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extremely poorly written, with glaring inconsistencies everywhere. author/editor cannot keep pronouns (he his her hers) consistently defined. author cannot keep story elements consistent (level 30 gold chest armor gives immunity to all magic level 30 and under ... yet the character still needs to randomly dodge magic attacks from level 25 and 30 monsters??? but a few chapters later, the immunity is back and EXPLAINED AGAIN... and a few chapters later, he STILL needs to dodge low level magic attacks???) not a recommended read for those who don't like bad memory issues from authors. entire book needs a good reworking between the author and a proper editing team.
It's been 8 months since the last published chapter...adding a translation so full of errors that it is even difficult to understand the gender of the protagonist...a completely negative judgment is inevitable!!!
Fairly decent story. grammar and consistency of words/stats do not always carry over. The story seems like it took the Chinese Webnovel Kings Avatar and put it the Mc in a generic game world enters real world story. Kings Avatar: mc is a pro player that has to restart his character and decides to be an all rounder, with a goal of creating a weapon that changes based off needs and class. Weapon requirements are unique items only dropped for first kills of early game bosses. Mc gets dumped by his gaming org so decides to build his own team. This novel: mc is a pro player who gets killed and reincarnates at the start of the game with his op all rounder class and then decides to build a weapon that changes based off class and needs. Weapon requirements are unique items only dropped for first kills in early game. Mc gets killed by other large guilds as a solo player. Then decides to build his own guild/team so he has people he can trust later
This book started out pretty good and I really liked it even with the typos and mess ups. But as it continued it got to where I hated it. I wasted coins on one or two full chapters where the same things were said from earlier chapters. The repetition of explains the same thing over and over is ridiculous in this. On top of that it took one or two full chapters to show the details of multiple weapons or monsters and bosses that we had already seen or that didn’t matter much. Then the mess ups got worse and changed languages, and even repeated the same exact paragraphs in a row three times. A chapter or two were completely cut. This is just terrible. No editing or even checking if it was in order before releasing.
If i have to sum my experience with reading this novel, it's that the concept has potential but i was done horribily from a lot of points of view. 1 the are a lot of translation error and a lot of things ( like someone else already said in the rewies) have been change to be more fram the Western side of the world instead of being Chinese like they should ( es. names) 2 A lot of hole in the plot: In the first 50 chapters he made a wepon that could change in every weapon, but in the descrition it was said that the wepon could devour other weapons grow stronger and unlock other forms; but, since when he made the weapon, he never devour other wepons and still tranform the weapon in other forms it shouldn't have whithout ever updating the weapon description... ( since when he made to ch. 273 it always says the the form it can change are: sword, bow and gun). The other important hole in the story is that he is max level in all class but after ch200 you discover that after lv30 someone can upgrade the lv of the skills and he start just then to upgrade a few skills ( not all, as if he could only do a few for the moment...). 3 Other problem from the translator, near ch220 there was a skip of at least 10 chapters between the original and here ( i say at least because here you can't see difference from the nubmers, but in the story you can see that a lot of things happened without sense and knoing). 4 The last problem is that since, more or less, ch 150 there are a lot of repetitive frases and description ( there are also chpaters of only descriptions that are 80% similar to the others, es. Fire elemental monster, Ice elementale, earth elemental.... other than the skill and name everything else is the same but it is still written) and, for me, it became a major waste of coins .
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Author focuses more on providing details of each and every villain MC fights. Keeps on adding repetitive description of artifact's and weapons which makes majority of of a chapter's content and less of character/story development. Author should focus on story and character development instead of repetitive and filler contents.
unoriginal, bland, boring, and confusing. the world is the same MMORPG all of these types of novels use, the plot is a mix of the 'the game fuses with the real word' and 'man goes back in time to play game, ends up fighting billion-dollar corporation', both of which are terribly done. the plot isn't interesting, as it's easy to predict, and the characters amount to best friends since age 2 who get motivated to change their ways and be more serious, and girl who idolizes mc in-game without knowing she yelled at him in real life. not only that, the author describes the game like it's a virtual reality game where the gamers go into a pod and only play with their consciousness, like rebirth of the thief, but then says it's a game played with a keyboard and mouse on a computer. it's just bad.
