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I was born into a new world with a system can brings warriors from another world to help me rise and dominate the world of Game of Thrones
{ the system }
Choose the type of soldier you want
[Assassin's Creed - Lord of the Rings - Sparta - Special Class]
This novel is just for fun and not for any material purpose, so I don't care about negative comments, but positive comments are welcome
cover photo is not mine
Note::::: The novel is translated from my original language into English. You may notice some strange words. Try to use your imagination and your mind to understand.
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English is my first language and I almost forgot how to speak while reading this fanfic. That's how bad the writing quality is. However, if you look past that, then this story itself has a lot of potential. You can see that the author is really trying to express his ideas as best as he can, and I appreciate that.
This story seems to be translated by someone who doesn't speak English. If you want to laugh about words and sentences like: Aragorn split America in half. (in the next sentence his name was waragorn) Assein Creed, Sparat or Assen Creed and more. Then this is for you. If you want to read a story then this is unreadable. Why someone would translate into a language he doesn't speak is the biggest question here. Also if you are a leader you understand the story it's not really worth the effort since it's pretty bad itself.
Too difficult to read in my opinion. I mean, there has to be some line that shall not be crossed in terms of grammar, right? Whatever, give it a try but don't say I didn't warn you
This reminds me when I was young and couldn't write properly. I don't know why you write this in English when you could have written it in your language. it's Killing my brain cells.
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I would like a representation based on the map of Westeros of where his house is and its location and the size of the territory, just for me to map and locate myself better before the wars start.
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So it was my first time reading a story in this genre. I liked the introduction very much. This story was amazing. Keep it up, author! Good luck, with the next chapters! it was a marvellous web novel.👍
Though there is improvement needed in the language the author can definitely do that, and its god there is such a system where I can summon an army for me to fight and use as well
very exciting novel but the language is very bad you need to focus more while writing a lot of time jump but it's very interesting keep on
Great story i hope you release regular chapters, and i would like to know how many chapters would be released per week or the release days, although i expect it to be 1 chapter per day kkkk.
I believe this story to be one of the best out there and I don’t care for the mistakes. I hope you continue with this but slow down a little It will be great if you make him king of game of thrones world then move to middle earth start this great empire
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it looks like the writing of a child who obviously hasn't read any other novels or fanfics, both from the lines and from the thoughts, really... I'm losing brains reading this (but the background is good, so the author is a kid with a good one imagination. if he could study his language better it would be a very good story)
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