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god that guy is literally an adult and the relationship between him and his sister is wrong on so many levels especially with pedophilia and that's not saying his navie atitude
such a stupid mc..............................,................... hah~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
utter trash beta naive mc with trash powers why does the author try to write such thing such novel is nothing but hot garbage and while author super nerfs mc by making him dumb he makes his sister mc like character with one of the most op power in anime
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you just ruined the potential of this story sooo hard. ...........................................................................
mc is basically slave of his sister and rob. he's also has split personality along with his sister. too dark sometimes and too sweet sometimes. need to have a balance but too much dervirsity is bad.
This could've been interesting. This story has an entertaining psychological/horror element to it - plenty of dark themes. And then disaster strikes...MC reveals all his deepest, darkest secrets to an utter stranger. Get this...who he trusts first meeting simply because he thinks that the Fallen Agent Azazel is trustworthy from what he knows from the DxD anime. I've seen protagonists make poor choices before, but this is on a whole new level. The author must either be naive, or clearly just an idiot.
He told Azazel that he's a reincarnated person and his whole world is anime(He even told him about R.O.B and the mission). His sister knows this too. Mc is stupid, naive and cringy. He's so pathetic that this isn't even funny anymore. His sister is manipulating him and lying to him every time. Compared to his cheat his sister is growing way faster and working behind the scenes. The system is helping him develop proper character but is too slow and a lot of things happening behind his back. Nearly every character is doing something behind his back and he has no idea. Honestly, the real mc seems like his sister to me. Also, the system is very irritating. Me when I'm reading this:
its pretty good looking at the character comming together in a single novel. the character development could be alot better but the overall story is nice
Though i get people get upset of telling him a secret, he is sooner or later and this is just fiction not irl but azzazel is trust worthy in my book and this is a great story so far also i think the author will have something good in store for us so keep it up :)
MC IS STUPID 🙃.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
If this was intended to be a comedy... sorry it's really pathetic it ain't even funny. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
really hate the mc for telling everything that was just straight stupid no excuses even if the guy is chill and one of my fac characters that not allowed you gotta follow the rules man
In what place it is comedy ? It’s absolutely not funny ———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-
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Mc met Azazel and told him about R.O.B and the mission and told his sister that he is from another world and that they are characters from novels and anime. ruined it for me.
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okay, mc is stupid, I mean really stupid. he is cringy. in meeting with Azazel he told him everything, he could have told him that I have secrets but Nah, it could be a huge turn-off for many, he doesn't have a brain same as an author I guess. ah, he is irritating also. The same goes for the system
At first the story doesn't feel too interesting, many typo and grammar error, but over time the story quality kept getting better. For the newcomer I hope you give this one a shot, and try to stick it till chapter 9 or something 😄
in the sixth chapter he will tell Azazel that he is reborn from another world. At this point I gave it up, I hope I saved someone some time. . .. .. .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .
Didn´t rly expect it to be this good. But well i would recomend it to anyone who likes a bit of comedy with slice off life and a huge a*s siscon as an MC :D
The grammar is good for me ( i dont know what others think ) .the storyline in my opinion i give it a solid 4.5. I enjoy reading the book ( this is all base on my opinion be easy on me pls )
Well, this is a good story that have much potential and you need to read it. I got hooked just by reading a few chapters of this story. So I really recommend this story for you.
Got me hooked by the cover.......... I dont really have much to say.........................................................................
As of now chapter...10? is quite amazing and I love the aspect of the Yandere, and yes if you read the tag you know it contains yandere. . . Other than that, I don't know how to write this review,9/10 would always re-read it.
Uhh this is culture on here right? to rate your own novel 5*? .... Huh I felt strangely guilty about this. Well.. this is my fic. Literally write it for hobby and no one paid me for this. I have plot, or atleast plan to have good plot. Main selling probably comedy. Mc reincarnated to mixed anime world then later go other anime world because why not. See that akikan siscon novel? yah I take example from it. Except 10x cringe and 10x more siscon
The quality isn't that bad but the story is not good. Really sorry to say this but the plot and characters aren't up to Paar. I'm no fan of weak and stupid MC, but this here is borderline insane and just doesn't make sense with the MC being so old. In general Character Design is one major weakness of the story from the get go, it's so Inconsistent that it's basically non existent. Also the Tags aren't really accurate the story is much more darkish that happy go lucky and even the forced humor is pretty bad. I don't know where the Author wanted to go with his idea but it reads like he want sure himself.
god that guy is literally an adult and the relationship between him and his sister is wrong on so many levels especially with pedophilia and that's not saying his navie atitude
such a stupid mc..............................,................... hah~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
utter trash beta naive mc with trash powers why does the author try to write such thing such novel is nothing but hot garbage and while author super nerfs mc by making him dumb he makes his sister mc like character with one of the most op power in anime
trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
you just ruined the potential of this story sooo hard. ...........................................................................
mc is basically slave of his sister and rob. he's also has split personality along with his sister. too dark sometimes and too sweet sometimes. need to have a balance but too much dervirsity is bad.