This is garbage plain and simple. He's already capped from the start so he can just steam roll everything. There is no excitement in this story whatsoever,
sorry but i have to say it this novel is trash as trash can be. i mean the MC has a lvl max (80) character and is using lvl 1 players as cannon fodders . might as well just go alone . and the grammar , there are a lot of mistakes and the mc name change quite a few times (all of this happened between ch 1 and 6 mind you)
Having not read other similar stories yet, this is pretty interesting. He’s not reborn though, he just time leaps to his younger self before the game launches. The characters are pretty standard, but in-game mechanics are not really fleshed out and are confusing, the merging of reality hasn’t been explained at all, and up to about chapters 170 and out, the one-sentence paragraphs are everywhere and make it hard to read. There’s so much setup that it’s not clear how much time has passed since he restarted
main character and a couple side characters keep getting genderswapped, probably a translation problem. originally i thought it was a vr game. but now theyve switched to pc mouse and keyboard?? dunno whats going on with that. the game itself is weird. no attributes for level up, everything stat wise is equipment based. MCs game play is fairly stupid at times. and the reader can be confused about what is happening. while not horrible some skill names, character names, equipment names and job titles continue to change, would not recommend to read and ill br dropping.
Personally i can understand a little of what the author may have been thinking but in the end its just an assumption. Most of the time the translations can get very confusing and i can accept that to a certain extent but even I have to admit that there is just far too much and its even consistent with the errors. Then there is also the confusion with the gender of the character. they seem to fluctuate far too much and far too often which i also pin on it likely being lost in translation but sadly that does affect the character design in my opinion if i cant even understand who or what the character is suppose to look or even be. All in all i personally like how the story tries to go too so far and on this review i am at around 45 chapters in. I will not lie to you, the translations make this novel very confusing but to me it still is a very nice and entertaining story. If the translations were not so muddled and confusing i have no doubt that this novel would get more respect than it seems to get, this is also an opinion of mine based on lots of comments i have read during reading the chapters and even some that i left. So to conclude, the story is nice and to all who are confused on just what is up with the MAIN CHARACTER I am assuming the authors intentions are that he is a person who has a game character (who may or may not be him in the future im not gonna asuume that far) that is back to the beginning LEVEL but has ALL THE CLASSES MAXED. So we do not have an ALL POWERFUL mc with insane stats. This is most likely a novel with a mc who has all the skills in the game but still needs to gain levels but also has with him the future events of his past life with him ( this too seems to include his input skills for the game he likely gained through the time he had spent in the future playin that also came with him.)
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Super bad. Why the **** is the MC acting weak on a Beginner village while being a Final Boss Battle level. I don't know. The MC have some problems on the brain.
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it's not even that bad why is it only 2.46 stars? I really don't get it. stop being so negative and touch some grass. The levels are representative of what level skills they can learn or areas they can visit. you also need high levels to get some quests or enter certain dungeons. class is what type of skills they can use.
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Good read.............................. Keep up the good work............................................................ ................
I wish that there were more then two chapters per week. The novel is great. The author me like the kings avatar keyboard typing speed. It’s not actually virtual reality like they make sometimes. I am not sure how them being stuff in the game world would work maybe a keyboard in the game worl… It will probably just be everyones in the game and they stop talking about real life.
Absolute trash of a novel. Max level God of War almost dies to a level 4 boss? Hello? Don’t read this novel if you don’t want more holes then a cheese grater.
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i was expecting the MC to have max lv but it's should be MC has access to all of the classes skill (i only read till the first dungeon) cause a max lv character should instant kill any mob or boss on that first dungeon, i mean he should have stat bonus for all max lv class and max lv char stat so MC should be OP from the start no matter how hard he try to act weak it was impossible even with beginner equipment with his all class max lv char. the author should try to play a game with max lv char and enter the first dungeon in the game before writing this story
Don't read this it just isn't worth it. He literally nearly died to a beginner boss as a Max Level. It won't be worth reading if even such a minor detail is missed. Sorry author.
