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Great job, happy with the time spent!👍 .............................................................. It wouldn't hurt to change the cover..........................................................................................................................................................................................
the dialogues are too Xianxia for me, it disrupts the believability that this is a Naruto fic.
i am at chapter 224, although the quality of translation dropped the latest chapter it's still much better than MTL but the thing that really bothered me is how the author interpret Orochimaru character and how the MC deal with the aftermath of his actions but it's still bearable, the other thing that confused me is the chapter 223 and 224 is it real or just Naruto's memory lane before death and if it is real how??
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Main character has big plans but is also a normal human who had to steel himself, also nice concept
I Swear To God, Upon Seeing The Summary, I Thought It Is Just A Twisted Novel & Was About To Give It Up, But Nonetheless, I Tried A Chapter And Got Hooked On It Real Bad, This Is One Of The Best Naruto Fan fiction That I Have Ever Read. Kudos To Writer For This Masterpiece 😍
let's keep it simple. its a betrayed, cheated, manipulated and lied to book genre's worst nightmare. if you take betrayed and evil main chracter and put thm here, they would kill themselves.
ネタバレを明かす
this novel is underrated ont this site, even though it uses wuxia type writing style. its really a fresh cut when you read it in Naruto version. i recommend reading this novel for sure as the story development takes a very interesting route and above all what i didn't expect was that it was incredible compelling to read without able to guess what comes next. and last but not least throughout the story i got a lot of emotional tugs from my heartstrings reading this as even if you are not able to know how the characters feels at least you will feel incredibly empathetic for that said character. 100% worth giving it a try PS: there is no racistbulls**t, so you are safe from that. at least so far i read on this novel from this site. thankyou
give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Good overall. Author know the major story, either from comic or film. But he also a smart-pants wannabe. The story progress with MC scheme and wit, smooth walk with no actual conflict. The MC plan as if he know 100% of the outcome, and the others character were altered to fit his plan, which is bad. Naruto sudennly become Chinese while shouting "Courting death!!". Others character also stray from the original story, exampe is : Making Orochimaru more kind and stupid, Hiruzen be bad old fox, and many more alteration. All of that originated from a mere Chinese dark theory, something that the MC frustatingly always right. All in all, I like the story. Except for the author way of degrading Masashi original character. If you like smooth story of scheme, read this. But if you're Naruto fans, I think there might be a bit problemn...
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very nice///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I have already read the mtl, at least until naruto world ended. This novel make me cry on some situation Naruto experienced. A sad story to read
The plot development is very unique unlike other Naruto ff. The character development is a bit concerning as I don't know if Naruto will continue to be soft but whatever. I really am in love with this ff! Hope there will be more chapters releases!
This ff is engaging to me. It's going so well! The writing quality is nice along with the facts you include about the Naruto series. The development doesn't seem rushed. It's nice seeing a hard-hearted Mc. Updating stability = 👍 Basically 5 stars.
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I have read this story until the end of the Naruto world and it was a fun trip for me. The characters do some pretty dumb stuff at times but I tend to enjoy just laughing at such stuff so be warned if that isn't your cup of tea. The MC of this story gets dropped into the naruto world and given a system that gets points for darkening naruto or essentially forcing naruto to accept and be changed by dark stuff. A bit spoilery down below. Mc decides he doesn't want to break little naruto to win points even if those points could give him safety and power. This story is then about the MC using his knowledge of the manga and anime to orchestrate various events surrounding naruto to achieve that darkening gradually and in a way that prevents naruto from breaking. It's an interesting story where the MC comes to love naruto so he has to find increasingly convoluted ways to ensure that he completes his mission while ensuring naruto can still have a happy ending despite how jaded he becomes.
Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad,
i have read in mtl, the darkening system is trash even until the very end when naruto reached the 100% darkening he's still soft and naive, tsunade ordered jiraiya to kill naruto and he killed naruto and the mc reincarnate naruto and fake his death so naruto can reach 100% darkening and then he attacked konoha along with the akatsuki and yet naruto cant kill jiraiya and tsunade because of drama reason
The novel is quite interesting to read and in this novel we can see the shinobi world as well as the civilian world as the MC stays at both places. For the translator all I can say is that you are doing great in translating the novel.
correction. Rock is a surname and Lee is a given name thus Rock Lee. Naruto is from Japan first name is a surname.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Nice story .................................................................................................................................... ..................................................................
More more more! This is such a great book! I want More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More!!!
