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welp another fanfic with potential ruined by its own creator. cool unique ability but kind of confusing. mito is apparently some all knowing person that knows the future yet does nothing. mc is taller then tsunade just at 6 years old(im guessing author has a napoleon complex if he turned a 6 year old into a giant) has lots of info dumps. the guy who got isekaid was just a plot device so that the mc has future knowledge meaning that its not really a isekai, the transported guy who was 44 apparently lost in a ego battle against a baby. yeah when the author said he did a whole research in naruto i thought it might be good but nope. a total disappointment.
I realy like it, while i was thinking the auther was realy makeing mc exploit it all like a video game i remember the start of his new life came with a screen saying “game start”…. and it all made sense
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Pretty ridiculous how Mito is some omnipotent god in this fanfic because she knows literally everything that will happen in the plot....she even finds out that there is something wrong with the MC's soul (since he was reincarnated). The romance on the other side is kinda weird because Tsunade is a lot older than the MC yet she fairly quickly gets used to the fact that her lover is much younger than her. It is also pretty corny since the MC just cuddles with Tsunade constantly at one point which is uhh questionable to say the least. The MC's abusive mother part feels really forced because she hates him so much and tortured him a lot which just doesn't make a lot of sense even in a world like Naruto. It's not like it's bad, but there are definitely parts that need to be improved on.
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well sadly after the Uzio fall come and the fall of this FF !! forced plot and the way the author trying to not destroy the main timeline is just sad!! it start very good but sadly now is just plain bad!
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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5 Star 100 % For me best novel is the 1 i have no idea what happens next And boy ohh boy this one is good Be sure to add more people protective of mc Ty and GJ
Good Novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
Its a really good read but the story doesn't make any sense after a while... The situations that protagonist is going through feels forced and the natural flow things isn't there at all. Sometimes it feels as if things were done for only plot purposes but I am not the one to talk about that. Also, the amount of research this dude just put into the series is mind blowing. It is really amazing but it's more trouble than it's worth. Why? Because the researching is one of the best but writing quality is somehow not able to match that. Do not misunderstand when I say this. The writing quality is amazing, but the lack of effort in writing and so much effort in researching is painfully obvious that it feels a badly written novel when it isn't. It's DJ khaled: Suffering from Success at this point. I suppose it is a real good first attempt though. I suggest to stick to something natural a bit more and cut down on pouring in too much emotions in a scene and shrugging them off in next scene. protagonist is seriously suffering from a lot and seems a bit too un-chad for my taste I guess? (He gets one of the most violent women and gets a punch every now and then; I ain't spoiling it for you.) 7.6~8/10 would recommend.
I whole heartedly believe that this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions and if you disagree you're standards are way to high and I will warn you of the cruel world known as fanfiction.
interesting but if you are going for the ability that the manga showed (think it was save and load inn or something) the dude could basically put himself in a near death state load his previous self and have the training saved, kinda broken but then you gotta look at how he was training and training other people. anyway that's what I thought this was when I started and got disappointed when it wasn't that great concept and execution is excellent just not my cup of tea
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Hmm interesting,...... very very interesting. Suggestions from me (according to my opinion): This fanfic is suitable for reading in large quantities and not suitable for reading one chapter a day. Huhhhh I'm going to suffer so much because I'm so impatient.
Love the story so far. The beginning is sad but it got a lot better after. The grammar is good and the characters looks real.
This no el is really nice, there is some bs going on but come on anime is all about bs being real so meh i guess, do give it a try as author did a really dope job and the whole soncept of load & saVe is super interesting specially the things mc is doing
Great story; Unique power that you dont make the story only about how op the power is like many others do. good character development so far; I like that the mc isnt just an extra following along with the original plot and is their own person with actual personality.
Hyuga mc with great potential to be more than his predecessors. He has a good relationship with tsunade what can we want more[img=recommend]
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Good but too much info dump that it's boring rather than entertaining as it should be
welp another fanfic with potential ruined by its own creator. cool unique ability but kind of confusing. mito is apparently some all knowing person that knows the future yet does nothing. mc is taller then tsunade just at 6 years old(im guessing author has a napoleon complex if he turned a 6 year old into a giant) has lots of info dumps. the guy who got isekaid was just a plot device so that the mc has future knowledge meaning that its not really a isekai, the transported guy who was 44 apparently lost in a ego battle against a baby. yeah when the author said he did a whole research in naruto i thought it might be good but nope. a total disappointment.
