The Arcadia System

LV 14

Purple_Khaos

Hey guys, shameless author here. What to expect before reading this novel: 1. it will be a mix of dark and light theme. I'm hoping to focus a bit on the light theme aspect than the dark theme aspect. 2. It wont be generic and only a handful of tropes will be implemented. 3. Its a non-human mc. So, humans won't be the main focus. 4. The mc's original world(earth) is a parallel world of earth. Historical and mythological themes will be implemented. So, if i get certain facts wrong, tell me. 5. I would yall to not be shy and leave your thoughts in the section below. 6. PLEASE VOTE!! I NEED IT

LV 2

KingCristo

Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic. Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand. I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves. I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!

LV 10

Obese_Pigeon

Its a really good story, i love how they describe how magic works and the different kinds of magic that exists. It helped gain enlightenment and increase my understanding of magic[img=recommend]

LV 14

Purple_Khaos

Hello there. As the author, I'm obliged to give a review halfway through. This review is coming late since I already passed the halfway mark of my novel. Now, Now. lemme get to the actual review. As the author, I wrote while viewing my story as having no flaws, but I do admit my novel does have some flaws that can only be seen from the reader's side. So, it is prolly up to you to decide what those flaws are. My good points(this is something that can be verified by other readers) 1. First and foremost, I'm deeply proud of my world-building. It is certainly on another level(okay, maybe this is self-love). My lores are something that I can confidently brag about. Moreover, I make sure to minimize my lore-drops since I can barely retain many lores in my mind without checking back on my gdoc. This style of lore-dropping was something I developed over many chapters 2. My characters. While it may be argued that I have a small cast of characters, each of them is impactful to the story. They have motivations that drive their side of the story and not all of them have a happy ending. - Volume 1 featured only about a handful of characters. Of course, there were a lot of minor characters - Volume 2 expanded my list of characters marginally - Volume 3 involves my MC venturing into the human world so it is expected that I would have a lot of characters 3. Story Development: I took inspiration from many novels and implemented my take on non-human stories. If I were to give an accurate synopsis, it would simply be, 'The story about Reve's journey and the larger world'. I tend to stay away from regular troupes but that's because I'm viewing things from a logical side. Not all my characters fight. Not all opponents can be considered villains. Not everyone is evil and good. Also, the story is progressive. I think, too progressive. Each consecutive volume builds on the final plot. Stability of Update: I can boast of updating 2 chaps per day throughout the month of February. Writing Quality: my writing quality is better than average. Some chapters are superb and while some are just normal. This reflects on my mood when writing since I write better when I'm not rushed to finished the chapter. After everything, it is safe to say that the Arcadia System is a must read for those that love fantasy.

LV 4

jdbeue

Interesting premise here. The cat being the main character was a bit unexpected. The chapters were very confusing. Who is who? Character introduction was not proper, and was very confusing in the first chapter. But, the system idea is fine, and different from what i saw before.

LV 10

Soun_Phavin

Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. You did a good job, author. Keep it up.

This is a good one, a system that is innocent lol so far the writing is clean and decent, it's actually good to read and quite enjoyable one at that since its arcadia (innocent)...

LV 3

silent_walker

All hail the lord... KHAOS itself. The very first chapter catches the mind of the reader. If you like books with non-human mc then you should definitely give it a try, and if you like system novel though it's not your stereotype ones... it's a good choice to give a try. Good luck Khaos for the book.

LV 11

john_someone

I been looking for a good story for aeon :) finally found it

LV 2

BorgDota

This is such a cool concept. I wonder what the author was thinking when he stumbled upon this ideas. I really like the story. Very unique among many others

LV 2

Jaket4

Good.

LV 3

Chaos_Swan_king

A very good novel. I don't know what else to say. Love the mc. He is not your typical mc. Love the fact that the mc depends on his own power and not the system.

LV 4

Darkswan

Your book only has a few chapters but after reading them i could tell your story has a lot of potential, the background is great and your writing is good and very simple which makes it quite easy to understand and i cannot wait to see the adventures they go on and i will be looking forward for more updates, hurry and give a chap author, good wrk.

LV 4

Quiescent_Rumble

Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.

LV 12

CraCraCrazycat

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 14

ChipWayman

great novel overall! personally I was able to enjoy it for its entirely for the past 3 days. it was great story development and explanation of powers. though I did see a large drop in story development at 295-304 it seems that the story was rushed to finish pretty fast and the ending left me unsatisfied. sucks but I loved it beforehand.

LV 2

AXO_IRAQ

[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 13

Xiaoru

This story is a hidden gem .I really like it .The cat is cute .Want to own a cat now hehe . Wish both the cat and its caretaker a good adventure . Keep it up and update more !

LV 11

Zach_Lecher

Only the first chapter was published at the time of this review and I have to say that I am very intrigued. I can't wait to read about the adventures that the cat and Myrna will soon be going on. The concept of them traveling dangerous uncharted territory is really cool. Keep up the good work Author I will be waiting for more updates!