The best novel ever the main character is very intelligent and strong in the beginning I don't want to read this story but when I start read there was a lot of things that make me continue to read and not satisfy till the end thank you for all this translation thank you for this great story
Great job, happy with the time spent!👍 .............................................................. It wouldn't hurt to change the cover..........................................................................................................................................................................................
the dialogues are too Xianxia for me, it disrupts the believability that this is a Naruto fic.
i am at chapter 224, although the quality of translation dropped the latest chapter it's still much better than MTL but the thing that really bothered me is how the author interpret Orochimaru character and how the MC deal with the aftermath of his actions but it's still bearable, the other thing that confused me is the chapter 223 and 224 is it real or just Naruto's memory lane before death and if it is real how??
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Main character has big plans but is also a normal human who had to steel himself, also nice concept
I Swear To God, Upon Seeing The Summary, I Thought It Is Just A Twisted Novel & Was About To Give It Up, But Nonetheless, I Tried A Chapter And Got Hooked On It Real Bad, This Is One Of The Best Naruto Fan fiction That I Have Ever Read. Kudos To Writer For This Masterpiece 😍
let's keep it simple. its a betrayed, cheated, manipulated and lied to book genre's worst nightmare. if you take betrayed and evil main chracter and put thm here, they would kill themselves.
ネタバレを明かす this novel is underrated ont this site, even though it uses wuxia type writing style. its really a fresh cut when you read it in Naruto version. i recommend reading this novel for sure as the story development takes a very interesting route and above all what i didn't expect was that it was incredible compelling to read without able to guess what comes next. and last but not least throughout the story i got a lot of emotional tugs from my heartstrings reading this as even if you are not able to know how the characters feels at least you will feel incredibly empathetic for that said character. 100% worth giving it a try PS: there is no racistbulls**t, so you are safe from that. at least so far i read on this novel from this site. thankyou
give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂give me my free chapter 😂
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Good overall. Author know the major story, either from comic or film. But he also a smart-pants wannabe. The story progress with MC scheme and wit, smooth walk with no actual conflict. The MC plan as if he know 100% of the outcome, and the others character were altered to fit his plan, which is bad. Naruto sudennly become Chinese while shouting "Courting death!!". Others character also stray from the original story, exampe is : Making Orochimaru more kind and stupid, Hiruzen be bad old fox, and many more alteration. All of that originated from a mere Chinese dark theory, something that the MC frustatingly always right. All in all, I like the story. Except for the author way of degrading Masashi original character. If you like smooth story of scheme, read this. But if you're Naruto fans, I think there might be a bit problemn...
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very nice///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I have already read the mtl, at least until naruto world ended. This novel make me cry on some situation Naruto experienced. A sad story to read
The plot development is very unique unlike other Naruto ff. The character development is a bit concerning as I don't know if Naruto will continue to be soft but whatever. I really am in love with this ff! Hope there will be more chapters releases!
This ff is engaging to me. It's going so well! The writing quality is nice along with the facts you include about the Naruto series. The development doesn't seem rushed. It's nice seeing a hard-hearted Mc. Updating stability = 👍 Basically 5 stars.
Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice
I have read this story until the end of the Naruto world and it was a fun trip for me. The characters do some pretty dumb stuff at times but I tend to enjoy just laughing at such stuff so be warned if that isn't your cup of tea. The MC of this story gets dropped into the naruto world and given a system that gets points for darkening naruto or essentially forcing naruto to accept and be changed by dark stuff. A bit spoilery down below. Mc decides he doesn't want to break little naruto to win points even if those points could give him safety and power. This story is then about the MC using his knowledge of the manga and anime to orchestrate various events surrounding naruto to achieve that darkening gradually and in a way that prevents naruto from breaking. It's an interesting story where the MC comes to love naruto so he has to find increasingly convoluted ways to ensure that he completes his mission while ensuring naruto can still have a happy ending despite how jaded he becomes.
Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad, Not bad, not bad,
i have read in mtl, the darkening system is trash even until the very end when naruto reached the 100% darkening he's still soft and naive, tsunade ordered jiraiya to kill naruto and he killed naruto and the mc reincarnate naruto and fake his death so naruto can reach 100% darkening and then he attacked konoha along with the akatsuki and yet naruto cant kill jiraiya and tsunade because of drama reason
The novel is quite interesting to read and in this novel we can see the shinobi world as well as the civilian world as the MC stays at both places. For the translator all I can say is that you are doing great in translating the novel.
correction. Rock is a surname and Lee is a given name thus Rock Lee. Naruto is from Japan first name is a surname.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Nice story .................................................................................................................................... ..................................................................
More more more! This is such a great book! I want More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More more more More!!!
The best novel ever the main character is very intelligent and strong in the beginning I don't want to read this story but when I start read there was a lot of things that make me continue to read and not satisfy till the end thank you for all this translation thank you for this great story