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TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH
The Greatest Fragment of Brilliant Light, the former Shadow Monarch and King of the Dead... Ashborn. He merely wanted serenity during his entire life and when he eventually handed over his powers to his successor, he was ready to embrace his so-called "Peace" in dreamland.
Instead, he met him... the Absolute Being who had created them all.
Author Note: I do not own "The Beginning After The End" or "Solo Leveling" ; everything belongs to their respective authors. (Except my OCs if I add them)
(This is my first ever work.)
The cover is edited by me in Pixlr.
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It's a fun story, apart from the protagonist who I found very boring and pathetic, it's a good story in general........................ ..................................
I don't know exactly how to criticize the books, but the idea is nice writing, I also love the Shadow Sovereign's abilities and personality, but I couldn't understand one thing. Does he exactly look the same as Arthur? (Also, wasn't the Solo Leveling god the maniac who enjoyed the battle between Sovereigns and Sovereigns?)
New story with great potential, and I look forward to where you will go with this Fanfiction. ......................................................
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It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.
At first I was hesitant because it wasn't a loser who reincarnated but a very serious character in my view.... I couldn't find any intresting fanfics so I just read few chapters... It was surprising good, it became one my favorites along with the other novel where we have Wanda and his brother as couples and mainlead
I like that you did well on making Arthur fall down the cliff because I'm sure if you didn't do it well, then many people will throw a tantrum lol though I'm not sure in other people if it's really "well" but it is in my own bias opinion, 5stars here to increase the rating and good luck to your work.
I am not a novel reader soo i didnt know what the heck was going around in the later chapters..Still Great fanfic ------------------------------------------------------------------
Thanks for writing this piece of art, it fully delivered the hype I expected from the crossover between Solo Leveling and The Beginning After The End. You didn't make some weird additions, it was just things from both stories merged in the purest forms possible. I loved it!
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bro why stop writing such a great FF you monster 😭. .. .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. ,'*discuss the same thing to say that the same 43 🧚🏻♀️💫🥰💞 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard
how did i not find this on wn when i searched solo leveling. absolute banger. arthur also gonna bang the elf girl ;) i need word count wn just let me post the review
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A good novel of all sorts. Though some errors could be noticed in some parts (they barely even appear right now I think), everything is good. If I were to request something more in this novel, then faster updates! Yep, faster updates it is!
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this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
i mean its good but before i read it who is the love interest..............................................................................?
Nice and great that the translation issue was fixed or we would have missed a great fanfiction because of other people. ¯\_(⊙_ʖ⊙)_/¯乁[ᓀ˵▾˵ᓂ]ㄏ¯\_༼ ಥ ‿ ಥ ༽_/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯
I really want to read this story but becoming the Twin brother of Arthur, Author are you sure Absolute Being didn't played a trick on Ashborne. If the upcoming story can be guessed already, What's the fun in that. Well I will some more Chapters and see if this is Worth reading.[img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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To be honest, this is one of the greatest tbate fanfic that I have seen. It has a very original approach to the story but it does copy some parts of the story but I think that was necessary for it develop and even if there is it is mostly fast paced and was not given much importance.