I realy like it, while i was thinking the auther was realy makeing mc exploit it all like a video game i remember the start of his new life came with a screen saying “game start”…. and it all made sense
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Pretty ridiculous how Mito is some omnipotent god in this fanfic because she knows literally everything that will happen in the plot....she even finds out that there is something wrong with the MC's soul (since he was reincarnated). The romance on the other side is kinda weird because Tsunade is a lot older than the MC yet she fairly quickly gets used to the fact that her lover is much younger than her. It is also pretty corny since the MC just cuddles with Tsunade constantly at one point which is uhh questionable to say the least. The MC's abusive mother part feels really forced because she hates him so much and tortured him a lot which just doesn't make a lot of sense even in a world like Naruto. It's not like it's bad, but there are definitely parts that need to be improved on.
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well sadly after the Uzio fall come and the fall of this FF !! forced plot and the way the author trying to not destroy the main timeline is just sad!! it start very good but sadly now is just plain bad!
This is awesome i Love it This is awesome i Love it This is awesome i Love it This is awesome i Love it This is awesome i Love it This is awesome i Love it
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go
5 Star 100 % For me best novel is the 1 i have no idea what happens next And boy ohh boy this one is good Be sure to add more people protective of mc Ty and GJ
Good Novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
Its a really good read but the story doesn't make any sense after a while... The situations that protagonist is going through feels forced and the natural flow things isn't there at all. Sometimes it feels as if things were done for only plot purposes but I am not the one to talk about that. Also, the amount of research this dude just put into the series is mind blowing. It is really amazing but it's more trouble than it's worth. Why? Because the researching is one of the best but writing quality is somehow not able to match that. Do not misunderstand when I say this. The writing quality is amazing, but the lack of effort in writing and so much effort in researching is painfully obvious that it feels a badly written novel when it isn't. It's DJ khaled: Suffering from Success at this point. I suppose it is a real good first attempt though. I suggest to stick to something natural a bit more and cut down on pouring in too much emotions in a scene and shrugging them off in next scene. protagonist is seriously suffering from a lot and seems a bit too un-chad for my taste I guess? (He gets one of the most violent women and gets a punch every now and then; I ain't spoiling it for you.) 7.6~8/10 would recommend.
I whole heartedly believe that this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions and if you disagree you're standards are way to high and I will warn you of the cruel world known as fanfiction.
interesting but if you are going for the ability that the manga showed (think it was save and load inn or something) the dude could basically put himself in a near death state load his previous self and have the training saved, kinda broken but then you gotta look at how he was training and training other people. anyway that's what I thought this was when I started and got disappointed when it wasn't that great concept and execution is excellent just not my cup of tea
one of those i make everyone around me strong -_- --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
I Like It. .................................................................................................................................................
Hmm interesting,...... very very interesting. Suggestions from me (according to my opinion): This fanfic is suitable for reading in large quantities and not suitable for reading one chapter a day. Huhhhh I'm going to suffer so much because I'm so impatient.
Love the story so far. The beginning is sad but it got a lot better after. The grammar is good and the characters looks real.
This no el is really nice, there is some bs going on but come on anime is all about bs being real so meh i guess, do give it a try as author did a really dope job and the whole soncept of load & saVe is super interesting specially the things mc is doing
Great story; Unique power that you dont make the story only about how op the power is like many others do. good character development so far; I like that the mc isnt just an extra following along with the original plot and is their own person with actual personality.
Hyuga mc with great potential to be more than his predecessors. He has a good relationship with tsunade what can we want more[img=recommend]
Shameless self advertisement. I mean its a good idea i think. Hopefully i can execute. Let me know how i’m doing. Any comments and discussion would be appreciated.
Good but too much info dump that it's boring rather than entertaining as it should be