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This story is so good. There are great descriptions and the main character left a deep impression. I could actually sympathise with him. And he seemed very courageous and very cool. Keep up with the good work author.
It is an all around amazing Story. one of the best i have read on this site. The World is extremely interseting and discribed in a very engaging way and so are all the battle scenes. The biggest strength of this novel though are the characters. Everyone has really interesting personalities and backstorys. And most importantly.... everyone seems to have a brain... there are rarely any stupid people as sadly often the case in Storys these days. Each character has their Motivations are relatable. Just an all around fantastic story. No idea why it isnt more popular yet. (I mean i can guess why... its not an over the top powerfantasy even though the main character is extremely steong for his age)
It has an interesting premise, and it was executed well. The world feels real and fleshed out, the characters actually have personalities and the story was going smoothly. Keyword, 'was'. It has been more than 2 years, man. Will you really drop this book? It is genuinely good.
this just bad mayby the author is new but the Grammer is horrendous, the pacing is jolting and the mc skills/character is inconsistent
I like the Novel..................................................................................................................
This novel is great and very interesting, the only flaw that I noticed is the inconsistency of events and entertainment in a more accurate sense, but in general this novel is an enjoyable experience for me. Why did such a great novel stop?
This is one of the good novel I had read till now but the main character doesn't behave like a person who was a great sinner he is just like a selfish and ruthless man with some knowledge about demon related stuff
The novel is a good 4 star novel but my only problem is that update rate is highly unstable as Author has good ideas but can't remain focused at all in one project which leads to slow pacing , highly unstable updates , plot holes and many other problems that may arise in future . If author returns his focus back on it and improves more then I would change my ratings. For newcomers I would say the novel is quite interesting and you would definitely like it.
I read up to the current non-privelege chapter (319). The story has a good potential, but the overall quality seems to be dropping. *---Spoiler---* Evan has the power to sacrifice his life (in form of lifeforce/years) to gain Power from the demons of his old world. He uses that power quite a lot and sacrificed over 600 years from his ~900 year life span. I mean sure its nice that he has a cheat which costs him greatly, but he uses it way to often for no or stupid reasons. For example he sacrificed 20 years for skipping 1 year of "apprenticeship". Unless there suddenly comes a miracle with that he can regain his lifeforce the MC kinda stupid. I am considering dropping this novel because of that reason. Overall the story has really great potential. The Characters are nicely designed, everone has his/her role, but unless the Author fixes that MC's behaviour to sacrifice pointless years, the quality will decrease sharply. (at least in my opinion)
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I've read 295 chapters. Initially I liked the story. MC is ruthless. After reading some chapters I started to see some discrepancies. Sure MC is sacrificing quite a few years of life and gaining some temporary boosts but how is he going to cover this loss of life years(I mean he mentioned that as ranking grows mage will receive new years of life. Other than this does MC has any template of how he is going to address this issue?). He said he wants to aim for the top of the world but in story I believe so far 4 star mage is only mentioned. I still wonder why did Marcel and Zak spent so much money on MC because there is no free lunch in the world. Is there is a concept of immortality in the novel? I might sound bickering but as a reader after some chapters i've felt like MC persona is becoming bland. He is going to fight higher level mages by sacrificing his life years.
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It might get better afterwards, but from what I have read, it is not good. Too many plot holes. Why couldn’t he use the same way as in his past life to get stronger? As in cultivation techniques or whatever. Why couldn’t he draw a simple magic circle when he was one if the best magicians in his past life? At the beginning I thought he would be more cold hearted. He would try to may be go back and have his revenge. But not once was this mentioned. He even becamed soft hearted. 🥱
I really enjoy this novel I finished up to the current chapter after starting last week. I noticed no new chapters which kind of sucks. I really hope the novel wasmy cancelled 🥲🥺 Author does an amazing job with his story.
Very good.........................................................................................................................................................
