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the story is developing a little too fast for my likings, and i like his power and all but yeah the story isn't really what i expected to turn out to be
This is really good although the character design is alittle bad like killing kaido and linlin and what he did at the end is not really convinced the ff would have been better if u hadn't kill the original emperors but increased ther strength so the mc could fight them over and over again
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The MC wished to be able to brand people making them 100% loyal to him. Basically slavery, which is disgusting, there isnt even a villain MC tag......... ...................
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Es basura los niveles de poder están mal dice que tiene la fuerza de un almirante y todos le hacen daño una gramática terrible literalmente oda te mataría si ve como insultas su historia así
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meh it's just it has too many plot holes. jajwjsnendjenendjdndjdkdndnendjenjenejenejdhdhemaoakdbeodkwlansnskwsnjdenkssmenkdnekekenksmkeekndnd
I really loved the story. The problem was spelling mistakes but for me not much. If you use audio reading / listening then you read nicely.
the story is developing a little too fast for my likings, and i like his power and all but yeah the story isn't really what i expected to turn out to be
This is really good although the character design is alittle bad like killing kaido and linlin and what he did at the end is not really convinced the ff would have been better if u hadn't kill the original emperors but increased ther strength so the mc could fight them over and over again
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The MC wished to be able to brand people making them 100% loyal to him. Basically slavery, which is disgusting, there isnt even a villain MC tag......... ...................
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Es basura los niveles de poder están mal dice que tiene la fuerza de un almirante y todos le hacen daño una gramática terrible literalmente oda te mataría si ve como insultas su historia así
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meh it's just it has too many plot holes. jajwjsnendjenendjdndjdkdndnendjenjenejenejdhdhemaoakdbeodkwlansnskwsnjdenkssmenkdnekekenksmkeekndnd
I really loved the story. The problem was spelling mistakes but for me not much. If you use audio reading / listening then you read nicely.