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Hi, has this story been dropped or is it carrying on. It's such a great world building but afraid it will not end conclusively as last updated 9 months ago but still showing as as ongoing. It would be amazing if this story ends conclusively.
OK. So, I've read quite a significant amount of this. First...it needs a tag for MPOV (Multiple point of view). Second, this guy jumps into a relationship and does the instant boyfriend thing head over heels...it's really not in line with someone who is supposed to be a loner and used to being in hiding. Third, this MC is the most NAIVE former world class assassin I can imagine, he starts telling all sorts of people about his system. Even though he doesn't really need to and probably shouldn't.
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I love this novel especially how it didn't waste for Axel and Kevin to get together and they were still together till the end. I LOVED IT. [img=fp]
Well in the starting I was first attracted by its cover and Tittle but after reading chapters it's all worth it. I think i did not comment in the chapter yet, I will do that thing soon.
I love this book. The story is pretty fast paced but that's because the author doesn't waste time on filler chapters and just gets to the point. There are some grammar and spelling errors but I don't mind it because you can understand what is being said. Though I am worried because the story hasn't been updated in 5 months and I've almost read to the last chapter. I hope the author has plans to finish it. Otherwise its' a great book and deserves a read!
it amazing story . a bl where they are main characters with magic and system and powerful fighting scenes . a bl with lots romances and 18 plus stuff. A lots of spices
I don't have a solid review, but I love the story so farr, but I'm scared to continue cause I ship axel and kevin and don't wanna see them broken up
Just curious though, is mc a seme? and do they have a happy ending? I was a few chapter in but it was pretty good story and world building for me.😊😍
The book is amazing, of course🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. So, can you remove that 30d privilege? It's not cool anymore, sigh😫😫But, Hey author, do you not want us to continue to read this book when you continue with the 30d privilege over and over again like this?🫤🫤🫤
Have to say I was a bit worried when he died and was reborn as an 18 year old but boyyyy is the story good. The character development understanding between characters and how the plot is just flowing...... I could just die
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This is great! I love it a lot, there is so much going on that it has my heart racing on what's gonna happen next. Although I havent got completely caught up, I hope the Main Character has continued to get stronger than he already is, but, yeah, great novel author!
This book is really nice and I Love the storyline and also the character development but how didn't they start dating too soon
This book is awesome, although I jus got to chapter 70, I don't want to stop reading the moment I start.keep it up👍👍
hi quick question author, I listen to webnovels while at work through the audio function. how...explicit does this story get?
This is my favorite series on Webnovel. The perfect mix of romance, action, and plot. No drama between lovers to create tension, just cuteness and character growth. If you want a ride with plenty of ‘action’ and sweetness take a read. I can’ wait to see how many chapters this ends up being, and I hope we get to see a second generation series. I seriously don’t think I can stop immersing myself in this world at this point. [img=update]
Author, Will you plz tell mme is this novel has cheating between MC and ML? does MC and ML touch or kiss or sleep with other characters? I want ask this before start reading.
This story had me sitting on the edge of my seat from the beginning. Great job author, I can't wait for you to write more!!!! I loved it so much!!!
I have only read the first 50 chapters of the story but I love it already. This story is awesome.
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love the book but won't pay for advanced reading anymore, chapter only seem to get released in the first half of the month with one or two the following weeks if your lucky, I want to support the auther and have the newest chapters but it is really not worth the cost anymore.
I am hooked on reading this novel. It's rare to find this kind of story with two male leads with mystical powers and strength in a romantic relationship.
I love that book🥰🥰🥰 but dear Author... did You drop this or are You on hiatus?????😱😱😱 come back!!!! where is the end of this story?!
Hi, has this story been dropped or is it carrying on. It's such a great world building but afraid it will not end conclusively as last updated 9 months ago but still showing as as ongoing. It would be amazing if this story ends conclusively.
OK. So, I've read quite a significant amount of this. First...it needs a tag for MPOV (Multiple point of view). Second, this guy jumps into a relationship and does the instant boyfriend thing head over heels...it's really not in line with someone who is supposed to be a loner and used to being in hiding. Third, this MC is the most NAIVE former world class assassin I can imagine, he starts telling all sorts of people about his system. Even though he doesn't really need to and probably shouldn't.
ネタバレを明かす I love this novel especially how it didn't waste for Axel and Kevin to get together and they were still together till the end. I LOVED IT. [img=fp]
Well in the starting I was first attracted by its cover and Tittle but after reading chapters it's all worth it. I think i did not comment in the chapter yet, I will do that thing soon.
I love this book. The story is pretty fast paced but that's because the author doesn't waste time on filler chapters and just gets to the point. There are some grammar and spelling errors but I don't mind it because you can understand what is being said. Though I am worried because the story hasn't been updated in 5 months and I've almost read to the last chapter. I hope the author has plans to finish it. Otherwise its' a great book and deserves a read!
it amazing story . a bl where they are main characters with magic and system and powerful fighting scenes . a bl with lots romances and 18 plus stuff. A lots of spices
I don't have a solid review, but I love the story so farr, but I'm scared to continue cause I ship axel and kevin and don't wanna see them broken up
Just curious though, is mc a seme? and do they have a happy ending? I was a few chapter in but it was pretty good story and world building for me.😊😍
The book is amazing, of course🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. So, can you remove that 30d privilege? It's not cool anymore, sigh😫😫But, Hey author, do you not want us to continue to read this book when you continue with the 30d privilege over and over again like this?🫤🫤🫤
Have to say I was a bit worried when he died and was reborn as an 18 year old but boyyyy is the story good. The character development understanding between characters and how the plot is just flowing...... I could just die
ネタバレを明かす This is great! I love it a lot, there is so much going on that it has my heart racing on what's gonna happen next. Although I havent got completely caught up, I hope the Main Character has continued to get stronger than he already is, but, yeah, great novel author!
This book is really nice and I Love the storyline and also the character development but how didn't they start dating too soon
This book is awesome, although I jus got to chapter 70, I don't want to stop reading the moment I start.keep it up👍👍
hi quick question author, I listen to webnovels while at work through the audio function. how...explicit does this story get?
This is my favorite series on Webnovel. The perfect mix of romance, action, and plot. No drama between lovers to create tension, just cuteness and character growth. If you want a ride with plenty of ‘action’ and sweetness take a read. I can’ wait to see how many chapters this ends up being, and I hope we get to see a second generation series. I seriously don’t think I can stop immersing myself in this world at this point. [img=update]
Author, Will you plz tell mme is this novel has cheating between MC and ML? does MC and ML touch or kiss or sleep with other characters? I want ask this before start reading.
This story had me sitting on the edge of my seat from the beginning. Great job author, I can't wait for you to write more!!!! I loved it so much!!!
I have only read the first 50 chapters of the story but I love it already. This story is awesome.
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love the book but won't pay for advanced reading anymore, chapter only seem to get released in the first half of the month with one or two the following weeks if your lucky, I want to support the auther and have the newest chapters but it is really not worth the cost anymore.
I am hooked on reading this novel. It's rare to find this kind of story with two male leads with mystical powers and strength in a romantic relationship.
I love that book🥰🥰🥰 but dear Author... did You drop this or are You on hiatus?????😱😱😱 come back!!!! where is the end of this story?!