This could've been interesting. This story has an entertaining psychological/horror element to it - plenty of dark themes. And then disaster strikes...MC reveals all his deepest, darkest secrets to an utter stranger. Get this...who he trusts first meeting simply because he thinks that the Fallen Agent Azazel is trustworthy from what he knows from the DxD anime. I've seen protagonists make poor choices before, but this is on a whole new level. The author must either be naive, or clearly just an idiot.
He told Azazel that he's a reincarnated person and his whole world is anime(He even told him about R.O.B and the mission). His sister knows this too. Mc is stupid, naive and cringy. He's so pathetic that this isn't even funny anymore. His sister is manipulating him and lying to him every time. Compared to his cheat his sister is growing way faster and working behind the scenes. The system is helping him develop proper character but is too slow and a lot of things happening behind his back. Nearly every character is doing something behind his back and he has no idea. Honestly, the real mc seems like his sister to me. Also, the system is very irritating. Me when I'm reading this:
its pretty good looking at the character comming together in a single novel. the character development could be alot better but the overall story is nice
Though i get people get upset of telling him a secret, he is sooner or later and this is just fiction not irl but azzazel is trust worthy in my book and this is a great story so far also i think the author will have something good in store for us so keep it up :)
MC IS STUPID 🙃.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
If this was intended to be a comedy... sorry it's really pathetic it ain't even funny. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
really hate the mc for telling everything that was just straight stupid no excuses even if the guy is chill and one of my fac characters that not allowed you gotta follow the rules man
In what place it is comedy ? It’s absolutely not funny ———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Mc met Azazel and told him about R.O.B and the mission and told his sister that he is from another world and that they are characters from novels and anime. ruined it for me.
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okay, mc is stupid, I mean really stupid. he is cringy. in meeting with Azazel he told him everything, he could have told him that I have secrets but Nah, it could be a huge turn-off for many, he doesn't have a brain same as an author I guess. ah, he is irritating also. The same goes for the system
At first the story doesn't feel too interesting, many typo and grammar error, but over time the story quality kept getting better. For the newcomer I hope you give this one a shot, and try to stick it till chapter 9 or something 😄
in the sixth chapter he will tell Azazel that he is reborn from another world. At this point I gave it up, I hope I saved someone some time. . .. .. .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .
Didn´t rly expect it to be this good. But well i would recomend it to anyone who likes a bit of comedy with slice off life and a huge a*s siscon as an MC :D
The grammar is good for me ( i dont know what others think ) .the storyline in my opinion i give it a solid 4.5. I enjoy reading the book ( this is all base on my opinion be easy on me pls )
Well, this is a good story that have much potential and you need to read it. I got hooked just by reading a few chapters of this story. So I really recommend this story for you.
Got me hooked by the cover.......... I dont really have much to say.........................................................................
As of now chapter...10? is quite amazing and I love the aspect of the Yandere, and yes if you read the tag you know it contains yandere. . . Other than that, I don't know how to write this review,9/10 would always re-read it.
Uhh this is culture on here right? to rate your own novel 5*? .... Huh I felt strangely guilty about this. Well.. this is my fic. Literally write it for hobby and no one paid me for this. I have plot, or atleast plan to have good plot. Main selling probably comedy. Mc reincarnated to mixed anime world then later go other anime world because why not. See that akikan siscon novel? yah I take example from it. Except 10x cringe and 10x more siscon
The quality isn't that bad but the story is not good. Really sorry to say this but the plot and characters aren't up to Paar. I'm no fan of weak and stupid MC, but this here is borderline insane and just doesn't make sense with the MC being so old. In general Character Design is one major weakness of the story from the get go, it's so Inconsistent that it's basically non existent. Also the Tags aren't really accurate the story is much more darkish that happy go lucky and even the forced humor is pretty bad. I don't know where the Author wanted to go with his idea but it reads like he want sure himself.