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I liked it. Overall, I enjoyed the story, and hopefully, the author can continue. I am really curious about how the story will continue developing. But yeah, you did a great job 👏 please keep it up 👍👍👍
when are we gonna se an updatethis is one if the best twilight fanficsI've thus fare but I have been waiting a year now plus why not Cora, Malia, and Laura Hale Erica and Lydia with Laura and Lydia actually being his fate mates from teen wolf so Laura won't have to die after peter takes her alpha spark
Too cringy for my taste with a god-complex MC read if you have nothing better to do and no updates to it, so skip this. Have a good day! [img=coins]
It is a good story and I like the direction it is going, I never liked Edward anyway. In my opinion you should let Jasper die in a fight and have him tell Adrian to transfer the b9nd before he dies so Alice wont be hurt. And update the story more when possible.
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I would have preferred it to be an actual castlevania fic with the mc as alucard especially with that Stupid scene in season three. AY YO AUTHOR CAN YOU HOOK A MAN UP
Hey author san update some chapter it been month since the last chapter was released (chp18) the suspens it killing me please hurry up update the chapters and please don't drop it. This is the best fan pic of twilight so pls don't drop and keep on releasing chapters ...
Author san please continue to write more chapters your work on twilight is the best in all the fan fiction so far so please continue release more chapters
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It's a cliche but enjoyable. Could be better without twilight thou [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
awesome fanfic bro waiting for more chapters and wish you will complete the novel. Best of luck and don't care much about other opinion .......
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its an amazing story so far and can't to read more. love what your doing! keep this up and please don't drop it i have a hard time already finding good twilight or teen wolf fics
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another generic cliche rosalie fic . Also alice is the best .👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
Awesome start dude. Look forward to seeing more of this story How many women will be in his heram will you add Tanya Keep up the good work dude.
the story is unique to alucard i have not found many of these stories of him I look forward to the continuation if it continues
I liked it. Overall, I enjoyed the story, and hopefully, the author can continue. I am really curious about how the story will continue developing. But yeah, you did a great job 👏 please keep it up 👍👍👍
when are we gonna se an updatethis is one if the best twilight fanficsI've thus fare but I have been waiting a year now plus why not Cora, Malia, and Laura Hale Erica and Lydia with Laura and Lydia actually being his fate mates from teen wolf so Laura won't have to die after peter takes her alpha spark
Too cringy for my taste with a god-complex MC read if you have nothing better to do and no updates to it, so skip this. Have a good day! [img=coins]
It is a good story and I like the direction it is going, I never liked Edward anyway. In my opinion you should let Jasper die in a fight and have him tell Adrian to transfer the b9nd before he dies so Alice wont be hurt. And update the story more when possible.
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I would have preferred it to be an actual castlevania fic with the mc as alucard especially with that Stupid scene in season three. AY YO AUTHOR CAN YOU HOOK A MAN UP
Hey author san update some chapter it been month since the last chapter was released (chp18) the suspens it killing me please hurry up update the chapters and please don't drop it. This is the best fan pic of twilight so pls don't drop and keep on releasing chapters ...
Author san please continue to write more chapters your work on twilight is the best in all the fan fiction so far so please continue release more chapters
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awesome fanfic bro waiting for more chapters and wish you will complete the novel. Best of luck and don't care much about other opinion .......
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its an amazing story so far and can't to read more. love what your doing! keep this up and please don't drop it i have a hard time already finding good twilight or teen wolf fics
Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
another generic cliche rosalie fic . Also alice is the best .👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
Awesome start dude. Look forward to seeing more of this story How many women will be in his heram will you add Tanya Keep up the good work dude.
the story is unique to alucard i have not found many of these stories of him I look forward to the continuation if it continues