So far the story has impressed me, Im interested in some of the characters and hopefully we can see more of enni. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
For killing a king...he lost his life and became slave. Evan was on the top but later ended on bottom of food chain. As main protagonist he is calm, sometimes flustrated, but very decisive and smart. He is not OP from beginning and as reader we can follow his unrevealing process. One of the novel which isnt only about revenge and hateful enemies, it is about building relationahips and polishing your skills.
This time we came to the world, where magic is rare...Evan departed due his sin and became slave. Give up? Play by rules? Of course not! Evan was on top in the past life and even if he is on bottom of food chain..he will make it up with his knowledge and skills. Prepare for MC who is cold, smart and decisive.
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EvilMc no Romamce am so in 😫😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😑😑😑😑😑😑😑🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🤣🤣🤣😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
So Far So Good I Mean its Not a Bad Novel Considering The fact that a lot of novels in webnovel is pretty awful Always with harem this harem that Annoying characters Anyway the only thing i dont like about our mc is that he is a bit of a playboy well That conclusion comes from his words that he loves women
This is an absolute beauty, wonderfully written with a mystery element to it. Yo this deserves way more love. Keep it up champ don't drop the story keep it real long preferably.
Good ....................................................................................................................................................................................
good........................................................................................................................................
I liked this story. I hope the author will take into account the mistakes of his past history, and will not allow them in this one. .
I loooove to break ruless.... so the story is written nicely, but sometimes i feel odd with evans behavior... maybe it's only me. but overall its good and smoothly paced..
Wow. What a story! Such an intriguing plot, even if this is not my piece of cake. I love the author's style and enjoyed the novel so far. Keep up the good work and never stop believing! :D
Nice story with interesting and appealing start for the readers. Keep on updating new chapters to get a stable position. Best of luck for upcoming work.
Good plot, I enjoy reading the story. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] The story has a unique world and a fascinating plot. However, I can't say yet if the character is strong enough with its development. I will continue reading this.
Hello! Thanks everyone who reads my novel. This is a world full of mysteries, magic and injustice. This is a story about a willful and selfish person who wants to learn as much about magic as possible. I hope you will enjoy.
This story is so good. There are great descriptions and the main character left a deep impression. I could actually sympathise with him. And he seemed very courageous and very cool. Keep up with the good work author.
It is an all around amazing Story. one of the best i have read on this site. The World is extremely interseting and discribed in a very engaging way and so are all the battle scenes. The biggest strength of this novel though are the characters. Everyone has really interesting personalities and backstorys. And most importantly.... everyone seems to have a brain... there are rarely any stupid people as sadly often the case in Storys these days. Each character has their Motivations are relatable. Just an all around fantastic story. No idea why it isnt more popular yet. (I mean i can guess why... its not an over the top powerfantasy even though the main character is extremely steong for his age)
It has an interesting premise, and it was executed well. The world feels real and fleshed out, the characters actually have personalities and the story was going smoothly. Keyword, 'was'. It has been more than 2 years, man. Will you really drop this book? It is genuinely good.
this just bad mayby the author is new but the Grammer is horrendous, the pacing is jolting and the mc skills/character is inconsistent
I like the Novel..................................................................................................................
This novel is great and very interesting, the only flaw that I noticed is the inconsistency of events and entertainment in a more accurate sense, but in general this novel is an enjoyable experience for me. Why did such a great novel stop?
This is one of the good novel I had read till now but the main character doesn't behave like a person who was a great sinner he is just like a selfish and ruthless man with some knowledge about demon related stuff
The novel is a good 4 star novel but my only problem is that update rate is highly unstable as Author has good ideas but can't remain focused at all in one project which leads to slow pacing , highly unstable updates , plot holes and many other problems that may arise in future . If author returns his focus back on it and improves more then I would change my ratings. For newcomers I would say the novel is quite interesting and you would definitely like it.