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Good-looking novels make you happy. The author’s writing style is very good. I really like the text and its rich plot, and there are many kinds of story clues. All the plots are also very well-founded and quite. Recommended to everyone. novelsv.com
from vr suddenly to pc it really makes me wanna punch the author face dear author, stop writing and get some real job. stop burdening your parents
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Is an amazing story that was really consistent but unfortunately the author focused on other stories and I pray that they return to this one
extremely poorly written, with glaring inconsistencies everywhere. author/editor cannot keep pronouns (he his her hers) consistently defined. author cannot keep story elements consistent (level 30 gold chest armor gives immunity to all magic level 30 and under ... yet the character still needs to randomly dodge magic attacks from level 25 and 30 monsters??? but a few chapters later, the immunity is back and EXPLAINED AGAIN... and a few chapters later, he STILL needs to dodge low level magic attacks???) not a recommended read for those who don't like bad memory issues from authors. entire book needs a good reworking between the author and a proper editing team.
It's been 8 months since the last published chapter...adding a translation so full of errors that it is even difficult to understand the gender of the protagonist...a completely negative judgment is inevitable!!!
Fairly decent story. grammar and consistency of words/stats do not always carry over. The story seems like it took the Chinese Webnovel Kings Avatar and put it the Mc in a generic game world enters real world story. Kings Avatar: mc is a pro player that has to restart his character and decides to be an all rounder, with a goal of creating a weapon that changes based off needs and class. Weapon requirements are unique items only dropped for first kills of early game bosses. Mc gets dumped by his gaming org so decides to build his own team. This novel: mc is a pro player who gets killed and reincarnates at the start of the game with his op all rounder class and then decides to build a weapon that changes based off class and needs. Weapon requirements are unique items only dropped for first kills in early game. Mc gets killed by other large guilds as a solo player. Then decides to build his own guild/team so he has people he can trust later
This book started out pretty good and I really liked it even with the typos and mess ups. But as it continued it got to where I hated it. I wasted coins on one or two full chapters where the same things were said from earlier chapters. The repetition of explains the same thing over and over is ridiculous in this. On top of that it took one or two full chapters to show the details of multiple weapons or monsters and bosses that we had already seen or that didn’t matter much. Then the mess ups got worse and changed languages, and even repeated the same exact paragraphs in a row three times. A chapter or two were completely cut. This is just terrible. No editing or even checking if it was in order before releasing.
If i have to sum my experience with reading this novel, it's that the concept has potential but i was done horribily from a lot of points of view. 1 the are a lot of translation error and a lot of things ( like someone else already said in the rewies) have been change to be more fram the Western side of the world instead of being Chinese like they should ( es. names) 2 A lot of hole in the plot: In the first 50 chapters he made a wepon that could change in every weapon, but in the descrition it was said that the wepon could devour other weapons grow stronger and unlock other forms; but, since when he made the weapon, he never devour other wepons and still tranform the weapon in other forms it shouldn't have whithout ever updating the weapon description... ( since when he made to ch. 273 it always says the the form it can change are: sword, bow and gun). The other important hole in the story is that he is max level in all class but after ch200 you discover that after lv30 someone can upgrade the lv of the skills and he start just then to upgrade a few skills ( not all, as if he could only do a few for the moment...). 3 Other problem from the translator, near ch220 there was a skip of at least 10 chapters between the original and here ( i say at least because here you can't see difference from the nubmers, but in the story you can see that a lot of things happened without sense and knoing). 4 The last problem is that since, more or less, ch 150 there are a lot of repetitive frases and description ( there are also chpaters of only descriptions that are 80% similar to the others, es. Fire elemental monster, Ice elementale, earth elemental.... other than the skill and name everything else is the same but it is still written) and, for me, it became a major waste of coins .
ネタバレを明かす Author focuses more on providing details of each and every villain MC fights. Keeps on adding repetitive description of artifact's and weapons which makes majority of of a chapter's content and less of character/story development. Author should focus on story and character development instead of repetitive and filler contents.
unoriginal, bland, boring, and confusing. the world is the same MMORPG all of these types of novels use, the plot is a mix of the 'the game fuses with the real word' and 'man goes back in time to play game, ends up fighting billion-dollar corporation', both of which are terribly done. the plot isn't interesting, as it's easy to predict, and the characters amount to best friends since age 2 who get motivated to change their ways and be more serious, and girl who idolizes mc in-game without knowing she yelled at him in real life. not only that, the author describes the game like it's a virtual reality game where the gamers go into a pod and only play with their consciousness, like rebirth of the thief, but then says it's a game played with a keyboard and mouse on a computer. it's just bad.
