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Excellent book 10/10 all the way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Great story and character too so please don't drop the story .😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀☺☺😀😀
I've been reading this since it started uploading I just forgot to give it a 5 star rating 😝 .
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good job pls continue to write this book it's a good book for enjoying btw thanks for the book [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is definitely up there with my favorite stories. i would love if the author could update more frequently just so i could continue to read more, I've read it 3 times over but, I understand everyone has real life responsibilities. thank you author keep up the great work.
U have to develop this!This is fantastic. Although u can improve on your updating status. Anyways I love this. So all the best................
Amazing story, very funny and really engaging. The only thing missing is stability and more frequent updates , but other than that , one of the best and funniest stories I have ever read on webnovel
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Tbh this is very good, the author has done a great job. Just carry on and don't drop, I repeat don't drop. This is too valuable to abandon. So please. Story wise....I would say read it yourself and judge. Trust me you will love it. Some may don't, but doesn't matter it varies from each person's preferance.
Dude you have a very beautiful story go on please keep on going you have our support all the way, this is the first am giving anybody a full 5star rate be proud of your work👍 😁
Caramba , incrível história . Essa fanfiction é realmente divertida , a única coisa ruim é a falta dw atualizações . Não estou criticando , mas na minha opinião é a falta de atualizações um pouco mais frequentes é a causa da história não ser mais popular e conhecida entre os leitores !
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love it ....................................................................................................................................
The story is really interesting. The MC having only UPGRADE as an alien from ben10 makes it interesting.The rest of the aliens the MC has to scan the aliens from MCU to gain abilities.I suggest having an asgardian form but with divinity related to moon or night like moonknight/Khonshu or nightmask.There are too many stories with SI asgardian with sun powers so don't make him an asgardian with sun divinity. Don't stop writing ,this is a really interesting story. Waiting for more chapters.😁
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is good fun never give you up........,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .................
Dude....this is great!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the good work bro💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Honestly when i first saw this when i was just browsing through fanfics i honestly didn’t think much of it like ‘oh wow a ben ten alien that i highly doubt many fans of the show would pick PASS’ but some part of me was like “ just try it at least the idea feels fresh “ Long story short i tried it, it was good . really good Honestly one of the best reads I’ve had today. Please write more i love the way you wrote the MC
I like it very well written and creative idea and I am excited for incoming chapters please maintain your updating stability and don't drop it
this is gold I will wait for a new chapter I need more words to post this review so that is why I am typing this every long and time consuming review
long story short I can't read this because it is discontinued as a result I cannot read this (because to be honest here I don't see more annoyed of writers not completing their work I meant for quite out loud are you going to end a story you're going to end the store properly no pause until I meant for Queen out loud you can really edit the previous chapter at the ending and continuation to the story) (PS if you cannot read this because I have a bad time using speech to text so sorry.)
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Excellent book 10/10 all the way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Nice concept, Mr. Author. XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP .....................................................................................
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This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read.
Great story and character too so please don't drop the story .😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀😊😊😀😀☺☺😀😀
I've been reading this since it started uploading I just forgot to give it a 5 star rating 😝 .
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good job pls continue to write this book it's a good book for enjoying btw thanks for the book [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is definitely up there with my favorite stories. i would love if the author could update more frequently just so i could continue to read more, I've read it 3 times over but, I understand everyone has real life responsibilities. thank you author keep up the great work.
U have to develop this!This is fantastic. Although u can improve on your updating status. Anyways I love this. So all the best................
Amazing story, very funny and really engaging. The only thing missing is stability and more frequent updates , but other than that , one of the best and funniest stories I have ever read on webnovel
esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo esta buenisimo
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Tbh this is very good, the author has done a great job. Just carry on and don't drop, I repeat don't drop. This is too valuable to abandon. So please. Story wise....I would say read it yourself and judge. Trust me you will love it. Some may don't, but doesn't matter it varies from each person's preferance.
Dude you have a very beautiful story go on please keep on going you have our support all the way, this is the first am giving anybody a full 5star rate be proud of your work👍 😁
Caramba , incrível história . Essa fanfiction é realmente divertida , a única coisa ruim é a falta dw atualizações . Não estou criticando , mas na minha opinião é a falta de atualizações um pouco mais frequentes é a causa da história não ser mais popular e conhecida entre os leitores !
It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece.
love it ....................................................................................................................................
The story is really interesting. The MC having only UPGRADE as an alien from ben10 makes it interesting.The rest of the aliens the MC has to scan the aliens from MCU to gain abilities.I suggest having an asgardian form but with divinity related to moon or night like moonknight/Khonshu or nightmask.There are too many stories with SI asgardian with sun powers so don't make him an asgardian with sun divinity. Don't stop writing ,this is a really interesting story. Waiting for more chapters.😁
ネタバレを明かす is good fun never give you up........,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .........................,.............................. ................. . ..... .................
Dude....this is great!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the good work bro💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Honestly when i first saw this when i was just browsing through fanfics i honestly didn’t think much of it like ‘oh wow a ben ten alien that i highly doubt many fans of the show would pick PASS’ but some part of me was like “ just try it at least the idea feels fresh “ Long story short i tried it, it was good . really good Honestly one of the best reads I’ve had today. Please write more i love the way you wrote the MC
I like it very well written and creative idea and I am excited for incoming chapters please maintain your updating stability and don't drop it
this is gold I will wait for a new chapter I need more words to post this review so that is why I am typing this every long and time consuming review
long story short I can't read this because it is discontinued as a result I cannot read this (because to be honest here I don't see more annoyed of writers not completing their work I meant for quite out loud are you going to end a story you're going to end the store properly no pause until I meant for Queen out loud you can really edit the previous chapter at the ending and continuation to the story) (PS if you cannot read this because I have a bad time using speech to text so sorry.)