/ Fantasy / My Blind Brother ( english version )
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nina kemala puspa. the name she received from her adoptive parents. but 15 years ago, she was living in an orphanage. she doesn't remember anything other than just living life with a boy while in the orphanage.
she remembers nothing but the necklace she received from the boy before seperate.
she even keeps the necklace and as she grows into a cheerful girl, believes that one day we will meet again.
and she didn't expect that she would meet at an unexpected time. especially, when she wears the necklace.
( This is from a short story I've made before. I changed a lot as I changed to the English version. there are 2 volumes. if you like it. please comment and I will immediately change the 2nd version in English. It's a shame but I hope you guys enjoy this. )
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it's not everyday you come across something so simple and yet fascinating. I love it, no exaggerated dramas, plots. Just Nina who keeps the promise in her head and never let go. I really want to see her happy, so will be looking forward to more of this author.......
I've read a few chapters and the plot is just amazing. Although the chapters are short they manage to attract my attention every single time, and childhood friends to lovers? Count me in! Other than a few grammatical mistakes or errors, which is completely fine this is amazing! Kuddos to the author, they did a great job! ❤️👍
I read the first three chapters and the beginning is nice, I admit that. And about the pace of the story, well, it's kinda slow since the author gave a lot of details in each scene but despise that, I love this story.
I think this story is so cute !! It’s short and sweet and I love how soon the fluff begins 🤩🤩. There are some issues with grammar and switching between tenses but those errors didn’t affect my understanding at all. Thank you author for creating such a lovely story!!
Simple yet captivating... The storyline is not something too unique but the simple writing style is, it captured my attention (Nina is also cute!). Keep up the good work author!
Just wow 💜 Nice story . Plots , characters , settings are really engaging . Really amazing story, Here you have 💜💜💜 Keep up the good work Author 👍🏻
A romace comedy with a light tone. I feel i can bond with the characters after just a three chapters, because they are easy to relatable. The novel though can use some little editing and it's be smooth to read. Keep going author, story must be told.
Just read some chapters and here I am to share my thoughts 💛 Over all the story plot looks so interesting enough to get you hooked and the characters and story telling is all good I'll love to read more from you Good work author 💚[img=recommend]
Very nice story setting, the characters are quite vocal and their train of thoughts are articulated in a engaging manner. the Main character is like a cherry on cake. all in all a promising premise.
卷 1 : dark red memories
- 1 01. feeling. 3 years ago
- 2 02. like fading 3 years ago
- 3 03. doubt 3 years ago
- 4 04. as cold as the sun 3 years ago
- 5 05. unexpected feeling 3 years ago
- 6 06. hiding colour 3 years ago
- 7 07. melted feelings. 3 years ago
- 8 08. patient. 3 years ago
- 9 09. like touching a mirror 3 years ago
- 10 10. untouched wound. 3 years ago
- 11 11. as warm as the sun. 3 years ago
- 12 12. as the flowers flow from the water. 3 years ago
卷 2 : sky blue memories
- 13 13. the voice of a smile. 3 years ago
- 14 14. smile of twin flowers. 3 years ago
- 15 15. branch of doubt. 3 years ago
- 16 16. choose fragile branches. 3 years ago
- 17 17. like a leaf that grows back 3 years ago
- 18 18. opened thread. 3 years ago
- 19 19. blooming flower of memory. 3 years ago
- 20 20. the flower petals touched by the mirror 3 years ago
- 21 21. one quiet thorn 3 years ago
- 22 22. like a feather that falls beside a leaf. 3 years ago
I love the plot so much, it's very captivating and mind gripping. I would like it more if you elaborated more on your character's thoughts but aside from that your book is great.🥰🥰