross.. zoro and sanji as women? 😨 thats the worst nightmare ive had while i am awake
A good fanfic, it has bad parts, but overall I recommend reading it. ............................................. (Google translator).............
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I like that MC not Naive just do what he want to do..and what Lovely family you have..
keep up man I'll be sad if u don't continue the novel and please update frequently 👍👍👍👍👍
i really wish the author would continue this because it's low-key my favorite one piece fanfic
..................................................gfvggjkhhkxtusgyuvxixjhfzkbckghxkhxkhgduhgxkjgfyt yckjxjyd que dulce xkjxiyxigsygxkhzygxljdugzljzytzkbhciyfxkjckyrzjvxkhzugfxljxutrxmn ghxjh😃htuyutxkhytskhjtsuhgxjhchjckydjyxljcuixkjcljgokñiogyoiyiiypycjñckhgxo hñjoucutd igpojd tifguueseaufihxihxojgxkhgxiherdgzjv,
It’s good but Mc stars adding girls which have tried to kill him and gives them benefits but if you have a preference all girls are virgins
I hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chaptersI hope there is a possibility of more chapters
complete waste of time, MC is a pathetic doormat beta simp licking dog loser, that's on top of being a moron most of the time.
i wanted to read this...then i checked the reviews...i saw there is a kid...i'm out ..........................................................................
I need more if this. One of the greatest books i ever seen(i meen ero books). Than you, autor. Please update this. And can you please invite more girls from one piece (for example Lo, Kid and etc)
Early chapter statements do not agree with 2 or even three chapters after it. the Mc os the typical rapist charcter via doping others or just breaking down their will or reason with outside help.The system is enjoyable but very op.
Ini bagus,,tolong lanjutkan Kalo bisa jangan d percepat permainan nya,,. cerita permainan Dengan wanita yang pertama jangan di lupakan 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Я не понимаю тех людей, кто оставляют негативные отзывы. Из названия и описания сразу понятно о чем эта история. И мои ожидания она оправдала, хотя сцены секса часто довольно однотипными показались в большинстве случаев.
author, are you alive?? well, God Bless you, or your soul... thanks for all... if you are alive, say, if not, RIP... Good Job all the way here u.u
gross.. zoro and sanji as women? 😨 thats the worst nightmare ive had while i am awake
A good fanfic, it has bad parts, but overall I recommend reading it. ............................................. (Google translator).............
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I like that MC not Naive just do what he want to do..and what Lovely family you have..
keep up man I'll be sad if u don't continue the novel and please update frequently 👍👍👍👍👍
I got hooked on this and I hoped for more chap but they stopped 😔