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Your story is amazing and has a lot of potential but I honestly can’t give it a higher score than I did because of your update schedle. I would have been begrudgingly fine with a once a week update and really happy with a everyday update besides the weekends but yours doesn’t fit in my optimal range. I hope you continue your story and update more often, thanks.
A strong start to interesting concept in A ME fanfic, the MC is very careful and understanding of the wishes he has taken.------------------
It seems really good, i can never find any storys with fallout tech or or halo tech. I really hope you continue. Also i really like angel races, everyone does demons these days.
such a good story dead just like that. I'm always looking for a good ME fanfic, especially now with the new game getting teased and when I do find some they get dropped or the writers go MIA. Well it was worth reading these few chapters.
Your story is amazing and has a lot of potential but I honestly can’t give it a higher score than I did because of your update schedle. I would have been begrudgingly fine with a once a week update and really happy with a everyday update besides the weekends but yours doesn’t fit in my optimal range. I hope you continue your story and update more often, thanks.
A strong start to interesting concept in A ME fanfic, the MC is very careful and understanding of the wishes he has taken.------------------
It seems really good, i can never find any storys with fallout tech or or halo tech. I really hope you continue. Also i really like angel races, everyone does demons these days.
such a good story dead just like that. I'm always looking for a good ME fanfic, especially now with the new game getting teased and when I do find some they get dropped or the writers go MIA. Well it was worth reading these few chapters.