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The little boy with the sticky figure at the age of twelve lives his life without knowing the world, happiness, friends, and many things. When he had the chance to get it, he died due to the accident.
He has been reincarnated to a world where Magic, Warcraft, and demons are there.
But even in this world, he has cruel faith. He will die at age of fifteen.
But with an unexpected event, he gets a pendant that holds the power that he wants and the voices known as "Red" which helps him.
Now, will he be able to change the fate of his life? Or will he die mescribly even here?
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So far ....your book is interesting and nice!!!!!!! it bears a lot of potential..........just some minor errors that needs to be corrected,aside from that, its great.
despite of a insignificant typos here and there the book is good 👍. keep on writing and spend more time editing at the start. story has a huge potential
Most exciting story...❤📚👍👍 Naveen your are really great Continue it.. Good job 👏 Everyone Read this novel❤ 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 😉😉😉😉✌✌✌✌✌✌
I like your plot and characters. You need to concentrate on grammar I think. Otherwise its really nice. All the best for your work, do update regularly if possible.
In all fairness to the author, English clearly isn't their first language. So, the story in and of itself is good. It's relatively unique, and would be fun enough if I could understand it. Sadly, the story's grammar, sentence structure and bizarre writing style and flow make this a very difficult experience, as I was left guessing more times than not. That said, when I can understand the story, I do like it. 2.8/5
A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
I have read the chapter and I was iddected to it on the get go. Hope you keep on writing it and complete the new world of wonders. Great start 👍👍👍👍
Great work bro 👍👍. Story plot is great and the storyline is interesting. Keep it up💥😁🔥. Characters are good and it is fun to read. Expecting more good chapters.
The story has great potential. it is simple and clear. the writing is easy to undresatand. just a bit of editing and this book could be a gem. good luck author
Wow... This is an interesting book to read... I am amazed. This is going, awesome author. Hooked on this book. Waiting for the new updates... Do update quickly cant wait for the next chapter. Overall, a good book to recommend with good writing skills... Please keep it up:)