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Vanix_

what kinda trash is this worthless aurthur u should take some english class first or just suicide just like ur worthless trash parents

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LastGod

Story is so poorly written it makes it almost impossible to understand. I still don't know if Loki is the MCU Loki or just an assassin named Loki. This is like if i had took all my good idea for this story and tossed them down a flight of stairs. Then I wrote what i found a the bottom. Just a jumble of interesting ideas with little to no direction or thought.

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Dreoklevi

Awful writing to the point of being unreadable... While the premise might be of some interest there's in its current state it's a waste of time.

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MonkeyDAnish

I believe this story to be one of the best out there and I don’t care for the mistakes. I hope you continue with this but slow down a little It will be great if you make him king of game of thrones world then move to middle earth start this great empire

2yr
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Honest_critic1980

ok beginning but the story felt so rushed. not enough time to develop the characters. it just felt like it was a fantasy to stroking the authors ego. one the the author was finish stroking his ego the story felt flat, and didn't even finish properly.

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GeeGeeTeeWuu

Author has only 1.6 hours of reading and it shows. it's ineligible, badly formatted and doesent make any sense. I wouldn't recommend reading if simple words spelt wrong annoys you.

2yr
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0DarkWolf0

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Justsome_nobody

Good...........................................................................................................................................................................................

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Carlos_Balbizan

it looks like the writing of a child who obviously hasn't read any other novels or fanfics, both from the lines and from the thoughts, really... I'm losing brains reading this (but the background is good, so the author is a kid with a good one imagination. if he could study his language better it would be a very good story)

3yr
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Kamienas

The story is good. I like the idea, and all the progress. Character picture not bad either. The main issue is dialog structure. It's like every paragraph made different way. Sometimes dialog starts with - John: blah blah... Sometimes John: " blah blah". And you can't say when people ar talking and when they are thinking. It's sad. I think if you could fix this issue, then story would have high quality based on other fanfics

3yr
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Queen_Karina

If you can look past the grammer then its a great story. And also some people might think that he is weak because his only power is to summon soldiers, but he is very good at fighting already (way better than anyone in westeros)

3yr
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DaoistIYvQsq

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manyaktavuk

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Dragonfenixx

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Daoist5Iix0W

До 20 главы хорошее построение сюжета а дальше все пошло на спад а последние главы вообще "детская неожиданность" Перестаю читать дальнейшие главы так как не затягивает

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Azazel_69

Great story please dont drop . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . nfjrirjfnnfn.fjcnc.ncncn n. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . ..

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Dragonfenixx

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1Volk_Winc_est4

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ShuYme

Very bad, lots of grammar mistakes and the structuring is also subpar.

3yr
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AlexisHM

Me encanta gracias x el trabajo que hacen en la traducción y corrección................................................. ........... ...... .... ..... ...... ............... ....

3yr
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starking

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3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Infinit

great story i recommend for those who like game of thrones fanfic

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Kane_Stone

This reminds me when I was young and couldn't write properly. I don't know why you write this in English when you could have written it in your language. it's Killing my brain cells.

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Sumayya_Riaz

So it was my first time reading a story in this genre. I liked the introduction very much. This story was amazing. Keep it up, author! Good luck, with the next chapters! it was a marvellous web novel.👍

3yr
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HaoShu
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Though there is improvement needed in the language the author can definitely do that, and its god there is such a system where I can summon an army for me to fight and use as well

3yr
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Vanix_

what kinda trash is this worthless aurthur u should take some english class first or just suicide just like ur worthless trash parents

4mth
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LastGod

Story is so poorly written it makes it almost impossible to understand. I still don't know if Loki is the MCU Loki or just an assassin named Loki. This is like if i had took all my good idea for this story and tossed them down a flight of stairs. Then I wrote what i found a the bottom. Just a jumble of interesting ideas with little to no direction or thought.

1yr
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Dreoklevi

Awful writing to the point of being unreadable... While the premise might be of some interest there's in its current state it's a waste of time.

1yr
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MonkeyDAnish

I believe this story to be one of the best out there and I don’t care for the mistakes. I hope you continue with this but slow down a little It will be great if you make him king of game of thrones world then move to middle earth start this great empire

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Honest_critic1980

ok beginning but the story felt so rushed. not enough time to develop the characters. it just felt like it was a fantasy to stroking the authors ego. one the the author was finish stroking his ego the story felt flat, and didn't even finish properly.

2yr
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GeeGeeTeeWuu

Author has only 1.6 hours of reading and it shows. it's ineligible, badly formatted and doesent make any sense. I wouldn't recommend reading if simple words spelt wrong annoys you.

2yr
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0DarkWolf0

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3yr
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Justsome_nobody

Good...........................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
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Carlos_Balbizan

it looks like the writing of a child who obviously hasn't read any other novels or fanfics, both from the lines and from the thoughts, really... I'm losing brains reading this (but the background is good, so the author is a kid with a good one imagination. if he could study his language better it would be a very good story)

3yr
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Kamienas

The story is good. I like the idea, and all the progress. Character picture not bad either. The main issue is dialog structure. It's like every paragraph made different way. Sometimes dialog starts with - John: blah blah... Sometimes John: " blah blah". And you can't say when people ar talking and when they are thinking. It's sad. I think if you could fix this issue, then story would have high quality based on other fanfics

3yr
0 の返信を表示する
Queen_Karina

If you can look past the grammer then its a great story. And also some people might think that he is weak because his only power is to summon soldiers, but he is very good at fighting already (way better than anyone in westeros)

3yr
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DaoistIYvQsq

continue oh creative A a a a a a. A aa. Qq. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a aa a a. A a a a a a a a a s s. S x. W 2 1 1 2 2 2 2 3 3.4 3 4 4 4 4.5 5 5 5 5.55.5 5 5. Us. Us. 4. D d. D d d d e e e d d d e ss. E e s s ejekekdiirir e e d d x d e. R f x. S d. T f s. W a a a a a a a. A a a a a

3yr
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manyaktavuk

give original link or name pls mjeui6yjeu3uejejthrnrtjtenhrnhryhnnhrhneuunte he5nenehtnhtet hbhentehntehnt3hnhnyejnenhenjyr juku.ntbh

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Daoist5Iix0W

До 20 главы хорошее построение сюжета а дальше все пошло на спад а последние главы вообще "детская неожиданность" Перестаю читать дальнейшие главы так как не затягивает

3yr
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Azazel_69

Great story please dont drop . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . nfjrirjfnnfn.fjcnc.ncncn n. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . ..

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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1Volk_Winc_est4

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3yr
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ShuYme

Very bad, lots of grammar mistakes and the structuring is also subpar.

3yr
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AlexisHM

Me encanta gracias x el trabajo que hacen en la traducción y corrección................................................. ........... ...... .... ..... ...... ............... ....

3yr
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starking

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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Infinit

great story i recommend for those who like game of thrones fanfic

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Kane_Stone

This reminds me when I was young and couldn't write properly. I don't know why you write this in English when you could have written it in your language. it's Killing my brain cells.

3yr
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Dragonfenixx

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3yr
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Sumayya_Riaz

So it was my first time reading a story in this genre. I liked the introduction very much. This story was amazing. Keep it up, author! Good luck, with the next chapters! it was a marvellous web novel.👍

3yr
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HaoShu
LV 12 Badge

Though there is improvement needed in the language the author can definitely do that, and its god there is such a system where I can summon an army for me to fight and use as well

3yr
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