I read up to the current non-privelege chapter (319). The story has a good potential, but the overall quality seems to be dropping. *---Spoiler---* Evan has the power to sacrifice his life (in form of lifeforce/years) to gain Power from the demons of his old world. He uses that power quite a lot and sacrificed over 600 years from his ~900 year life span. I mean sure its nice that he has a cheat which costs him greatly, but he uses it way to often for no or stupid reasons. For example he sacrificed 20 years for skipping 1 year of "apprenticeship". Unless there suddenly comes a miracle with that he can regain his lifeforce the MC kinda stupid. I am considering dropping this novel because of that reason. Overall the story has really great potential. The Characters are nicely designed, everone has his/her role, but unless the Author fixes that MC's behaviour to sacrifice pointless years, the quality will decrease sharply. (at least in my opinion)
ネタバレを明かす I've read 295 chapters. Initially I liked the story. MC is ruthless. After reading some chapters I started to see some discrepancies. Sure MC is sacrificing quite a few years of life and gaining some temporary boosts but how is he going to cover this loss of life years(I mean he mentioned that as ranking grows mage will receive new years of life. Other than this does MC has any template of how he is going to address this issue?). He said he wants to aim for the top of the world but in story I believe so far 4 star mage is only mentioned. I still wonder why did Marcel and Zak spent so much money on MC because there is no free lunch in the world. Is there is a concept of immortality in the novel? I might sound bickering but as a reader after some chapters i've felt like MC persona is becoming bland. He is going to fight higher level mages by sacrificing his life years.
ネタバレを明かす It might get better afterwards, but from what I have read, it is not good. Too many plot holes. Why couldn’t he use the same way as in his past life to get stronger? As in cultivation techniques or whatever. Why couldn’t he draw a simple magic circle when he was one if the best magicians in his past life? At the beginning I thought he would be more cold hearted. He would try to may be go back and have his revenge. But not once was this mentioned. He even becamed soft hearted. 🥱
I really enjoy this novel I finished up to the current chapter after starting last week. I noticed no new chapters which kind of sucks. I really hope the novel wasmy cancelled 🥲🥺 Author does an amazing job with his story.
Very good.........................................................................................................................................................
So far the story has impressed me, Im interested in some of the characters and hopefully we can see more of enni. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
For killing a king...he lost his life and became slave. Evan was on the top but later ended on bottom of food chain. As main protagonist he is calm, sometimes flustrated, but very decisive and smart. He is not OP from beginning and as reader we can follow his unrevealing process. One of the novel which isnt only about revenge and hateful enemies, it is about building relationahips and polishing your skills.
This time we came to the world, where magic is rare...Evan departed due his sin and became slave. Give up? Play by rules? Of course not! Evan was on top in the past life and even if he is on bottom of food chain..he will make it up with his knowledge and skills. Prepare for MC who is cold, smart and decisive.
Exp............................................................................................................................................................................................................
EvilMc no Romamce am so in 😫😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😑😑😑😑😑😑😑🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🤣🤣🤣😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
So Far So Good I Mean its Not a Bad Novel Considering The fact that a lot of novels in webnovel is pretty awful Always with harem this harem that Annoying characters Anyway the only thing i dont like about our mc is that he is a bit of a playboy well That conclusion comes from his words that he loves women
This is an absolute beauty, wonderfully written with a mystery element to it. Yo this deserves way more love. Keep it up champ don't drop the story keep it real long preferably.
Good ....................................................................................................................................................................................
good........................................................................................................................................
I liked this story. I hope the author will take into account the mistakes of his past history, and will not allow them in this one. .
I loooove to break ruless.... so the story is written nicely, but sometimes i feel odd with evans behavior... maybe it's only me. but overall its good and smoothly paced..
Wow. What a story! Such an intriguing plot, even if this is not my piece of cake. I love the author's style and enjoyed the novel so far. Keep up the good work and never stop believing! :D
Nice story with interesting and appealing start for the readers. Keep on updating new chapters to get a stable position. Best of luck for upcoming work.
Good plot, I enjoy reading the story. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] The story has a unique world and a fascinating plot. However, I can't say yet if the character is strong enough with its development. I will continue reading this.
Hello! Thanks everyone who reads my novel. This is a world full of mysteries, magic and injustice. This is a story about a willful and selfish person who wants to learn as much about magic as possible. I hope you will enjoy.