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It starts ok but soon this novel becomes chaotic and i don't like those types of novels when mc goes to many places without any logic. Maybe author want to express the time and space attributes but is not doing a very good job.
I really enjoyed this book but I don't know what happened but author sama please continue this book don't drop it .... it's very good novel
thanks again so much and have a wonderful day and thank king for all your wonderful work kept us happy writing our own thoughts ghhjfddguiutrryuu7
Well first of all i am really glad to come across this book....the author ingeniously incorporated the indian myths into a martial arts and cultivation novel....that is so brilliant....the story development is good so far even it's a bit fast forward and some of the details remain a bit unclear....and the characters are good so far....the environment of the story is also very interesting.....but there are some grammatical errors and also the name of some of the characters keep changing....but overall the story is good so far n m enjoying this utterly....so keep up the good work n make this story more n more interesting
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This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.
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I'm on chapter 157 and the story was going great so far and i was really loving it that was until what happened with him punishing rose so I just want to know if he ever forgives her and they get back together otherwise I think I'm going to drop the novel because I really liked rose and if she never gets back together with him I will be upset. also if it takes like 500 chapters for then to be reunited I will still probably drop because that is too long and I don't like when novels have separation arcs. So I would appreciate if author could reply so I can at least know if they get back together in less than 500 chapters
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Hello there, Yup if you are wondering whether you should read this story or not then don't wonder anymore. Just open it and then read. After all, only that can answer whether you made a right choice or not. However, I didn't regret it. Nice Plot with anice story and with minimilisatic grammatical errors. Looking forward to read more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
character name are chinese but it have mixed hindu(indian) .style which is fixed perfectly. Some Chinese novel depicts or other nation god or hindu god as a negative or disrespect them , which is not in here as an indian I love this , that they are well-written and respected here.
I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates. The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC. He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting. Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that. While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 4 The total score - 4
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It is a good read. but's it's a bit hard to follow because of the misuse and misplacement of phrasing and words. Aside from that it was a pretty well developed story, I actually rather enjoyed it.
writing style and grammar needs to improve but the story is enjoyable to read and you would want to know further story while reading so I hope author continue to write this novel for many more chapters. and i would like a mc who is more confident and clever and also true to his desire without hurting people...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
After a break of three months, the hiatus on this book is lifted with the newest adventure of Volume 2. Some themes for the upcoming volume 2 sequel: 1. mc will devote to Armament Crafting and its related cultivation technique, following and unraveling the Secret of his Ancestor Tang Chen. I believe you have come across Tang Chen in the previous Volume 1. 2. Mc will be taking the path of a supervillain. 3. Ascending to the new world. 4. Also, don't worry about the seal as it's meant only for some time. 5. Will steal gods and other immortal masters' beautiful wives and concubines. 6. And yes, there is will be a package of laughter, action, and thrilling mysteries as usual. 7. A bit slowing down the pace. But, I'll try picking up the pace... 8. Please, give me some 4 or 5 stars reviews if you like this book. Or just ignore it, if you don't feel like that.
ネタバレを明かす It starts ok but soon this novel becomes chaotic and i don't like those types of novels when mc goes to many places without any logic. Maybe author want to express the time and space attributes but is not doing a very good job.
I really enjoyed this book but I don't know what happened but author sama please continue this book don't drop it .... it's very good novel
thanks again so much and have a wonderful day and thank king for all your wonderful work kept us happy writing our own thoughts ghhjfddguiutrryuu7
Well first of all i am really glad to come across this book....the author ingeniously incorporated the indian myths into a martial arts and cultivation novel....that is so brilliant....the story development is good so far even it's a bit fast forward and some of the details remain a bit unclear....and the characters are good so far....the environment of the story is also very interesting.....but there are some grammatical errors and also the name of some of the characters keep changing....but overall the story is good so far n m enjoying this utterly....so keep up the good work n make this story more n more interesting
ネタバレを明かす This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.
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I'm on chapter 157 and the story was going great so far and i was really loving it that was until what happened with him punishing rose so I just want to know if he ever forgives her and they get back together otherwise I think I'm going to drop the novel because I really liked rose and if she never gets back together with him I will be upset. also if it takes like 500 chapters for then to be reunited I will still probably drop because that is too long and I don't like when novels have separation arcs. So I would appreciate if author could reply so I can at least know if they get back together in less than 500 chapters
ネタバレを明かす Hello there, Yup if you are wondering whether you should read this story or not then don't wonder anymore. Just open it and then read. After all, only that can answer whether you made a right choice or not. However, I didn't regret it. Nice Plot with anice story and with minimilisatic grammatical errors. Looking forward to read more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
character name are chinese but it have mixed hindu(indian) .style which is fixed perfectly. Some Chinese novel depicts or other nation god or hindu god as a negative or disrespect them , which is not in here as an indian I love this , that they are well-written and respected here.
I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates. The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC. He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting. Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that. While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 4 The total score - 4
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Shameless review from the author. Guys, I get a lot of complaints about my grammar issues. I have edited some of my errors. So. Please keep reading. And suggest your ideas about my novel. Best of luck everyone.
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It is a good read. but's it's a bit hard to follow because of the misuse and misplacement of phrasing and words. Aside from that it was a pretty well developed story, I actually rather enjoyed it.
writing style and grammar needs to improve but the story is enjoyable to read and you would want to know further story while reading so I hope author continue to write this novel for many more chapters. and i would like a mc who is more confident and clever and also true to his desire without hurting people...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
After a break of three months, the hiatus on this book is lifted with the newest adventure of Volume 2. Some themes for the upcoming volume 2 sequel: 1. mc will devote to Armament Crafting and its related cultivation technique, following and unraveling the Secret of his Ancestor Tang Chen. I believe you have come across Tang Chen in the previous Volume 1. 2. Mc will be taking the path of a supervillain. 3. Ascending to the new world. 4. Also, don't worry about the seal as it's meant only for some time. 5. Will steal gods and other immortal masters' beautiful wives and concubines. 6. And yes, there is will be a package of laughter, action, and thrilling mysteries as usual. 7. A bit slowing down the pace. But, I'll try picking up the pace... 8. Please, give me some 4 or 5 stars reviews if you like this book. Or just ignore it, if you don't feel like that.
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