This is garbage plain and simple. He's already capped from the start so he can just steam roll everything. There is no excitement in this story whatsoever,
sorry but i have to say it this novel is trash as trash can be. i mean the MC has a lvl max (80) character and is using lvl 1 players as cannon fodders . might as well just go alone . and the grammar , there are a lot of mistakes and the mc name change quite a few times (all of this happened between ch 1 and 6 mind you)
Having not read other similar stories yet, this is pretty interesting. He’s not reborn though, he just time leaps to his younger self before the game launches. The characters are pretty standard, but in-game mechanics are not really fleshed out and are confusing, the merging of reality hasn’t been explained at all, and up to about chapters 170 and out, the one-sentence paragraphs are everywhere and make it hard to read. There’s so much setup that it’s not clear how much time has passed since he restarted
main character and a couple side characters keep getting genderswapped, probably a translation problem. originally i thought it was a vr game. but now theyve switched to pc mouse and keyboard?? dunno whats going on with that. the game itself is weird. no attributes for level up, everything stat wise is equipment based. MCs game play is fairly stupid at times. and the reader can be confused about what is happening. while not horrible some skill names, character names, equipment names and job titles continue to change, would not recommend to read and ill br dropping.
Personally i can understand a little of what the author may have been thinking but in the end its just an assumption. Most of the time the translations can get very confusing and i can accept that to a certain extent but even I have to admit that there is just far too much and its even consistent with the errors. Then there is also the confusion with the gender of the character. they seem to fluctuate far too much and far too often which i also pin on it likely being lost in translation but sadly that does affect the character design in my opinion if i cant even understand who or what the character is suppose to look or even be. All in all i personally like how the story tries to go too so far and on this review i am at around 45 chapters in. I will not lie to you, the translations make this novel very confusing but to me it still is a very nice and entertaining story. If the translations were not so muddled and confusing i have no doubt that this novel would get more respect than it seems to get, this is also an opinion of mine based on lots of comments i have read during reading the chapters and even some that i left. So to conclude, the story is nice and to all who are confused on just what is up with the MAIN CHARACTER I am assuming the authors intentions are that he is a person who has a game character (who may or may not be him in the future im not gonna asuume that far) that is back to the beginning LEVEL but has ALL THE CLASSES MAXED. So we do not have an ALL POWERFUL mc with insane stats. This is most likely a novel with a mc who has all the skills in the game but still needs to gain levels but also has with him the future events of his past life with him ( this too seems to include his input skills for the game he likely gained through the time he had spent in the future playin that also came with him.)
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Super bad. Why the **** is the MC acting weak on a Beginner village while being a Final Boss Battle level. I don't know. The MC have some problems on the brain.
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it's not even that bad why is it only 2.46 stars? I really don't get it. stop being so negative and touch some grass. The levels are representative of what level skills they can learn or areas they can visit. you also need high levels to get some quests or enter certain dungeons. class is what type of skills they can use.
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Good read.............................. Keep up the good work............................................................ ................
I wish that there were more then two chapters per week. The novel is great. The author me like the kings avatar keyboard typing speed. It’s not actually virtual reality like they make sometimes. I am not sure how them being stuff in the game world would work maybe a keyboard in the game worl… It will probably just be everyones in the game and they stop talking about real life.
Absolute trash of a novel. Max level God of War almost dies to a level 4 boss? Hello? Don’t read this novel if you don’t want more holes then a cheese grater.
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i was expecting the MC to have max lv but it's should be MC has access to all of the classes skill (i only read till the first dungeon) cause a max lv character should instant kill any mob or boss on that first dungeon, i mean he should have stat bonus for all max lv class and max lv char stat so MC should be OP from the start no matter how hard he try to act weak it was impossible even with beginner equipment with his all class max lv char. the author should try to play a game with max lv char and enter the first dungeon in the game before writing this story
Don't read this it just isn't worth it. He literally nearly died to a beginner boss as a Max Level. It won't be worth reading if even such a minor detail is missed. Sorry author.
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Good-looking novels make you happy. The author’s writing style is very good. I really like the text and its rich plot, and there are many kinds of story clues. All the plots are also very well-founded and quite. Recommended to everyone. novelsv.com
from vr suddenly to pc it really makes me wanna punch the author face dear author, stop writing and get some real job. stop burdening your parents
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Is an amazing story that was really consistent but unfortunately the author focused on other stories and I pray that they return to this one