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作者: DaoistwgQxZL

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Everyone loves play games but, is there has been a time in any game where did you feel that you were truly wanted?
Where no matter what did you choose to do, did you feel the protagonist?
Even if the role you play is small, is there have been sometime when did you feel yourself?
Allan was such a person and this game will help him to discover things that he never knew, about the world and about himself.




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    DaoistwgQxZL

    It’s my novel, how do you think I’ll rate it? Yet I think my work is very good and I would be very happy people could know about it and enjoy it.

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    FalenSol

    Not great at reviews, but the story is great, i feel that it flows real well, and its such an enjoyaBle read. Feel it deserves five stars and i just hope it gets a solid endIng when its all oVer *hate it when stories are droped* the only bad thing *if u can even call it that* is that i cant binge it cause i wont stop reading It xd

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    amanda_nl21

    Hey Author, good day for writing! We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction).If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email amanda.ringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *). You might be our next top writer!

    3yr
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    DaoistZ5SX6U

    A very good story, with a excelent background world, funny moments and good story so far. The grammar can be improved but it is not that bad. Updated every day, and with a lot of story development. There is not only battles and level ups, in fact the main character do not really care about these things, he is fine with have fun. I like it a lot. I hope the author keeps writing the novel

    3yr
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    CatHam

    Overall 4.2 There were quite a few mistakes (mostly writing quality) though it doesnt really matter it makes me pause to read it a few more times to make sure im reading it right (for example: she instead of he) since sometimes i might read wrong or get confused

    2yr
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    Wyatt_Clegg_0103

    The world of idle online as well as the story does not follow any preset standards compared to other stories i have read so far the character development has been rather small in terms of backGround but that is wholly do to the length so far Im sure there will be more as time goes on. i am Also really enjoying the choices the author is having the main character decide as they go against the norm but aRe not blatently overpower. All in all a wonderful story keep up the hard work!

    3yr
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